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maxximum 07-03-03 09:01 AM

ThugzDoCry VS. M.A.W. (nice)
 
yo ThugzDoCry//
bitch get SARS and die//

your crazy you battle me//
cuz' today you'll find your rest like pac and B.I.G.//
you betta escape now B//

after votin' you'll have a K.O.//
bitch I can can you in a line, or four//
but I said at least 8 bitch thats twice four//
but to me it ain't a lot more//

shit I allready got 10 lines, soon I got twelve//
I bet you are lucky cuz' its only words no shells//

cuz' I'm commin' commin' up like a handgun//
that kills faggots like you or elton john//
yo its your turn to rap punk, have fun...
peace!
(sorry my other name waz snake but I 'dont know how to delete)

maxximum 07-03-03 09:05 AM

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oh I thought my name was gonna be SNaKE but it ain't so................................................ .................................................. .....................................

Edicius 07-03-03 10:26 AM

Min. 8 lines
Max. 15 lines
no crew votes and shit
no biting
Your rules .....ill add xplain votes with that.........heres my thing



My Lyrics...are like mathematics...to bitches like you who don't add up//
If you want to understand my shit...you need some mental back-up..cuz my shit it totaly ~grinded//
Fuck this wigga i'm master ~minded...and like a 'wonder'...you are lyricly ~blinded//
Cuz i will smack ~you...looked at your rhymes ,fuck they have more problems then fuckin AA groups ~do//
Dis dumb wack-ass is a stupid bitch staying home to get sexually abused//
He puts his ass on drugs to claim shelter at a rehab clinic and he still gets refused//
You wannabe lyricist..fuck claiming to be hiphop, all day long listening to punk/rock and ska//
There’s no one to take care of you, I mean also you’re mom diss-like-ya//

maxximum 07-03-03 10:31 AM

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VOTEVOTEVOTE
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maxximum 07-03-03 10:37 AM

VOTE!!!
 
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yo that waz a nice shot ThugzDoCry!!!

Violent~Wordz 07-03-03 10:38 AM

LoL...Another Easy Victory..For Thugz...

Yo Your Shit Is Good Now...Yo....

Punches = Thugs...Flow = Thugs...Overall Verse Goes To Him...::

Also M.A.W dont Do Your Verse Like That...You Gotta..Diss You..
and By What I Read you Didnt Really Come Hard At That...
Just Step ya Shit...
But..My Vote=CRy


I Poll Voted


Both Of Yall Hit This up And Vote/Poll It...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63056

Edicius 07-03-03 10:39 AM

Thnx Violent preciated, man uppin this. .............
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maxximum 07-03-03 10:41 AM

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XL4REAL 07-03-03 10:46 AM

thugz won this, I vote thugz

better harder punches not alot more to say apart from can you guys vote my battles cuz i need to battle again so I want them over!!!!!

maxximum 07-03-03 10:47 AM

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Edicius 07-03-03 10:51 AM

Jup what he says ...........
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maxximum 07-03-03 10:59 AM

yo ppl please VOTE........................yo ppl please VOTE........................yo ppl please VOTE........................

Gauge 88 07-03-03 12:20 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62812 yo vote no show on this battle and I'll hit this back

maxximum 07-03-03 12:50 PM

yo keep on voting ppl I want to start another battle...
~~[B] DUTCH TIGAHZ $ EVAH~~~
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maxximum 07-03-03 12:52 PM

~~~~~~~~~~ DUTCH TIGAZ 4 EVAH ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Edicius 07-03-03 01:50 PM

Uppin......................
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maxximum 07-03-03 02:14 PM

