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Kosta 05-28-03 01:08 AM

:-You Can Try-:
 
I doubt you'll Get In

Most members will be recruited
and dealt with personally. If you
want to show us what you got.
show us and leave a contact....

..Red.. 05-28-03 01:58 AM

aight... i want in...
check my battles or some----
or maybe i could battle you

well just let me know.

Kosta 05-28-03 02:10 AM

its not really a "battle type crew"
man...looking for writers...topical
types...

..Red.. 05-28-03 02:21 AM

oh i see...-
thought u guys battled...
never mind.

Sureal 05-28-03 02:55 AM

TOPIC : TAKING IT TO HEART... RBTL (1-0)

RBTL . (originally) reposted in OpenMic

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50297

aim; blz2k4

msn; teh_r0xx0r@hotmail

Atetrack define' 05-28-03 03:52 AM

sand i thought you were gonna use the old city life forum...lmao.

Kosta 05-28-03 04:03 PM

lmao....im at the top...blaze...
not in yet...keep elevating..youll
get there..

Atetrack define' 05-29-03 06:12 AM

so whats happenin sand.

you came on aim,for like 10 seconds at like 3am my time,then you disappeared.

oh well

just pm me or something

MiNdLeSs 05-29-03 11:26 PM

currently in rbtl, bout to be 2-0

links...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49716

cant find the 2nd one, it was against ender, both k.o's...
...maybe new to the site, but been on others for a while (like urbanflows,ryhmecrimez, etc.)

aim - oldskool753

Phrantik 05-30-03 02:20 AM

^i vote no.

Kosta 05-30-03 02:31 AM

well mindless...
you are good.
you do have potential.
keep elevating.
and eventually you
can be down. keep
at it. keep winning
topicals.

MiNdLeSs 05-30-03 05:26 PM

aight, thks sand, i understand, maybe ill holla back in a few weeks or suttin...

... and phrantik... why so quick to vote no?...you dont know me and prolly didnt even check my stuff... hmm... o well

WeeZy 05-30-03 10:13 PM

No dizzle. Get some talent in here . . .

MiNdLeSs 05-30-03 11:03 PM

get some talent in here...?
hate to say it kid but i have a better record then you...

...oh wait you dont have a record...

sand knew the deal, and im cool wit his response, but the rest yall need to wake up...

Roots 05-31-03 08:18 AM

Can you just rate this?

You open a forum claiming to bitchslap anybody who makes a post//
Big mistake because You’ll be spreaded like butter on toast//
Your lyrics make no sense all wacked it seems like u been doing XTC//
You Make it Sound like You’re dangerous with some kinda jail ID//-False
Because as im hitting this shit at you because I think of every Cause//
You wont be able to beat me with you whackies I advise you Pause//
Are you Suppose to be Very hard like a Brick o Brack Keeps me thinking//
But ive realised ur breath indeed of a TIK TAK sounds like you been drinking//
Let me inlight you with my cricked bat it seem’s to me like you’re a confused fool
My advice to you is go to school because its not as if ur gonna be a rapper any get big shiny jewels//.
You Said you were a rapper a real opponent//
Im gonna crush u from components to components leaving squashed like a rodent//
Destructive gun –Explosive fun IF it was u chump I would get on the run//
Because my lyrics are high and smoked like legal pun//
When u makes Bad Action…the Reaction equals No sastisfaction//
The words tha you come out make no sense… and that’s FACT not FICTION//
Now Its you against me Were you gonna run now where face to face
Embrace your self because its gonna be like murda a polices case//
Im as fast a Lion the king of the jungle stop running away from me its foolish to hide//
Its like Putting Me Vs you Its Just Sucside///
Your pissing me off U wanna see my fist get ramed in you jaw its just incredible
All I do is Concentrate and you’re the target my punches fly so fat u cant even see them there undetectable//.

WeeZy 05-31-03 08:10 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by MiNdLeSs
get some talent in here...?
hate to say it kid but i have a better record then you...

...oh wait you dont have a record...

sand knew the deal, and im cool wit his response, but the rest yall need to wake up...
If that's a topical challenge, dawg, bring it. I don't have a battle up, and I'm not fond of battling. Maybe in school, but not on the net. It's gay.

If you want to topical against me, say the word.

Kosta 06-01-03 12:24 AM

Game . I Rate It. NC-17
Few People Should Be
Permitted TO Read That..

MiNdLeSs 06-01-03 12:45 AM

weezy - im not fond of battling either, thats why i do topical stuff, didn't challenge you, just sayin atleast state a reason why, not just "get some talent in here" when you have no record....

and i dont see how u can say internet battles are gay since ur in a internet crew, lol, if your really that gangsta and rap at school, why u going online?...hmm...

...but hey if u want a topical battle....

WeeZy 06-01-03 12:48 AM

Dawg. If you haven't noticed, it's a topical crew. When I'm at school, we don't sit around and free about a certain topic. Sometimes we'll cypher, but we enjoy doing cyphers, 4 lines each of us at a time, dissing eachother. It ups our skills in battle. I didn't say you was wack, and I didn't say you didn't have talent. I mainly said "Let's get some talent in here." You got potential dawg, no doubt about it. Just elevate. I went by Sand's post saying you're not in the crew, so I thought "Let's get some better talent in here."

You got all hasty about it.

...but hey, if you want a topical battle....

