Jay Jay vs. 1 N Gone
 

10 to 15 lines
and don't take a long time to spit
you drop first dog!!!

um.....u challenged u drop dont play games u know ya shit is all written out n e way

Since I challenged you, I make the rules punk bitch. Now spit first so I can choke slam you with these poetic genius lines.

by the way, I have more rules
5 votes win
3-0 KO
good luck chump

YA and no crew votes eitha
thats ones from me

fuck it lemme get dis shit offa wit..........




ima not here to play games wit dis 'rb' no name
yo ima pull out my 'verbal' A.k. n take aim.......//
at u bitch sit down and takes notes and getta clue bitch
u beatin me is like a gay dude makin a noise when he number '2's bitch//
ya too 'wide' open all tha time like 7-11
ya on 'line' hopin for a piece of my 'bacon' but ho quit 'beggin'//
like a 'k-9' sniffin' in tha up tha wrong ass this time
watch me lift up my leg and 'release tha beast' all ova ya hairline//
ima stop play time im fixin to pull a 'jack tha rippa'
pull out my verbal 'claw' aim 4 ya chest and make a 'zippa'//
J-squared thinks im scared? ya right look i gotya 'insnaired"
in my mighty 'grip' like nick cannon ima flip-drop n beat u like a 'snare' 'stick'//
hes some advice for u get off ya ass stop molestin ya dick
take a trip to s.trenton find out real hip hop isnt a decision on tv bewteen 2 channels ya 'flip'
thats 'BET' and 'mtv'
jay-jay im a african butt neked in tha dark u cant 'see me'
even if he had bifocals and 'beedy ass eyes' like 'jermaine dupri'//

whoa

back to basics jay 'dub's skills are 'carbon' copied like 'fake' tits'
u makin it in hip hop is like foot locker bringn' back 'asics'//
look kid, my rhymes stay phat like 'j-lo's ass ( got damn)
u couldnt 'stick' to my 'scrip' wit wet spandex and 'molass-ass'//

(i dont think he gets it)


ima end this quick homey it might take a while for u too 'clean dis bite'
i jus took 'jay-jay's 'Goodtimes' scroll up bitch my flo was 'DYNOMITE!!'

oh and dont vote 4 yaself either thats some desperate shit if ya do ya feel me let tha ppl decide

i know dis ho did not sign off

u got it be 4 kid shows grl

firestarter.......................wat????

got damn this bitch is so NOT online

uppin^^^^ good god man would u fuuuuckin post

geez man u must be tryin' reeeeeaally hard
shit maybe i shoulda took my time

1 N Gone's run and gone again,
with his tale between his legs and I'm on again,
I went to read his bio, he's talkin' about savin' the world,
while I'm shavin' his girls beaver, hopin' he don't waste his referrals neither,
cuz here he goes again uppin' for votes
while I'm gettin' high and up in the smoke, spendin' chips, and fuckin' in boats,
leavin' my lyrics stuck in the throat,
of this faggot ass fuckin' wanna be me,
ya battle on the net, but in front of me you're a nothin' G,
nada, don't even bother, cryin' "no mas" bitch ya better holla,
louder than ja rule, while I do what I do,
and just let me remind you,
next time don't spit this written shit,
I'm gettin' sick of it ya fuckin' knit wit,
dam you don't know when to quit.

A word of advice fo ya playa: "Ya better bring more than 1 N Gone, or ya might just live up to ya name kid. And dam, quit spittin' written, scripted shit. This is textual freestyle. If ya can't fuck with that then ya best take ya ass."

"Also, ya broke the rules kid. This battle was only supposed to be 10 to 15 lines. Refer to the rules at the top and you might find this information. You didn't follow the rules, and you still won't win. It sucks to be you, doesn't it."

oh shut tha fuck up u fuckin pussy i dropped my shit immediately after this thread started ALLL freestyle kid
watever

VOTES!!!

u faggot u broke tha rules u voted for urself didnt i tell u not to do that

DESPERATE watch u catch another L bitch

it's easier to drop ya shit immediately if you're writing it while lookin' at a pad of paper that it's already written on do you think I'm fuckin' stupid dude I'm old enough to be ya daddy

You cheated by spittin' written shit and by writing twice the number of lines that was ageed upon in the initial rules. I figured the least I could do is give myself a vote. Now go and up for your votes ya fuckin' cheater. Who's the pussy now bitch?

u still are cuz im not gonna vote on mine and still win
hahha
hahahahha
n e real mc can tell that mines so not written

Read the lil message I left for you on the battle you just visited to try and get votes. Sneaky bitch.

UPPIN^^^^^VOTES

Ya you're not going to give yourself a vote, but instead ya go to other battles to get your boys to vote for you.

u are a dummmmbasss
im tryin to get ppl to vote on tha battle not jus me
if u were smart u would do tha same thing that is if u were confident u were gonna win


........u havent been here long have u?

I don't need to up for votes. I'm that confident I'm going to win.

......i know u did NOT jus vote for urself again
u know tha mods can see that shit and it aint gonna work
i cant believe im in tha presence of such a PUSSY ass bitch

^^^^^ uppin votes

yo i got 1-N-Gone yo hit that go to mine vs thabest

1-N-Gone got my vote chill

1-0 im up

them 2 unexplained votes dont count playa

UPPIN

vote:drum role please:goes to jay jay

yo..what the fuck is this..us the pm if u guys and gonna fuck off each other..haha.. it was interesting though...- jay jay: fuck them rules just battle,,, so what if he went over 15 lines?

anyways.. my vote foes for 1 N Gone.. better punches, disses, creativity..

"ima not here to play games wit dis 'rb' no name
yo ima pull out my 'verbal' A.k. n take aim.......//""
that was tight dawg

peace

t-stars bullshit dont count if u want it too better explain
2-0 im up

nvm u know wat u can have it 2-1 im up

wtf?? how can the poll be 4-1 jayjay..if not even 4 people have voted up in this shit...
1NGone is up...

uppin more votes holla

^^^^^^^^uppin votes

VOTES!!!

ayo I admit 1N Gone started out a lil shakey but middle wayz he picked it up with some good wordplay... punches hit iight as well

jay jay work on ya disses man, those were really mediocre, just to simple, add some spark!!

vote 1n gone

3-1 im up

my vote goes to 1 N Gone...
Better punches...
made me laugh more...
vote=1 N Gone

Fiori