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Mind Theory [vs] Mic Check
READ THE RULES!
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aiight lets do this
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Mic Check . . . 1, 2 . . . 1, 2 . . .
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i'll go
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battle vs mind theory (round 1) Fuck holding tight; attack with scolding strikes; ur lines contradict like ur current status on the Open Mic// Sharp spit's flowing spikes; I'm flipping ur card; like back in the days on the spokes of strolling bikes// Ur numbers getting tossed like rolling dice; cat couldn't be rocking mics performing with heavy metal themes// I had a dream; attacking petty teens with steady schemes pages from notepads aimed at ready teams// Ur rhyme's half-assed like heavy jeans;hearing faded screams; putting guns to gas; metal to petal means// Rhymes carved in glass are see through;heat missiles don't hide they just blast; 'n go seek you// My series dramatic; the pain delivered traumatic; pragmatic theories u lack it; connecting with dope lines like a pair of addicts// Have ur vision distorted as if u were staring at static; flows charismatic; kid's breathing twice as harder then frantic twin asthmatics// Only time ur rank will rise; is when RB decides to ban the non participants// I stand ground; kid I'm tired of ur monkey bars go change your name to playground// Stay down or get sleighed clown; this dog couldn't be on track if he was greyhound// I'm far from a merciful bully; purely spitting to hurt you truly; send you to the holy land prematurely// Unbelievable like fables; the decision making enables u to fold under pressure as the pain scolds; face won't dodge the curve landings// Striking fist attacks form a verve landing; lightning kicks vastly swarm; I serve branding mc's; there's no feeling to your flow like clogged nerve endings// Plus your ovations don't deserve standing; like performing in front of a crowd with wheel chairs// like a bum with no-cares, and a heater pointed blank at ya head, you still say ya prayers// Face impact aligned with steel stairs; u winning is like trying to feel air; blazing scripts; when it comes to skin; I peel layers// I'm spitting; splitting spleen stands; n slitting skin strands; as u sit in slings; n casts// I'm skimming scripts n sinking ships; sending silent screams as ur mom sings at mass// U couldn't make a melody mixing strings n bass, that don't mean fishing dumb-ass// Originality ur rap lacks; brought an applaud-o-meter to this; let's measure gun claps// Around u I run laps; ur a square mc; endlessly departing scripts and parting lids// Hit u while unguarded bitch; have u look dumbfound like locating lost retarded kids// Not the one to be starting this but I'm sparring with; flow engulfing sinking ships// This bone-head supposed to come hard? He reverts that process like shrinking dicks// lol.....aiight finish this wack ass off: Mic checks checkin a chin let it begin, goin to win// Your takin more body shots than people playin drinkin games with gin// Standin a chance against check? safe and sound?// Call this battle the final...so step off the mound rocket cause this yer last round// good luck |
Yo, yo, uh yi-yi-yo . . . yo, yo, yo, yo, yo, uh yi-yi-yo . . . chicka chicka . . . yo . . . 1, 2 . . . 1, 2 . . .