MiNdLeSs 06-01-03 12:56 AM

aight, i see now, yea thats what i thought when u had said get some talent in here, just misunderstood... my fault

and i feel ya on the cyper, battling to up your skills in skool, theres not many people at my skool into that, or have the balls to battle at skool

inspire 06-01-03 06:00 AM

^^you tryna jump ship mind??

MiNdLeSs 06-01-03 01:15 PM

nah man, i thought this was one of those crews like the new crew showcase or suttin, where you can be in both?

Atetrack define' 06-01-03 01:18 PM

tis...

Mad Man 06-01-03 05:56 PM

I am Interested in joining, here's something from the poetry tournament that I dropped against tiK, the topic was Gravestones...

I walk through the Graveyard with flowers in my hand
It feels like the millionth time I've walked through this land
And the trek that I make is one full of sorrow
Everytime I make it, I wish there was no tomarrow
And then I arrive at that lonely grave
The name reads: Jill Emma Redave
Born 1986 Died 2003
"The loveliest girl that ever would be."
See her parents truly loved her with all of their heart
But I loved her more that with her I still can't part
See I can still recall my desire
And every revery I have is on fire
See everytime we met, in my heart there was a burning
Because every night we spent together was the heat of yearning
And I can't take not ever seeing her again
And I pulled out what would let me see her in heaven
And on her cross, I boar Christ's position in which he died
Blood flowed from my head from where I lied
This loss was something that I couldn't get over on my own
And next to her I got my own Gravestone...

Kosta 06-01-03 09:31 PM

nice stuff madman^

what do you guys think...

Chrit 06-01-03 10:55 PM

hmm...
peep wither of my open mics

dont have the links handy...

Baron Mynd. 06-02-03 08:51 AM

Mad is pretty good.

Maven 06-02-03 06:41 PM

here are a few recent pieces. some of them aren't my best....

memory
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52643

stigmata
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51684

the straw that broke the camel's back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49318

tell me what you think.
Peace

Kosta 06-03-03 02:17 AM

under is good....

anyone?

Atetrack define' 06-03-03 06:45 AM

sand....i cant get a pm message to you,inbox fulled up...so yeah i aint replied to the offery thing or nothign i dont htink,so ill just post a link here..



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45540


so yeah...

hope shits goin aiight with girly.

tRiLL 06-03-03 10:36 AM

i woudl like to try out please.......i'll drop a few links to my pieces
ok...if yaw got time.....peep like 1 or 2 of em....i think i'm alrite for this crew
not sure how elivated yaw want yo memberz to be but oh well


SHALLOW BUT DEEP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53273

DEATH
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill

THREAD OF LIFE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill

FIRE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill

REMAINING UNRECOGNIZED verse 1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=remain

REMAINING UNRECOGNIZED verses 2 n 3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=trill


thanks......please peep em lol

Baron Mynd. 06-03-03 11:12 AM

Why not just make this crew a sub forum in the P3 forum being as most of us are from there, and sand is a P3 member ?

Just a suggestion.

Kosta 06-03-03 01:30 PM

Ahh...I think it Should Just Be It's Own Sun-Forum
And It Will Make It's Way To Established Crews Soon
Evolve and Weezy Aren't In P3 And Neither Are The
Other Heads Im Trying To Get In This...N-Demik Domain 9
I say Mad And Under Have A Good Chance..What Do
You People Think?

a-g 06-03-03 07:10 PM

how many lines do i need to spit...
..............................................
.........

Baron Mynd. 06-03-03 10:21 PM

^ lol. dosent matter as long as its dope.
and Sand, when this gets to established, how the hell am i gonna stay active in them both?!

Atetrack define' 06-04-03 02:16 AM

we forgot definition...oh well

sand i dunno if your wantin gme to post a link or not,but i dunno,got confused so i posted one anyway,i dont think i needed to,so yeah.ok..got lost...

reoccuring thing that gettign lost is..

D'Cyde 06-05-03 12:19 AM

Yo check it check it I got this battle won, it was done before this shit begun
you better relax cause you rhyme like you been takin Exlax
I got lyrics like a passion, instead of winnin you?ll be crashin, your record it was great
now that shit did what, evaporate,You can anticipate but can?t relate cause I seen your
geeky classes you look just like bill gates(without the money), I got metaphors like your
whore got sores(referring to STD?s) theonly thing is your bitch comes back for more, I
told her I dont want those sores(referring to STD?s) so I turned her away just like
before,Your excited, i dont?t know why cause you were out whited( white guy beat you)
youve been beat, cmon face this defeat, I spit venom like a snake, one spit and thats all it
will take, while you crumble and your knees start to shake, expose that you rap like Justin
Timberlake(bad rapper) so everyone knows that your fake/ you battle cause your not
virile(means have a small manhood) all along you been in denile, so you suck guys dicks
until its worth your while, scared and shakin like freeworld off of 8 mile
Is there any confusion after this you?ll need a blood transfusion, they?ll have to rewrite
the constition, to say that you just had your biggest execution


gte bak to me OK

Sureal 06-05-03 02:42 AM

sand i know u sed i had to elevate before i got in, and i think i did that in this weeks RBTL mnatch against Thug Whyte...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52315

get at me...

I won that Topical (5-1)

Kosta 06-05-03 07:57 PM

Ate Is In....Sorry For The Wait

Dadi Kewl 06-05-03 08:14 PM

Ai here ya go:
My most recent piece-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54288

Holla back at me on PM this thread or my aim and msn is tomob121@aol.com


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