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A.T. vs. .::Narcotics::.
10-15 lines
verses due in 1 HOUR Blind spit (no feeding) no hate, d/r, or crew votes... first to five wins... ~AshY~ |
Why the fuck do you try to battle rap, see you done got me startin to wonder now,
how the fuck you expect to be world reknowned when you cant even spit a verb or noun, Your lyrical skills aint shit, and in all honesty they should actually cease to exist, Your entire concept of "flow" is weak, so I know its not your in physical "nature" to make a "current" hit, The only reason you keystyle is cause you lack the real lyrical skills that most expect, My name isnt A.T. to you, call me "nike Swoosh", cause I done got your flows in "check".... "Narcotics" could never be a "dope" mcee, so in other words "Dope" isnt really a "narcotic", I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it", His verse is filled with fillers and I think this cat may be tryin to go all out and buck wild.... But even if his "mother was nature" and his "father was fate" he still couldnt parody "destinys child", This punk bitch got his wins off of newbies so he couldnt relate to my style, Im lyrically blessed, Just to put a lil pressure on this nikka, I'm "hand cuff his heart to his lungs" to send em into "cardiac arrest", Another battle win aint nothing to me, just beatin another bluffin mcee is gonna be enough for me, Even if this cat showed up with "multiple aliases"... he still couldnt beat me wit "threes company"... |
waitin on my boi Narcotics.... says dawg... good luckk and may
da best verse win... ~AshY~ . |
ashy? wut im battlyin a femcee now, stop the votes this is proposturis..
no time to stop this, even if it takes all day i got more patience then doctors.. lets just begin-spittin an statin facts that your in the wrong Weight look at ya health this cat gets recog-niton by postin, u cudnt be Heavy if u tryed to constipate..ya self fuka blind spit try to match wits when i speak cuz its hopeless.. only time u try to conentrate is starin at O j carton full focused.. u spittin dope shit is like the raiders makin the playoffs.. if u think u had a chance at this battle wit that verse your way off.. r u sure u aint a lite weight,cuz ya punches r sorta mediocore.. u beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker.. when u stepin to me u better be ready,if your tryna attempt me.. this battles gettin heated but no need for the sweat band r u really that sweaty?(AVY) damn white boy wut u think u facin.dont ever try to compaire ill.. cuz ill leave ya in a head ache state of mind after fallin out ya dads computer chair.. yea. my punches knock out Femcees cuz men contain power.. damn kid u new u wuz up aginst skill thats why u posted the due time in a hour.. leave ya flow devoured cuz your comin up killed.. you remind me of my self when i wasnt this Ill let my rhymes teach ya lessons, so u mite spit tite.. damn still no sighn of this fag r u sure it aint past ya bed time.. |
HOT SHIT FEELIN IT FO REAL, dam where narcotics at he only got like tre 0 minutes left
good lucc narcotics......................................... ..... |
went a wee bit over da limit, but its all gravy...
lets get some votes... ~AshY~ ....... .................................................. .................................................. .. |
o well there he is so ill jus go ahead n vote......
opena::A.T. closa::A.T. punches::A.T. personals::A.T. multis::NONE creativity::A.T. structure::TIE flow::EEEEH A.T. VOTE:: A.T. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92814 need honest votes, good lookin out |
ride his dik why dont u
u poll ya vote ill get u banned from alldig..u fukin ride dik kid..poll it an ill ge u banned as i said damn why cant u have honesto opinoin uppin for real votes damn |
o yea cant poll vote yet but ill be bacc in a minute to do so, sorry not a freepost, jus an explanation y a vote aint been placed yet
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wut do u mean no MULITES
LOL rewad the fukin verse kid damn......POll it an il lget u banned ill go out my way to do it..fukin fag..obviously u didnt even rad ym verse atleast |
lol narcotics bru itrs honesty i was feelin his shit more than yoz not to sell u short yo shit was hot but his shit was better if u cant take a loss whats da point in battlin........
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u freepost in here to Up ya post..damn ....STOP RIDIN THE DIK I NO WHY U FREEPOSTED
POLL YA VOTE AN ILL GET ALLDIG TO TAKE IT OFF AN U BE BANNEd just do it i dont care.... u ride dik..its obvious |
ive takin 4 losses kid
LOl stfu newb..u an me set it up..but..u fukin ridedik kid...damn u didnt even say we had any mulites when me an AT BOTH DID |
aiyo... tek... id prefer if you didnt vote...
just for the fact now that you two are beefin or what not... in my opinion... both verses were straight... (I hope Tek aint d/r... I dont thinkk he is) but in any case... I dont want this battle closed... so please dont poll. thanks, ~AshY~ |
good battle im not polling but narcotics came hard....
both were ok but you both have to stop streching them lines.....it gets kind of boring to read so much |
^6 aite..coo man u can give a good 2 cents an a vote
but that Dik ryder is a faggat.. no beef at u came hard..but he dont even no wut a mulit is.. hows he gunna say there aint any..wtf..is that uppin |
flow = none (sry, i jes cudnt catch yall flows)
structure = none( i think both of u need to cut ur lines shorter) punches = narcotics creativity = narcotics metas = at wordplay = narcotics vote = narcotics was feelin his spit more hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93087 |
RESPONSE
wont poll cuz a.t. said he didnt want a poll but since i am gettin auch a big fuss im here to clear it up opena::A.T. closa::A.T. punches::A.T. personals::A.T. multis::TIE (wasnt really feelin eithas) creativity::A.T. structure::TIE flow::EEEEH A.T. VOTE:: A.T. maybe one lil tid bit of info will change yo opinion of dicc ridin and dat i dont know what a multi is.....maybe you got that opinion cuz you had yo boy meezy05 send me im'z sayin he was an admin and moderator....and o yea all admin were informe dof this and so was therealist....THE REAL moderator here.....thanku |
UPPIN...
yall quit bitchin... .................................................. ..... |
Punches: Nar
Flow: Tie (Both sucked) Metas: A.T. Wordplay: Nar Creativity: Nar Personals: Tie Overall: Nar hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93075 |
This battle was pretty one sided, fa' real.