:confused:^^^^Are you serious . . .^^^^:confused: Yo kid, are you that wack, you think that whining diss will scare me??/ Looks like Mother Goose done bought a fucking rhyming dictionary// You claim you're hot, but I'll make your heat as cool as Artic cold/ Since your punchlines dont exist, you try to fool us with your flow// Hit the Wackness Emergency Center, you need help on assembling similes/ And when this battles closed, you'll remember me like a memory// If you wanna race in this river of flow, I'll make you row-ho (Rojo) like Jose/ My verse will cut ya lines, like when passings allowed on roadways// I'll fix ya mind frame, like an intellectual car shop/ I crush these toaster (gun) toting emcees everytime that I pop tarts// You wanna hit me with your flow, well Ima smack you with the same/ so you get scared as soon I perform the action of your name// Your wordplay really blows, just like a potent elixir/ I spit Ludacris rhymes so they throw bo's that will hit ya// Your verse has too much filler, like the commercials in pictures (movies)/ One half's aight, the other belongs in Poetic Scriptures// Ya verse sounds like it was keyed, by retarded piano teachers/ and ya rhymes were never hot, so I don't bother with heatseekers// You say ya skill's high like helium, so I gotta assume its lighter/ Cause I'm throwin up more verses than verbal bulimic biters// I'll prove you're pussy when my lines rob you of your panties/ then I'll expose your true essense, like J-Lo's body at the Grammys// My words are beating you Down, like I'm seizing the South, I'll spit verses on your toothbrush, now I really got my REACH in your mouth// I'm filled with spit like my throat hurts, so I gotta be sick/ You verse was wack (whacked), like the actions of gangs in mafia flicks// Yo Skillz, this cat is garbage, yo who am I gonna fight next??/ This is a text battle dummy not audio, fuck a Mic Check.// :cool: . . . sizzle . . . :cool: Good Battle Mic Check . . . uppin . . . explained votes please . . . |
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vote goes to mind theory
had harder punches quote Ya verse sounds like it was keyed, by retarded piano teachers/ and ya rhymes were never hot, so I don't bother with heatseekers// You say ya skill's high like helium, so I gotta assume its lighter/ Cause I'm throwin up more verses than verbal bulimic biters// I'll prove you're pussy when my lines rob you of your panties that was good liked that ripped the other cat also i think ur flow was better than mic chek he went off rhyme a few times here's an example Have ur vision distorted as if u were staring at static; flows charismatic; kid's breathing twice as harder then frantic twin asthmatics// Only time ur rank will rise; is when RB decides to ban the non participants// I stand ground; kid I'm tired of ur monkey bars go change your name to playground that kinda killed the flow up to that point but the rest was good especially ur vocab which i thought was better than mind theories overall a tight battle but mind theory edged it with flow and punches |
Mic Check:
this is the only part of your verse I like at all "I stand ground; kid I'm tired of ur monkey bars go change your name to playground// Stay down or get sleighed clown; this dog couldn't be on track if he was greyhound// I'm far from a merciful bully; purely spitting to hurt you truly; send you to the holy land prematurely//" Mind Theory: This line right here really made me say OH SHIT.........other than that ya whole verse was a killer... "Yo Skillz, this cat is garbage, yo who am I gonna fight next??/ This is a text battle dummy not audio, fuck a Mic Check.//" Mic Check, your verse didn't really have many punches in it, but some nice sounding multi' were abundant..... Mind Theory, i was really feelin evey line, along with good flow... Good battle Props to both.... Vote: Mind Theory |
hmmmm wow, what a battle.
dunno who to vote for......hmmmmm......realy cant give examples but i think..... vote: MiC ChEcK thought it was betta, no hate but that was tight mind theory. |
Get your Wackass outta here . . . you're not in the league, you have 3 posts, and your vote wasn't explained at all . . . your vote does NOT count . . . adios . . .
. . . 2-0 me . . . uppin . . . . . . and everyone else that voted, thanks for taking the time to vote and give good feedback . . . |
yo this battle was tight, i liked mic checks lines, very hot.
vote: mic check |
yo dawg, cant take a vote away, jus cause he dumb.
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and who tha hell r u thaone ?
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guys dont vote on whos u liked !, vote on style and class.
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unless Skillz says other wise, its 2-2 tie, uppin for more.
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yeh right. that vote by The ONe was his first post ever on this site. he didnt explain at all. The voters have to be in the league and they have to leave at least 2 quotes in explanation . . .
Skillz::: "Voting Process: -No Dickriding What So Ever, If Found You Are DQ`d And Banned From The League For 1 Week. -Crew Votes Are Allowed As Long As They Are Explained, And Aren`t Suspected Of Dickriding. -ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED THOUROUGHLY! With At Least 2 Quotes. Votes Will Not Be Counted If Not. -Voting Ends At End Of Week, No KO`s or First To 5." 2-0 me, uppin . . . . . . I'm not blaming you . . . .................| .................| .................| ................\/ |
ah, well dont blame me dawg, i didnt do it...i dont even know these cats.
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yo mind go to my profile, i got my site workin again, and listen to my songs, jus got done with 'I HATE'
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/chincheckmusic.htm |
VOTE: Mind Theory...
the first 4 lines... won the battle... point blank... Mic had no real punches... and I need help with punches..? Oh wee..! Yo... Good job regardless... but uh... yea... you see the vote... |
hate vote.....dont count !
