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50Cal. 02-09-09 09:18 AM

Track I Ghostwrote
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/def...m?bandID=919826


what do you think?

02-09-09 09:44 AM

first you gon' have 2 change ur artist cuz i cant listen to that shit

50Cal. 02-09-09 03:39 PM

its not fully mixed.my artist sounds better then anyone on the net and your a gay pussy jewish boy hater so go die.

Young Kidd (LM) 02-09-09 03:48 PM

^ thats a bold statement.

he sounds, i dunno if i like the flow as much though.

50Cal. 02-09-09 03:50 PM

the tack aint been up 24 hours yet and its already number 35 on soundclick.over 75% listeners have rated it 5 stars

Adam 02-09-09 03:58 PM

I didn't really like it, but it's not really my style.

Props though, I suppose.

Young Kidd (LM) 02-09-09 04:07 PM

lol your point is?
no hate, im just saying its a bold statement, and i'm not sure if i like the flow.

people also voted lil wayne the best rap album of the year.

Adam 02-09-09 04:08 PM

"Bad taste creates many more millionaires than good taste."

- Charles Bukowski

J.Roy 02-09-09 05:27 PM

It doesn't sound bad, but idk, like you said mix is horrible.

one way 02-09-09 05:45 PM

I dont know didn't sound that bad but the lyrics were the whackest thing on the track, you definitly aint a writer, sounds like every other basic generic industry rapper.

50Cal. 02-09-09 07:25 PM

^name one rapper who sounds like mine...............

J Summers 02-09-09 07:30 PM

ghostwrite for me fool...

one way 02-09-09 08:01 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
^name one rapper who sounds like mine...............



Im talking about the basic word patterns and the one sylabole rhymes and the dumb pointless message, and the nothing head turning, if your luckey and can find an image to milk off the teenyboppers with then all power to you, but your lyrics are nothing special and nothing that any random joe couldn't do. thats what I was saying.

_Talksic_ 02-09-09 08:03 PM

i thought it was actually dope.but fuck ghost writing..and that beat is hard as fuck

_Talksic_ 02-09-09 08:04 PM

whered u get that beat from?

47.29" of Zigs 02-10-09 12:40 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I

nigga that shit is garbage i heard kindergardners wit a better flow than that and your braggin about ghostwritin dat shit hahaha nigga.

seriously

nigga.

retire.

La Cosa Nostra 02-10-09 08:52 AM

not my style at all man...

but i could ghost write lyrics like that in my sleep...

La Cosa Nostra 02-10-09 08:57 AM

and how are you gonna say no other rapper sounds like the dude your writing for when hes in the booth yelling:

"I GET MONEY, I GET MONEY, I GET MONEY"

through a vocoder... cmon man... lets be serious here...

but either way.. nothing wrong with ghostwriting.. im gonna start ghostwriting for a chick singer and i want to be her manager so i can rake in off the stupid fucken music industry..

shes just got a cold n her throats gone all wack at the moment so were waiting...

50Cal. 02-10-09 10:32 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by _Talksic_
whered u get that beat from?

i made the beat.i use a motif to get the sounds how they are.

50Cal. 02-10-09 10:33 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Baphomet
and how are you gonna say no other rapper sounds like the dude your writing for when hes in the booth yelling:

"I GET MONEY, I GET MONEY, I GET MONEY"

through a vocoder... cmon man... lets be serious here...

but either way.. nothing wrong with ghostwriting.. im gonna start ghostwriting for a chick singer and i want to be her manager so i can rake in off the stupid fucken music industry..

shes just got a cold n her throats gone all wack at the moment so were waiting...

lol the singer is not my artists the rapper is:/

Jay Rose 02-10-09 11:45 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
its not fully mixed.my artist sounds better then anyone on the net and your a gay pussy jewish boy hater so go die.


i disagree... i like the song i just did drunk more than this song...
word
im sick when im drunk

http://www.zshare.net/audio/55360281dbd9ae88/

steve_swagger 02-10-09 11:49 AM

he speaks truth cali we both>you and your artists lol but nice attempt

Adam 02-10-09 11:51 AM

286 usually kills it.

Jay Rose 02-10-09 12:21 PM

^^why thank you!

50Cal. 02-10-09 01:07 PM

^he was talking about how you suck dick...........homo

Valerie 02-10-09 01:14 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
^he was talking about how you suck dick...........homo



ROFL@ you Beefin with herbs....wait a second you are a fucking herbie groupie though.

Eat a dick faggot. :thumbup:

LaTiNKiTTeN 02-10-09 01:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
lol the singer is not my artists the rapper is:/


the singer was better then the rapper and neither were good...........

Young Kidd (LM) 02-10-09 01:26 PM

^ fucking ouchhhh

Jay Rose 02-10-09 01:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Adam
286 usually kills it.

than...
Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
^he was talking about how you suck dick...........homo



sorry i dont understand the logic of how you got from point A to point B??

i must not be on enough drugs...i cant keep up anymore with this sites immature psycho babble

Valerie 02-10-09 01:37 PM

Rofl @ that shit.

Adam 02-10-09 02:33 PM

Actually I was talking about how every time I've heard 286 I've enjoyed it.

WhoAmI 02-10-09 04:07 PM

why explain yourself adam...everyone with a reasonable level of intelligence knew what you mean

50Cal. 02-10-09 09:40 PM

^its what you meant not what you mean.guess your not as intelligent as you thought

WhoAmI 02-10-09 10:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
^its what you meant not what you mean.guess your not as intelligent as you thought


you mean "you're" genius...

50Cal. 02-10-09 10:43 PM

^no it is your dickface

Adam 02-10-09 11:16 PM

No, you're wrong C.A.L.I.

The correct spelling is you're.

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
^its what you meant not what you mean.guess your not as intelligent as you thought


You're saying: I guess you are not as intelligent as you thought.

You are = You're.

Aren't you an author?

50Cal. 02-10-09 11:54 PM

either way can be used

Young Kidd (LM) 02-11-09 12:02 AM

^not technically...since your is possessive.
you're is the conjunction meaning you are.


and the meant/mean was right.

because it could be "What you mean" stating its present tense still and will apply.

but if you wanna be a dick and factor in its a forum and all that then it would be "meant" pertaining to when the post was made.

i think mean applies more because adam still means what he said.

GRAMMAR EDUCATION FTW!

Adam 02-11-09 01:01 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
either way can be used


No it can't.

You're going to give your editor a headache.

_Talksic_ 02-11-09 01:37 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
i made the beat.i use a motif to get the sounds how they are.

........dope beat


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