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pine-cone vs the_real_MC
bring the heat bitch, 5-15 lines, 15 mins to write from checkin.
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yo this poll only lasts 4 days, so vote fast pleze.
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ya mmmmkay later not now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................................ .......
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hey mc, i'm gonna make you see/
cause i'm the real one, the rap game is just fun// see i can abreviate my words/ you better investigate your verse// cause i'm comming like lurch/ drag you away in my herse// (i'll kill you mofo) my rhymes will be reported/ yet they will leave your vision distorted// my rhymes are to complex/ it makes it hard to put them in text// but i still come on strong like terminator/ i'll exterminate all you impersonators// this verse aint so great so you can beat it/ unless you want to debate, i'll set the bar, can you meet it?// you must elevate, make your words better / your verses i will confensate, destroy them with my sherdder// and as i leave you there with no verse to spit/ remember my words, " befor you can advcance you must lose, you twit" and mabie next time you will put up a battle, i'll leave you in a sea of words, without a paddle// |
yo mike, where are you, are ya gonna choke?, bring the heat, and remember my advice bitch.......
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Great verse pine-cone. When is mc gonna step up to the plate? I'll vote again later.
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thanks man, i think he is comming a lil later. he was writeing earler today but i gave him some advice so he erased it and is going to write one tonight,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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yo mike where are you, i thougth you were gonna write last night, you had better bring it in computer app today.
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bring da heat bitch......
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mike, u commin or what bitch.
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yea ok dude you can be like that guy lurch, i'll whoop ur ass worse then jamie murch/
go into the woods and find me a piece of burch, come out and swining in front of a church//-1 beat ur ass till you can't stand, like limp bizkit in a band/ you come to and ask to fight just like a demand, try and hit me with ur hand//-2 see the bloody cone, that has a broken bone/ you can't even use the phone, or even moan//-3 just go back to ur tree, i'll cut it down so you can see/ i don't care cuz it was me, see that tree beat ur ass so u can't even pee//-4 leave that clone, that mother fuckin pine-cone, that think that he is a drone/ beat his ass wit that phone, so he will have broken bones, tape his mouth shut so he can't moan//-5 that cone wanna fly, well there a jet that you can buy/ i know that bitch lie, drop a bomb and see that cone die//-6 that cone think he a pro?, fuck that shit that bitch a ho/ he a fuckin slow mo, but that bitch just lays low//-7 he ain't got flow, not even rythem/ so he might just as well go, i'll just go killem//-8 |
ite the real mc jst got dis close but beta punches n flow u both elavating wel yall keep it up n hit dis up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 ........................pz
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yo i alrdy voted on dis so can u repay da favor n drop an HONEST vote on 1 of mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 thx yall be honest..................................... no d/r...thx.............pz
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ok i being honest, think that that pine-cone took this because his made more sense, even though it was really elementary, but just better all around, and the real mc, i think u may need to step ur verse a bit, actually a whole lot, go to the WEC, peace
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yo tbird raw, thanks for the vote of confidence, but you forgot to vote................
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how could you vote for mc, i realize mine aint the best, but his had like 5 dif thoughts in it, ie no sturcture. used the same words, and or verse more than once, and it made preactly no sence, he said he'd beat me with a phone like 5 times., just a word from the pine..............................................
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aight yall, i dunno how tbird gave a vote cause pine cones "made more sense", thats plain bullshit, they were both short and to the point, pine cone needed more help than the real mc, so yea my vote goes to real mc, he came harder wit better punches and personals, both of u need to elevate drastically, but the real mc won this battle.
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^^^^and yo pine y u tryin to swing peoples votes, thats just about as much bullshit as tbird, so whatever dude, just my opinion. just a word from the
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fuck that shit, yeh i made one mistake in mine, just because i have half a brain and use my verses right, this dont mean that because you idiots can understand them dont mean mine are worse, mc's shit was played, but whatever, i'm out, fuck this shit i got better things to do with my time..........
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thanx for voting real_MC just tell me when there is a battle and i might vote for ya. or if your not the best i'll try and give ya a few pointers. or you might be able to give me a few so i can elevate!
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I thought thsi was a close battle;
BREAKDOWN::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::: FLOW:Real STRUCTURE:real PUNCHES:real SUSTAINABILITY:real ORIGINALITY:pine OVERALL: REAL MC better verse, and don't moan pine cone bout the vote, how can 3 people be wrong? no beef pine but he won........... hit this up y'all no beef votes |
i got no beef, i just think, y'all got a few things wrong, if y'all had read some of the real mc's old battles against me youd see that all his stuff is like the exact same, and shit like that, thats all, apparently y'all dont look at shit like that...........
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Pine-cone no doubt... his shit was mad simple and pretty played but Real MC had way too simplistic style... simple is ok if u Em but it jus showed a wack vocab on ur part. Felt PC more consistant wit the punches tho neither were v.personal or hard hittin.
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finally someone with a brain.... hanks for the vote tek,,,,,,..........
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i will as soon as the mods fix my system, it wont let me vote yet, but as soon as i can i will........
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uppin lets get this finish as quick as possible i hate waiting for ppl to finish votin it takes forever. god it should only take like 2-4 dayz but this is takin way to long...
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Real Emcee's Punches Out-Weighed The Other
Kat.. Not To In Depth.. But Simple Enuff For A Battle Vote - Real MC Even Though I cant Vote Yet, I Took The Time To Hit This Up So Please ... RETURN THA FAVOR http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84072 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84031 |
aight yo, i talked to one of the mods and they said i i had to have a 100 character post to vote so here it is, i think that, that is true about the same shit he sayin cause it is all the same, and i understand the sit about it beiung simple because when u battling someone like the real mc u dont wanna waste good shit on him, so i say that pine-cone did make more since, and the real mc just got some wacked out metaphors and shit so,
my vote=pine-cone |
yo dawg this shit is still not letting me vote i have no clue whys o my bad dawg but my vote goes to u................................................. ............................
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goes to who me or pine-cone?............................................. ..........
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Ight I Polled Your Vote.. So Dont Be A Bitch
And Please... RETURN THA FAVOR http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84072 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84031 |
decent battle. all the rhymes in both verses were too predictable, but more in real mc's. i think that pine cone won, though im sure he could spit much harder
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what the fuck are u foos thinkin??? i mean this aint malibus most wanted, u foos are fuckin gay, but i have to vote and shit, so ama go wit the second guy, "real Mc" or whatever just cuz he tried to use multis and shit, but damn yo u guys suck fat fat cocks... listen to some tupac and nas, some biggie... thats rap, not whatever u listen too
VOTE - FAG MC and its a hate vote cuz i hate both of yall!!! |
one more vote ppl then i win this but you choose the battle not me. i don't try and sway my votes like pine-cone. you wanna vote for him more power to ya
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real took this shit easily. hands down.............................................. .................................................. ....................
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yo hard kor3 thanx for the vote but only pine-cone sux the cock. thats not me this MC's only into bitches not hommies unlike you cock sucker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo deser_egale next time vote for the pole not just Bullshit dumbass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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shut the fuck up, mc,,,
.................. bitch ass neigger, otherwise known as a wigger, this is why i'm holding the trigger/ bitch please, you one this cause people are dumb, and i dont think they want to suck your dick/ and i'll make you cough up your lung, while i'm rideing your chick/ bitch. |
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