B-dub vs. Rise
 

I'll go first, gimmie a min I gotta finish a little papar.

Rules:
max 30 lines

Dam
30 lines....thats a lot
iight i'll start keying now

Its on baby, time to show peeps to never underestimate a newbie.

you aint bold B...even if your words was BOLDED::
your ryme are like GrandPa farts,No one wants to here that Old Sh*t::
Leave you folded,because im On-top-of-my-Reighn::
but even if you was Mr.Monopoly, you wouldnt be On-top-of-your-Game::
I'm hot like a flame, and you get bent like wrist::
your punches wouldnt connect, if them shits was-writ-like-this::
kiss my dick..to spit Hard, you fucked bra, like incess::
sorry princess, you could be a button pusher, and still wouldnt in press::
this shit is senceless, yet I make more sents than toll booths::
your a Biter, I've seen you on more bites then Gold tooths::
could of sworn I told you, you was gonna get your raps rocked::
and you couldnt be big if your keyboard was stuck on CAPLOCK::

I bet by now your thinking this newbie is hot..well your right..lol..shall we continue.

battling dub is familar, I was a cereal maker,so I'm use to flakes::
Thats why I took that intermission to crack his bones,I thought bdub could use a break::
dub copy and paste this for future sake::
so when you call child services, you can show them the beatings you use to take::

leave dub "Light-Skinned" like a rave with hannibal::
cause when I said I wanted a vet dub, I aint mean a dam fool, that plays with animals::

and when it come to skill, fuck a dub, I'll show you eleven ways::
to make Bdub's rymes, look more week, than 7 days::
he so Dum, I said "Holly Roller", and he thought it was games his reverend plays::
if he was OsamaBinLaden with a waterpistol, he still wouldnt be made for terror sprays::

Remeber this only a keystyle...yes I said Keystyle..its not over yet.

Dam you more done, than a whores gums::
even if you made liquor for a living, no one would like your Four-Rums(forums)::

and you wouldnt spit sick shit if you made out with whores ass::
and your just beginning, but your threads are allready played out like Jordashe::

Can somebody plz help this man?..nope nobody can help you now B.

Its like I killed spider man, the way I handle webbers::
this is my first battle, but now theres a 1, on the right side of your battle record

Bwhahahahahahah......that was a little to easy

thanks for the warm welcome to RB..herb

vote on my shit and ill vote on yalls after he drops

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42360

Ok, lets see what you got:

I've got the words to wage war, Rise rest assured
You ain't leaving here alive, hope your life is insured
You don't wanna know what I'm capable of, you little thug
Put you on some life support shit then pull I'll out the plug.
Or I'll fill you body with the shottie shells, send you to hell,
Then resurect you and blast your ass as a final farewell.
You posted on "Bitch Slapped" asking who wants to spit a verse
But you scared of me so you cry when I tell you to go first,
So here, I'm up first, you happy now son?
No - you're nervous like a doughnut sitting in front of Big Pun.
I'm crazy,
I'm the type of guy who'll eat Italian sausage and a bran muffin
Then sneak in your house when you out sucking dick for nothing.
Go in your bathroom shut the windows, throw out your scented potpourri
Drop the nastiest duece you ever smelled, pull up my pants then fucking flee
Nah.. I'm playing, but don't think you're off the hook
See I'm just joking around and your stupid ass is shook!

You can call me SARS playa cuz I'm sick like that
Highly skilled in the ancient art of verbal combat
I'll simplify this for you and I think you'll agree
Instead of battling here you should try to pass your GED!
You just a dumb rapper, I get your ass can't even read?
You've got six brain cells left from smoking lead with your weed
But I got brain like NASA, I get head like a hat
Now your girls jaw got broke cuz my dick is so fat.
ok, I've said enough, I better give you a break
You sure you want to respond? That might be making a mistake
Oh, I got one more thing to tell you, this might break your heart
Yo' mamm didn't birth you, she bought the "whack MC kit" at K-mart.

Peace.

Nice Try
Up for votes

ha, damn rise what happened to you making me post first? Well I guess those lines in my spit don't really apply anymore.....