AT: You had some decent lines, " "Narcotics" could never be a "dope" mcee, so in other words "Dope" isnt really a "narcotic", I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it"," and this line was a good hit: "But even if his "mother was nature" and his "father was fate" he still couldnt parody "destinys child"," and good close: "Even if this cat showed up with "multiple aliases"... he still couldnt beat me wit "threes company"..." Narcotics: You had a dope verse here~ ashy? wut im battlyin a femcee now, stop the votes this is proposturis.. no time to stop this, even if it takes all day i got more patience then doctors.. (<-Tough ass opener) lets just begin-spittin an statin facts that your in the wrong Weight look at ya health this cat gets recog-niton by postin, u cudnt be Heavy if u tryed to constipate..ya self (<-hella nice snap-thought the same myself) fuka blind spit try to match wits when i speak cuz its hopeless.. only time u try to conentrate is starin at O j carton full focused.. u spittin dope shit is like the raiders makin the playoffs..(LMAAAO) if u think u had a chance at this battle wit that verse your way off.. (<-aight) r u sure u aint a lite weight,cuz ya punches r sorta mediocore.. u beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker..(<-LMAO) when u stepin to me u better be ready,if your tryna attempt me.. this battles gettin heated but no need for the sweat band r u really that sweaty?(AVY)(<-again, tight ass snap) damn white boy wut u think u facin.dont ever try to compaire ill.. cuz ill leave ya in a head ache state of mind after fallin out ya dads computer chair.. yea. my punches knock out Femcees cuz men contain power.. damn kid u new u wuz up aginst skill thats why u posted the due time in a hour.. leave ya flow devoured cuz your comin up killed.. you remind me of my self when i wasnt this Ill let my rhymes teach ya lessons, so u mite spit tite.. damn still no sighn of this fag r u sure it aint past ya bed time.. Tha rest, I really doesn't need an explanation, fa' sho. Only a couple lines from AT stuck, but wit' Narcotics' verse? There were no lines wasted. open:Narcotics close:Narcotics punches:Nartotics creativity:Narcotics structure:TIE flow:Narcotics Like I said, this was a pretty one sided battle... Vote: Narcotics |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93049
Ayo- ya'll hit this up wit' a fair vote ~n~ some true input -workin' to el-e-vate! |
PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272 === A.T. - - kinda weak start... too long too - flow is bad. too many words. needs to be simplified - swoosh lines are played out... I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it", ^^^ not good metaphor at all. sorry man. - not bad ending. dude you need a lot of work on your structure. i would like to see you rap that verse to a beat without fukking up!!! lol Narcotics- - great opener... more patients then doctors!!! nice - good disses. structure is great here too... i can actually read this to a beat - LOL nice swet band diss!!! - nice computer chair diss - okay ender... its clear who won here. |
uh... I was wearing a visor... not a sweat band lmao...
anyways... thanks for voting... Still Uppin... ~AshY~ |
^^^ it looks like a sweat band cuz the bills in teh back
dont matter tho..i think i took this one.... good battle kid.. uppin to get it over wit |
opener: narcotics
closer: AT flow: narcotics punches: AT structure: tie wordplay: AT enjoyment: AT AT just had mad wordplay in there plus everything so that really did it for me, only thing i didnt like was that i felt the lines were kinda stretched so the flow was a little off beat...but u can never really tell in text.. Narcotics also had an ill verse but lacked the line by line by line by line wordplay that AT spit. nice battle. hit this up both a yall please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93693 |
my_vote: AT
haha forgot the most important part.... anyways hit that up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93693 |
flow:=...quit stretching
disses:At punches:narc vocab:= complexity:narc Vote:.....narc return da honest vote http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0046#post930046 |
how doe JEGo see that AT TOOK THIS read my shit kid
damn..... uppin for non dik rydin fagats to post a vote |
ooohhh nice battle ya'll..both came long and hard..ewwww
Breakdown- punches-nar flow=both structure-both enjoyment-nar metas-nar creativity-a.t personals..lacked hard ones opener-nar finisher-hard to choose vote-nar did come harder than ashy pz |
AT. And that's all............................................... ............
Narc, toss some wordplay and punches. SG |
^^ ohh ok fagat
your 0-1 LOLOLOLOL damn newbs try to talk wow fukin herb go sighn up to my newb elmination tournement in botch slapped kid uppin |
1st, if u gonna insult me prepare for disaster,
cuz i will slap yo ass verbally, no1 can do it faster, the abuse u'll take when fuckin wit me, will be twice as bad that i've done to MC's, "N"ever dropped a line that didnt gain respect "A"ll the time crushin peeps y'all wouldnt expect "R"eady to brawl, and crush ya rhymes "C"an't ya see that its all in do time "O"f course you cant cuz likin the sun im blindin "T"ake you by surprise while you still findin "I" will split yo chest like ur under surgery "C"ant you see i am too tough, dont try to fuck me "S"pell my insults right bitch F-A-double G-O T! Ima ready ta brawl anytime SG |
your gay
go sighn up IN BITCH SLAPPED FOR MY NEWBIE TOURNEY damn post in here again an ill get u banned |
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A.T good battle, my vote goes to you... I think you had better an harder personals an punches... good battle...........................
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Please return the favour an lay a vote in my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93904 thanx... |
well, shit... this is my last up...
so I guess Im asking people to please drop your vote with an explaination and poll your vote, please |
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