~~~~~~~~~~yo UPPIN~~~~~~~~~~~~~
uppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppin
~~~ DUTCH TIGAZ 4 EVAH ~~~

Edicius 07-03-03 02:17 PM

Wat nou dutch tigers kan je nederlands dan ?

Uppin lol.............................................
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dw. 07-03-03 02:21 PM

thugzdocry took this, 4 all round beta verse, flow n wordplay was hot!
vote=thugzdocry

will ya vote on my battle wiv born 2 kill dawg, thanx!

Edicius 07-03-03 02:22 PM

Yeah i will honestly vote.........will you hit the poll thnx >...........
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youngblood 07-03-03 02:26 PM

ey thugzdocry check your pm dog, sorry for the freepostin!!!!!!!!

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dirty 07-03-03 02:37 PM

Thugz took this one good flo nice punces
MAW needs work

Thugz was't ridin for votes like most bithces on here

maxximum 07-03-03 02:38 PM

ja ik kom uit nederland Thugz...
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maxximum 07-03-03 02:40 PM

~don't talk shizzle, just vizzle... haha~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~up pin~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Desil Factor 07-03-03 02:42 PM

This cat had you on punches.His wordplay was better.So this goes to thugz .................................................. .................

Agony 07-03-03 02:42 PM

Thugz do cry had a better overall verse
his lines were much harder than maw
yo maw u came to soft on this one
vote=Thugzdocry

ceck out my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62593

maxximum 07-03-03 02:46 PM

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Edicius 07-03-03 02:49 PM

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Originally posted by M.A.W.
ja ik kom uit nederland Thugz...
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wahahahah nee ik was de enigste ja verdomme :P..........lol

Edicius 07-03-03 02:50 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by youngblood
ey thugzdocry check your pm dog, sorry for the freepostin!!!!!!!!

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Vote lol

Edicius 07-03-03 02:52 PM

its 5-0 but you need to pollvote people aight appreciated
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maxximum 07-03-03 03:37 PM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I'm dead now~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~

Edicius 07-03-03 03:45 PM

Hey uppin >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.
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Speek.E.Z. 07-03-03 04:09 PM

Thugz Won This Easily The Other Guy Was So Stupid It Was Funny, Bitch Get SARS and Die, ahaha Ez win for Thugz

Vote==thugz

can u guys hit up mah battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63008

Quik-$pit 07-03-03 04:13 PM

I never saw one constructive vote there at all ...

Heres how you should vote
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M.A.W:----

Quote:
yo ThugzDoCry//
bitch get SARS and die//


That was so simple and kinda predictive, a four year old could have thought that one up! , Try abit more wordplay in your opening lines.

Quote:
your crazy you battle me//
cuz' today you'll find your rest like pac and B.I.G.//
you betta escape now B//


Same here, really simple, everyone has used Tupac & Biggy in there battle verses, it got old years ago dawg.

Quote:
after votin' you'll have a K.O.//
bitch I can can you in a line, or four//
but I said at least 8 bitch thats twice four//
but to me it ain't a lot more//


Did anyone else understand this bullshit??? , in the first line of this stanza you basicly said he's gonna win...

what you should have put is something like this:-
"After the votin you'll RECIEVE a KO"

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shit I allready got 10 lines, soon I got twelve//
I bet you are lucky cuz' its only words no shells//


This is the best part of your verse ... never made sense but flowed, unlike the rest of the verse!!!

ThugsDoCry:---

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If you want to understand my shit...you need some mental back-up..cuz my shit it totaly ~grinded//
Fuck this wigga i'm master ~minded...and like a 'wonder'...you are lyricly ~blinded//


This was nice dawg, nice wordplay, could do with a touch up on the flow though!

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You wannabe lyricist..fuck claiming to be hiphop, all day long listening to punk/rock and ska//
There’s no one to take care of you, I mean also you’re mom diss-like-ya//


Even though the using "MOM" line went out ages ago, you used it well , nice work

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Basic Run Down:---

Flow = ThugsDoCry
Word play = ThugsDoCry
Punchlines = ThugsDoCry
Multis = ThugsDoCry (only a few though)
Enjoyment = NONE
Suspence = M.A.W (only coz i wanted to see wether he had something up his sleave)

OVERALL = ThugsDoCry
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Check out my battle with Iceberg, Thanx

Edicius 07-03-03 06:10 PM

Thnx damn that was a constructive vote damn very nice thnx gain , but its 5-0 but its open ?????????? why's that some mods?whats wrong in here?????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????

Edicius 07-03-03 06:28 PM

MODS!!!!!!???????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????was wrong in here ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????

dw. 07-03-03 06:44 PM

soz thugz 4got 2 poll, just done it now! can u hit my battle wiv born to kill plz dawg, front lines! thanx!!!!!!!!!!!

~HoTTie~ 07-03-03 07:03 PM

my vote goes to Thugz..he came harder and his punches were consistent...u shouldn't have even battled this newbie..*shakes head*...lol anyways he had nice punches and some ok wordplay...ur verse wasn't too bad MAW but it coulda been better

Edicius 07-03-03 07:10 PM

7-0 ??????????????????WTF LMAO >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Edicius 07-03-03 07:34 PM

The End?
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