Oh, and I voted on your shit Irr, so tell me what you think

peace

oh man this was some sick shit on both of your parts....... let break it down:

wordplay: Rise
flow: B-dub
punches:Rise
style: B-dub
technique: Ri..... no wait B-.....damn close.............but imma have to go with b-dub

vote=b dub

^^^Ummm how did I get 3 out of 5 and still lose?...lol
O well up for votes

vote rise felt his word play and punches more

holla at my battle some one please

Dam this must be the best newbie battle ever,
punches:Rise
multis:rise
metas:Rise
flow:dub
technique:rise

this is a obvious win

vote=Rise
good shit

2-1 me up

Actually, I think my other battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42720
was better than this one. Go read it and vote!

peace

yo lilsmokey you forgot to poll vote...UP FOR VOTES AND POLL VOTES

bump

Votes needed

damn that shit was hott
b-dub u played to much but ya punches were real nice.

rise caught my attention though wit tha way his shit kinda was 'rising' in levels as he spit and he finished u nicely

fuuuuck i dunno

he so Dum, I said "Holly Roller", and he thought it was games his reverend plays::
if he was OsamaBinLaden with a waterpistol, he still wouldnt be made for terror sprays::

^^^hottest line from b-dub

So here, I'm up first, you happy now son?
No - you're nervous like a doughnut sitting in front of Big Pun.

^^^thats funny shit
unfortunately for rise its a played out line

ima have to go wit b-dub steady flow of punches but dont get too cocky kid

rise good shit ya style is nice but jus a small lack of strong wordplay/punch combinations

vote b-dub

Rise took this

loved the wordplay and punches


and note to b-dub... SARS lines are overplayed somethin fierce

check my rbbl battle vs waur

and peep
vs vertex
vs killa t
vs skilo

ha, I figured SARS might be over done, but I'm new here so I wasn't sure....

yeah... good drop though

be sure to peep my shit

Both fukin nice wish my first battle got this much cred ( and as skilled )., anywayz both were awwesome but id haf 2 give it 2 B-dub
chek out muh first battle castle00 vs mcsks2003
make sure ya vote l8rz

how could someone vote for the otha guy at all his verse was wacker then ICP rhymes.

vote = Rise

and upping for poll votes

AIYO THIS BATTLE WAS ALL ON ONE SIDE OF THE TABLE
RISE HAD THIS SHIT NO DOUBT...BETTER EVERYTHING!!!!

MY VOTE :: rise

HOLLA!!!!!

yo 1-N-gone....that line that you said was hot by B-dub...was in my verse not bdubs...and that wack ass line that you said I said was in bdubs verse


dam dawg you voted backwards..lol...O well up for votes

yep

up4 votes

my vote dub

yo both of yalls shit was sick, but rise came harder, some pretty good multi's in there, i jus felt his shit more than b dub's

vote=rise

what is a multi?

are you serious?^^^
so thats why you say you dont like my style


a muti is when you use a group of words to ryme with another group of words.....like

Im-pimpin-tha-block.....rippin-my-sock...from pillows-of-rocks....but still-on-the-top...whether you willing-or-not

get it

UP for VOtes

Rise took it on length, wordplay, punches etc
Vote = Rice

Return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=41994

yo, Kron...the name is Rise not Rice..get it straight

UP FOR VOTES

"are you serious?^^^
so thats why you say you dont like my style"

No, I do'nt like your styles because you break up your verses to write shit in bold face. I also don't think you're puches are that good. I'm not disrespecting, like I said in the other post it's just my preference. I ain't saying you don't got skills, I just don't feel it like I feel some other shit.

And I didn't know that was refered to as a "multi." You trying to be elitist now? Fuck it, I'm just asking a question.

b-dub

Rise took this based on the fact that his overal skill was better and he displayed it in his verse. B-dub wasn;t bad just got cought up with somebody better, simple as that.

Vote= Rise

ya'll vote on my battle with Kid Frozt
Kid Frozt vs. D-Dizzle

watch ya tone dub::
use ya "inside" voice, before I put yo ass "outside"

lol

you aint got to like it..but you were right...you have to respect it

Up for votes

Tell you what rise,you obviously got some hate for me. You took this battle, I'm admitting it, my shit wasn't that good, I didn't put too much effort into it because I am in the middle of studying for finals. It's all good though, I'm not making excuses, you won. You wanna do a rematch sometime? See how cocky you are then?

ofcourse...I dont pass up a chansce for a free win..and no I dont hate you, I just think you are not in the position to say that you dont like my style...becuase it is destoying you right now

but when I get my record up a bit..then yea, we can do a rematch
no problem...are votes over yet?

UP4 Mo votes

hey already voted here but was wondering if ya'll would peep me and fgee vs scotty c and bazzy

it has no votes thus far