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3-0 my lead . . . nowhere does he say anything that resembles a hate vote anywhere in his reply . . .
all he said is u dont have punches everyone else said the same thing . . . |
Am i allowed to vote if i wasnt signed in for the week...if so
Vote = Mind Theory Obvious reasons....my quote for Mind Theory is his whole verse Mic Check quote is none im sorry your verse had nothin that even resembled ill...Theory had every thing u said beat so learn some punches hold ya head up and come hard next battle Vote = Theory Peace |
Aight 4-0 uppin. Yo Skillz, get in here and officialize which votes count and which ones don't . . . theres too much confusion goin on in here . . .
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omg he didnt sign in, doubt post's matta......
4-2, quit sayin the score that u wanted. |
Yo Mind... let me handle this dunny...
Mic-E Mic-E Mic-E... A hate vote..? Yea right junior mint... First of all... I said what everyone else said... A hate vote would have been if you both had close... or equal verses... This here is not the case... Second of all... I didn't quote either verse cause... I would have quoted Mind's first 4 bars... (as previously stated...) cause... IT KILLED THE BATTLE... he did NOT have to post any more after that... Kinda sad really... 4 bars beat your entire verse... hum... Third of all... YOU DIDN'T HAVE ONE PUNCHLINE... so... what would I quote... The hottest thing you did in this battle was check in... Now let me explain the art of battling... PUNCHES WIN..! MULTIS ARE CUTE FOR GIRLS..! COUNT MY VOTE OR NOT... YOU STILL LOSE..! Let the truth be known... counted or not... Avalon... |
fuck it, i dont care....cant let this shit get to me, always next week......hope u and me meet in the next week's avalon.
i promise you, u wont see the light of victory again. |
By the Way i saw about 3 votes unexplained there, without quotes.
Vote=Mind Theory he came alot harder and much better flow Fave Mind theory line:- "Hit the Wackness Emergency Center, you need help on assembling similes/" ^ ^ ^ This was a good choice of words and hit the nail on the head. Mic Check your rhyme was boring and had no meaning to it, you did have a few good lines in there i got to give you that but it still wasn't up to the standards i've seen of you (ELEVATE) Mic Check Fav Line:- "Plus your ovations don't deserve standing; like performing in front of a crowd with wheel chairs//" ^ ^ ^ This line was the only one i could see with good flow in it... Vote= Mind Theory |
5-2 mind theory wins.....
good job mind theory, hope to do it again sometime. skillz my record in the league is 0-1..... dont forget mind theory 1-0..... peace |
^^^did u even read the rules man...its voting till end of week no KO or 5 vote win
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Vote: Mind Theory
He just had an all round better verse.... had some clever punches Mic check didnt really have anything for me to talk about in this battle.... had multies but hardly any punches |
Mic Check... we can do it... RIGHT NOW...
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set it up and ill be glad to whip yo ass.
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im so confident ill set it up, and spit first.
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uppin . . .
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im votin for Mind Theory he had harder punches n it was a better flow
Mind Theory Yo kid, are you that wack, you think that whining diss will scare me??/ Looks like Mother Goose done bought a fucking rhyming dictionary// Yo Skillz, this cat is garbage, yo who am I gonna fight next??/ This is a text battle dummy not audio, fuck a Mic Check.// THIS WAS THE LINE THAT KILLED HIM Mic Check I stand ground; kid I'm tired of ur monkey bars go change your name to playground// Stay down or get sleighed clown; this dog couldn't be on track if he was greyhound// I'm far from a merciful bully; purely spitting to hurt you truly; send you to the holy land prematurely// Unbelievable like fables; the decision making enables u to fold under pressure as the pain scolds; face won't dodge the curve landings// vote- Mind Theory |
Yo this not a free post i fucked up with ma vote.(I was confused)
PEACE |
hehe thanks . . . up^^^^^^^^
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Vote=Mind theory
"My verse will cut ya lines, like when passings allowed on roadways// I'll fix ya mind frame, like an intellectual car shop/" This is an example of just tha better use of mets and similies that i feel won it for Mind theory. PEACE |
thanks . . . i lost count of all the votes . . . I'm sure the mods will add em up . . . uppin . . .
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