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Civil. 02-09-09 12:50 PM

The Inner Punch
 
lets get em...
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King Solo 02-09-09 01:54 PM

how the fuck you get #1 punches, ya style's weak.. i'll bomb it
fuckin wordplay is so corny, martians would leave crop circles on it

one way 02-09-09 02:16 PM

It aint martians that be making the patterns down in the fields......
its the people who have been walking circles around you for years

King Solo 02-09-09 02:23 PM

walking circles? no wonder text has been hitting some hard times
since one way goes one way, & its straight to flippin from the '02 archives

one way 02-09-09 02:47 PM

that punch was gay and had no relevence, you failed to come through
and even played lame lines in '02 are still better then any punch from you

King Solo 02-09-09 02:52 PM

i'm not really a fan of the 1-2, i'm one for throwin bars in a bunch
so lets go more than 20..
..like the time it took for you to throw that ass of a punch

one way 02-09-09 03:27 PM

When it comes to being sloppy, you got it far worse then the mud
but props........
from your post before, I wasn't sure you knew what a personal was

bobericc_lyrics 02-09-09 08:53 PM

I'll trap the mic, and sacrifice this asshole, cause I blast dorks
you'll be like this is the last straw!... and too bad its a tad short

King Solo 02-10-09 12:11 PM

i shud've swept you last week, that punch shows you never drop nice
shit if bob slayin, its coz his fruity ass is hugged up to 3 dudes racing on ice

bobericc_lyrics 02-10-09 08:19 PM

you mean bob sledding, idiot, and this fucking is murderation
I'll leave you cut, like that puma head does to your circulation

bobericc_lyrics 02-10-09 08:20 PM

and i meant to type hat.. lmao

one way 02-10-09 11:10 PM

That suffix doesn't fit with 'murder' can you show where its defined
Either your straight illiterate or you stuck it on there just to rhyme

Cola 02-11-09 01:08 AM

Ok, listen to this gay, cuz the words he spray are whacker than C.A.L.I.
N i agree with what your screen say, douche bag should just 'Fly E Weigh'

bobericc_lyrics 02-11-09 10:17 AM

I'm surprised you got where you are, since your mad dumb dawg
you come from around the way, one wanted you to get the fuck off!

King Solo 02-11-09 10:49 AM

^ yeah dude, its BOBSLEIGH.. illiterate fuck, i'll run through ya
but I will say your the shit.. since ya crib got upgraded to the sewer

Civil. 02-11-09 01:52 PM

^Whuts this got to do with that? Sewer rat! who that there? Gutter kid
Independent? dog, you still got a room in the back of ya MOTHAS CRIB

King Solo 02-11-09 08:09 PM

rofl @ THAT punch being the edited shit, retaliate to this you gay jew
matter fact lets cypher, n' see how far fake personals will take you

Civil. 02-11-09 11:03 PM

Fucka personal, you aignt that worth it hoe! this aignt about a verse or votes...
... its pretty bad when the original bars you dropped don't even turn out dope

Cola 02-11-09 11:06 PM

Shit bitch, you a small prick, you suck dick, it took that long just to drop that?
Plz drop quick, so we dont have to wait another 20 to find out you spit whack

Civil. 02-12-09 12:18 AM

^spit wack? Yeah, concepts like that. man that shits played as fuck.
seriously though dog up your vocabulary a bit, next time u delay a punch

Cola 02-12-09 12:24 AM

I beat ya bitches pussy Stubbs, so face facts, thats how i treat her
N stubb's aint talkin South Paw, when he using his meat beaters

one way 02-12-09 12:43 PM

I continue to run this, I'm the law and the rhyme god
I Had 4 TIP's, helping me put Coke dealer behind bars

King Solo 02-12-09 12:51 PM

You're full of confidence.. but you've been wack forever
So here's one more TIP for you, stop fucking writing altogether

Adam 02-12-09 01:15 PM

I'm shocked you're giving advice, I really didn't think it was your place,
'Cause the only time tips come out your mouth..
.................................................a re usually cumming on your face.

Adam 02-12-09 01:16 PM

they're* usually cumming on your face.


I'm the king of spelling errors. <-- a play on that won't be a good punch, just a heads up.

King Solo 02-12-09 01:22 PM

You can be the king, nobody cares about spelling regardless
Coz you dropped a cum on ya face punch, & that's what makes you garbage

one way 02-12-09 01:39 PM

please change the concept allready, think of something son
cause all your punches translate into, "your punch was dumb"

King Solo 02-12-09 01:57 PM

just as soon as you stopping flipping shit weak you herb gay
coz your punches translate into simple wording minus any kind of wordplay

one way 02-12-09 04:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by one way
please change the concept allready, think of something son
cause all your punches translate into, "your punch was really dumb"



^^ .

King Solo 02-12-09 07:20 PM

^ one way gets my vote for the most creative spark I've seen all week.

one way 02-12-09 07:35 PM

The most creative spark that he's saw all week?
That must be some of originals famouse critique

bobericc_lyrics 02-12-09 07:43 PM

what?

I got the spark that shows best, thinking your a known vet
the fuck you talking about kid?... you aint even a goat yet!

MegaTypezRaw 02-12-09 08:30 PM

Your lame an weak so blatantly I gave em a shove,
Have Boberics dome spinning like the record on the avy above!!

bobericc_lyrics 02-12-09 08:44 PM

fresh meat?

you aint spinning shit, looking at your bar, your a sorry bugger
I'm so much better than mega... you can fucking call me ultra

SnoCap 02-12-09 11:28 PM

he got the stagnant sickness, Bob better what his mouth like a dentist...
cuz like pregnant bitches on death row he cant stomach a sentence!!

Cola 02-12-09 11:31 PM

Fuck off my balls bro, only prison time you seen is on Fox Sno
Punches so old, i coulda sworn you bite em from that 70's show

SnoCap 02-12-09 11:35 PM

I got ya head vibin so just start relaxin B...
cuz ima professional thief. "takin it easy" comes naturally!!

Cola 02-12-09 11:37 PM

Only head's movin is from side to side, saying Sno, You a straight newbie
Tryin to worn b, fuck please, and i'll leave ya ass skippin if you mess wtih CD

SnoCap 02-12-09 11:39 PM

Mess wit CDs, I'm addressin kids with new lectures...
BUt crackin Cds is the only way you'll ever Break a record!!

Cola 02-12-09 11:41 PM

What a faggot, we aint talkin gay sex, stop with that garbage
Cuz we got Sno droppin his pants saying 'look at who the hardest'


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