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IceBerg420 vs. Mortality
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No Crew Votes No D/R votes No Hate Votes No Biting No Recycling I spit 1st |
Time to teach this young buck a Lesson................
Mortality Get mortally Merked by my lyrical fatalities/1 I aint here to be ya friend so lets skip the formalites/2 This reality, And no I talkin Bout a T.V. show/3 (Reality TV) Round here Newb shit talkers get merked by R.B.'s pro's/4 (like me) Especially a lil dip shit like you who's only fifteen years old/5 (Check Profile) Only 'shit he spits' is lyin over there dyin in his toilet bowl/6 He Beat 7 newbs and all of the sudden he think he Tight/7 Bitch U couldn't be 'tight' even if u was virgin pussy on 'prom night'/8 (LoL) Fuckin ILLosernists my raps sprayin u like primatine mist/9 While your punches like 'dodo birds', they dont even 'exist'/10(DoDo birds are Extinct) I bet your pissed, u Look at this and be like....... Mortality: "Damn, He merkin me"/11 Mortality: "I spit My Dopest Lyric's But them shit's aint workin G"/12 Fuckin Upset wanna Be vet, Mort be a sport and give it rest/13 U can't contest wit RB's Best, Even if ya raps came strapped wit mags & bulletproof vests/14 Surely-u-jest, I suggest U're best bet is to take up pop music wit NSYNC/15 Battlin is just not for U, Like Soldiers who dont know how to think/16 You must be crazy if u think ya 8mile style will work-here/17 Them B-Rabbit fagget lines will only get u MERKED-qweer/18 Its 'Game Over' for this kid no more extra lives/19 His 'Mortality' can Rest in peace, becuz it just died/20 |
aight
i'll post tomorrow i'm bout to go to bed i would of posted before but i've been makin a crew sig so yea |
U got until 5:00 PM 2morrow Or I'm Uppin 4 no show votes
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sorry to freepost but iceberg........that was pretty good i like the first line but that verse was hott well im out tho holla and sorry to freepost
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dawg i wont be able to get on until after 5:00 PM
sorry man i'll post around 5:30 so yea............................................... ..................... |
^Bitch Stallin tryna come up wit a good comeback........Its Ok kid U've been Merked, There's nothin U can say that can come back from that no matter how hard ya try.
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there was nothing good about his verse....it sucked...i'm just being honest here....elevate....ur punches is weak...ur wordplay is wack.....everything about ur verse equals weak and wack.... i'm not hatin...just tryin to help......yall need to be battlin in frontlines...just cuz ur record shouldn't mean u should battle in elite.....cuz in now way.....is this an elite battle....ghost |
^Shut The Fuck UP
.................................................. .......................................... Son of Bitch Pink Slips that herb So2Speak and all of the sudden he think he a super MC now........................................U still weak as fuck prolly why yo ass didnt wanna battle me.................. |
sorry. .
but ima have to back 13th on this..... ya verse wasnt great and i aint tryin to hate. . also you came in one of my battles and said bitch nobody cares about aim. well, nobody cares about reality tv either, or the dodo bird wtf was that? but i understand, u have an excuse, PMS. |
LMAO at Feeble Minded, U right I did come in yo battle and said that shit didn't I? LoL U gotta admit though Yo verse was weak as hell on that battle........Only a CPU nerd muh fucka would talk about AIM in a battle......Real Life U got laughed off staged for that lame shit.
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EVERYONE STOP FREEPOSTIN UNTIL MORTALITY POSTS, WHEN HE POSTS THEN U CAN DO ALL YOUR CRITIQUES & SHIT.......UNTIL THEN SHUT THE FUCK UP I DONT WANNA HEAR ANYONE ELSES OPINION.
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IceBerg420 is gonna get a new asshole ripped!
