Ill-Mental vs 13th Disciple
 

you spit first
15 - 20 lines
first to 3 votes
3 - 0 = KO
no crew/hater/dick ryder votes

ur up dawg

How bOut 10-15Max and We Both Spit RIght Now.......That Way we'll Be Keystylin'......Kinda Like Freestylin.....bet?

i always to keystyles 15 - 20 lines, how about 10 - 20 lines

AIiGht Whateva.....>STart Spittin Duk....I'm Just Gonna Go Bout 12 Or Sumthin'.....I'm Tired ........I'm DRoppin Now....Don't Wait For Mine

**13th YAwns.......turns in.........wait a minute.......ThereS Always Time For AnoTher Ass Beatin........Yo....yO.....Yo....**


I ScAnNed Ur PaSt BaTTLes And NoticEd U Got JokeS
BuT U ShOuldA NaMed UrseLf 'LOcHneSs' Cuz ur Style Is A HOax
After My Flow U Can RelAte 2 8milE For The Way That U Choke
Put In Ur 'Two CEnts' And I'll Leave U LyrICally Broke

I'M On VeRbal AcId And U gOt CaUGht OrAllY NappIn
I Got The BrEaKfaSt Of ChamPs And I'm CrUnchin This CaPtain
AnOTha ViCtim OF PimP FesT..................XtReMe SlaPpIn

Ur RhyThm Is DEad IT NeedS a 'JuMp Off' Like Lil' KiM
RePlacin Ur LightS Cuz Ur ShiNin' Is LoOkIn Dim
ClicK It Cut It PAstE It Add TweNty Three To My Win
U tHOugHt U Had It BUt LiKe HoMe ImPRoveMent I
dOn't ThiNk So TiM

WE'll Call This ChaLLenGe 'DeSeRt StORm' BuT THis D.J
Doesnt HaVe A ClUe/ComPaRe UR VerSes To A LatE
EleCTric BilL...................PAst Due

LiKe A CrEdIt CarD REPeateDly Used Ur OverExcEEdin ur LimiT
CHarge THis VicTory On MY AccOunt Cuz U sPittIn The Same GimmicKs/Ur StYle REmindS Me OF A Movie............I tHinK
ITs Called 'MimIcs'


.**Good BAttLe.....I"m tURnin In.......

hey 13, i also scanned your style\\
and in every single battle, you got a reference to 8mile\\
you got over 600 posts so you call yourself a vet\\
you borrowed too much from the lyric dealer, and now you is in debt\\
you gots alot of wins, how much? wow! 22!\\
well i looked up every single one, and each time your opponent was YOU\\
why you gotta take this serious an act like you got no time\\
its alot different in real life, this is only online\\
the only thing that needs ta "jump off" is you off my dick\\
because ur homosexual acts make me fuckin sick\\
well today is friday and its not lucky just like ur number (13)\\
you dont even know im lyricaly whoopin ur ass, because u in a slumber\\
the only cut'n and pastin for you will be to add another loss\\
i call my wins a "touchdown", cause i catch em like randy moss\\
i can hear you spittin, ..........but it aint comin from your lips\\
now that i listen closer..... its from in between ur hips!\\
u got over 600 posts, and you only been here a month\\
i smell somethin fishy, and i think it might be ur kunt!\\

uppin for some votes here

uppin people

illmental got my vote. no hate tho... they was both good. It mighta been different if 13 spit last. Nice battle yall

1 - 0 uppin here

you ill u didnt post your vote on my battle dog

come on people quit sleepin on this, votes plz! uppin here

this battle was str8 i got no time for real in depth break downs


IL-MENTAL= nice flow here and there fell off at parts pretty decent disses punches was ehhh wordplay needs work 5.8/10




13- had lil more battle stlye to his disses was lil more better punches was ehh ight, wordplay was there and flow was coo all in all 6.0/10






vote- 13

good vesre tho
~1

ok 1 - 1 uppin here for more votes

uppin

yo Ill mental... i dont know man......13th was good....but uh......

vote = illmental, but i think if 13th went last he would of won.... good shit fo the 13th... that nigga got skills too.... good battle....

uppin fo votes... peep my shit! i did yours!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7586#post387586

ok 2-1 still uppin here

THats GarBage ILl.........WE sUppoSe to Spit The Same tIme But U WaiteD For Me So U cOUld FeEd OFf My liNes.........If That's WHAt U goTTa do To Try To gET A Win so Be it

uppin, thats a battle dawg

vOTE: DRUM ROLE PLEASE: 13TH DISCIPLE

WON FOR BETTER PUNCHES

ill-mental got's my vote that was some hot shit!

---------VOTE ON MY BATTLES!_______________

close battle but thats 3 -2 my favor. i believe that a win for me cause we agreed to first to 3. good battle 13

those poll votes dont count. NONE of them were explained but 2

U tHinK u Won DoNt U....FUnnY FUnnY LIttLE GirL

we'll see

LoOk At The POllS hERb....DaMn

yo both were ok, but i liked i'lls a little better. i liked this

"i can hear you spittin, ..........but it aint comin from your lips\\
now that i listen closer..... its from in between ur hips!\\
u got over 600 posts, and you only been here a month\\
i smell somethin fishy, and i think it might be ur kunt!\\ "

had me LMAO

vote = ill mental

oh yea, 13th - dont bitch so much, youi sound like a little girl

yo ill, i wanna battle you, set it up, i dont know how

RigHt......4 PostS And Votin....CaN I pLEase Get Some REal EmCEes To VotE On This

fuck you, just cause i have only 4 posts dont mean i aint a real emcee. what makes you a "real emcee"? cause you fuckin battle online? get some balls faggot and do it in real life

^^^LMAO he got ya ass there 13th. well it looks like it is 4-2 still my favor

uppin for some more poll votes on this biyatch

no. SilLy BoY....4-3 MY fAvoR.......

LOL OK WHATEVER YOU SAY, BUT THE POLLS DONT COUNT CAUSE NONE OF THEM WERE FUCKIN EXPLAINED. AND THERE IS NO VOTING FOR YOURSELF YOU FUCKIN QUEER

yo ill mental fuked that shit up ...u both are good as fuk but the last wins cus he had more shit against 13th.......its always easier goin 2nd.....but i still give it to ya

ok 5 - 2 now 13th, still uppin

uppin

this was a bad battle ill better disses nice flow good structure

Vote=ill

Yo at the end when you said, it aint comin from your lips, you shoulda made a Milli Vanilli reference aight, dope shit, 13 I here the same shit from you all the time aight.

Vote= Ill-Mental

vocab: 13
word play: 13
flow: Ill
punches: 13
metas: 13

Vote: 13th disciple