The Lines You spit have 0 "Progression" Can't Hit Me Cuz They Got No "Connection", I'll Kill You With My Ruthless "Agreesion" See This A New Merking "Session"// I'm Beatin You Even Tho I Got "Writers Block" IceBerg Bite So Many Lines Even "Biters Shocked", This Bitch Gettin "Rocked" Walkin In Battle Dome Wit My Gun "Cocked"// Battlin Me Bitch You'll Get "Annihilated" Battlin You Makes My Time "Violated", My Punches Makin You "Dilapidated" Battlin Me I'll Make Ya Whole Body Be "Amputated"// This Fuckin Faggit Prolly Likes To Wear "LipStick" Fuck IceBerg his name should be "DipStick", Against Me His Lines Gettin "Ripped Quick" His Lines Would Never Be "This Slick"// Against Me This Bitch Will Get "Dropped" 1 Punch To the stomach and his "Belly Flopped", My Punchlines Connect So Hard They Can't Be "Stopped" My Vocab So High It Can't Be "Topped"// Trust Me Bitch You Can't "Spit" Ya Lines Suck Ass and Smell Like "Shit", IceBerg Is A TeenAger Still Suckin His Moms "Tit" Dawg You Can't Rap So Juss "Quit"// This Is Another Loss For you To Add To The "Pile" Steppin All Ova Ya Ass Like You Was A Floor "Tile", Ur Bitch Ass Doesn't Come Close to this ILL "Juvenile" You Called Me Out For A Battle When Ya Rhymes Aren't Even Worth My "While"// Defeating Yo Punk Ass Is "Simple" I'll Pop Yo Ass Away like A "Pimple", Ya Rhymes Got Bigger Holes Than A "Dimple" My Lines Are Twice As Good As Yours Matter Afact They "Triple"// Look You Can't "Rap" Ya Ja Rule Quoted Lines Are "Crap", Callin Me Out Is Like Callin For A "Death Trap" Call Me Kurt Angle Cuz I'll Make you "Tap"//(WWE) You Winnin This Battle Is Being "Declined" Your Rhymes Are Wack You Need to "Resign", You Need To Learn ILL Lines So Read "My Rhymes" You Wont Win This Battle..This Shit is "Mine"// You Wack As Fuck Give It A "Rest" Ya Style is Garbage "None To Less", Battlin Me I'll Put Bullets In Your "Chest" Next Time Ya Step To me You Best Be Wearin A "Bullet Proof Vest"// You Callin Me Out That's "Senseless" Cuz My Punches Are "Preventless", You Wanted A Battle While You Was "Careless" Next Time You Battle Someone Make Sure It's "Fairness"// Your Rhymes Are Extremely "Wack" Talent Is Obviously What You "Lack", Callin Me Out You Must Be On "Crack" Cuz My Lines Leave You Confused They Simply Throw You Off "Track"// My Flows Constantly Be "Sick" Maybe Urs Would Be Like That If You Stopped "Suckin Dick", Your No Competition For Me "Trick" I Could Easly Merk Your Ass "Real Quick"// You Prolly Had Pre-Writtin Lines All You Had To Do Was "Copy-And-Paste" For Me To Battle You My Time is "Such-A-Waste", You Are The Wackest Guy I've Eva Had To "Face" I'll Fuck Up Ya Face So Much People Will Think You Tripped Ova Ya "Shoe Lace"// My Lines Killin You With Awsome "Graffic" Ya Verse Seems Held up Like It got Caught In "Traffic", Battlin You Is An Easy Win For Me Aint That "Fantastic" Wait I Think You Beat Me....To Bad I'm Bein "Sarcastic"// Only Gat You Could Pull Out Would Be A "Cap Gun" How You Gone Battle Me When Ya Verses Have No "Action", I'll Merk You Easly Quote My Words In "Closed Caption" I'm Killin You Your Rhymes Have No "Attraction"// IceBerg Beatin Me Or YoungWhiteThug19 "Bitch Please" Only Way This Bitch Could Fight Is If He Was In Iraq "Over Seas", IceBerg's Only Way To Gets Pleasure Is When He's "On His Knee's" Got Found Suckin Another Mans Dick And His BoyFriend Said Juss "Be Honest Please"// Look Kid It Would Of Been Easier On You If You "Ducked" Against Me In A Battle Yo Punk Ass Is "Fucked", Those Wack Lines You Got Put You Out Of "Luck" Only Way You Could Hit Harder Than Me Is If You Hit Me With A "Truck"// Fuck It Bitch This One Sided Battle Is "Done" There Was Absolutly No Chance That You Would Have "Won", This Battle Was Heated Dont Try To Say It Was Juss For "Fun" Voters Check This Shit Cuz This Battle Has Juss been "Spun"// |
Aight
UPPIN(#1) IceBerg You talk to much shit 13th and Feeble Would Fuck yo ass up easly Kinda like i did |
I said 20 lines, not 20 bars dumb fuck damn Shorten ya verse and repost it otherwise I win by disqualification...............
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Um it is 20 lines dumb ass
juss long lines................... .......................................... .......................................... |
Thats a damn shame I just finished readin all that and U wrote Like 40 bars of garbage, or how ever many bars U wrote............
Like I said On previous post, shorten that shit or get disqualified str8 up. |
only an overall nerd fuck would talk about a dodo bird and reality tv in a battle...
and truth is ill pink slip ur ass right now if ud like bitch. |
ICEBERG....Y DONT U READ THAT SHIT ONCE..........U DUMB SHIT
IF U WOULD READ IT BY THE NAKED EYE IT LOOKS LIKE ITS 40 BARS BUT MABE IF U WOULD READ IT UD KNOW IT IS JUST 20 LONG LINES NO BEEF......JK....FUCK U BITCH......... |
Lol For real
i mean god damn And To the Naked Eye it looks like i have 40 barz but if u actually read it they are juss 20 long lines so dont bitch let the votes come in |
^All Ya'll can Suck My DICK......Haters
Ya'll actually think u could put them long ass lines to a beat.....Get Real If thats The Case I'd make my lines like 3bars long and diss this silly Motha Fucka All Day..................As 4 feeble minded Don't even do it to yaself kid.............. |
Shut the fuck up
I Wrote that to a beat stupid ass i rap fast i can't help it .................................................. . stop freepostin and let votes take this |
mortality got this by way betta punches and wordplay...4 real
poll vote- mortality~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
Finally votes comin in
IceBerg dont fuckin freepost in here anymore god damn all u do is talk shit Feeble would kill yo ass .................................................. ..................................... |
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Get off feeble's dick U fuckin Cum Guzzlin fagget...................
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that was some funny shit.... freepost! |
Well Feeble Looks Like U got 2 new D/R's in Mortality and the 13thdickhead up there.
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tight motality..my vote is for him...he elevated...damn for a long ass time i dint think anyone on this site elevated.....
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^^U A FAG YO
You wouldn't do shit if u seen me on the streets I'd Merk yo ass in a battle (again) Beat the fuck out of ur gay ass .................................................. ........................... UPPIN(#2) |
My Bad young_Logic
i mean to say that to IceBerg not you thanks for your 2 cents Alot of people on this site elevate i really didn't elevate lately i've had writers block and IceBerg pissed me off so i came out and killed his ass |
yo ICEBERG...you was on the site i battle at....you fucking was biting off EMINEM lmao so dont talk shit...you gonna murk this cat with eminems songs? lmao
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its all good....i wanna battle you...be the first time i battled on this site tho....what ya think man? set it up for me cuz i dont knwo how...oh yeah on this otha site i battle at im a vet...not really alot of peeps battle there btu all the BEST battle there...... rap-star
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LMFAO at Iceberg. Mortality str8 up Merked his ass. GOD DAMN, IceBerg you talk to much shit man. 13th, Feeble, Mortality, Young, and me would whoop your ass. You actually think you beat me in LLL? My computer was broke, everyone knew that.
Vote-Mortality |
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My Lead Still UPPIN(#3) .................................................. ................ FUCKIN 100 CHARACTER RULE |
damn lemme break it down for alll
punches-mortality (by lot) flow-iceberg strucure-mortality overall-mortality his punches really just killed it but iceberg made me laugh like hell |
LOL
Thanks Envy But yo i do gotta give it to IceBerg his verse was pretty good now that i look at it best he's done in a long time Props to ya IceBerg UPPIN(#4) |
punches mor
flow ice multies ice metas mor personals mor kept interested both ice his first couple of likes was nothin but multis i thought that was tight man but i no yall gonna talk bout me sayin i dont kno wha im talkin bout but thats my opinion but mor took it by just a lil tho im out holla |
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Mutha Fuckin WORD |
ps could a mod fuckin poll my vote ive pmed yall multiple times to get activated and shit still aint workin
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