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JayL 06-30-04 02:00 AM

Diss
 
speakin on trash an how that other dude smells//
well you cant rap either an it aint hard to tell//
this dudes just a bitch liar from akron ohio//
trailer park trash,neva put shit in yah bio//
ill use it against you an put you tah shame//
drop a casket on yah face an just bury yah name//
when im finished ill dice you up into pieces//
feed you to the pigs an watch em die from diseases//

HellRaZoR 06-30-04 03:42 AM

ayo JayL u fucked up just like the rest
u a muthafuckin fagget called the pest
i kill muthafuckerz like u with my lines
killin peepz straight off in these damn rhymes
get yo bitchass off this shit
they callin u " yo dawg suck my dick "
life goes on muthafucker , when u erry1's bitch
earn sum $$$ suckin dicks aint gone make u rich
u look like sum muthafuckin homo thug
muthafucker u can't get a gurlz luv
i show no fear , u not a killa in ur rhymes
back off b4 i break yo muthafuckin spine

popzeus 06-30-04 05:40 AM

Hell, Razor, that rhyme u just spit some kinda joke?
If u razor sharp u better go slit yr own throat
All that "yo dawg suck my dick" shit is played out and spent
U say "earn sum $$$" - I say u frontin without a cent
Yr not tough, yr a weak ass belgian chocolate puff
U can practice all u like dog, it never be enough

sporadic 06-30-04 06:04 AM

I’ll take this herb in pieces putting him in a lyrical shredder
So u think using cuss words continuously
...Makes u necessarily clever?
Rap is what I breathe battling as a predator stalking prey for the hunt
My rhymes are RAZOR sharp
…And yours are just BLUNT (wordplay with name)
As I flow continuously like currents marauding call me the river Nile
Your vocab just basic
… What do I expect your just a juvenile! (msn email address in his profile)

referring to hellrazor..guy above me just posted b4 me

Terumoto 06-30-04 06:50 AM

creamin this lad, cheesy n lame, im on top of this...
the cats an idiot... ima rename him captain obvious..
letters in brackets, explainin punches that only trib. to his wackness..
failed to adapt his style, got bout the same goin for him as a fascist..
spray-him-with verbs, relay-him-a-verse, props? im takin-em-first..
craving-the-hurt. stupid how he thinks wordplay is just playin with words..
claims that hes takin-some-herbs but only herb he fucks with is basil..
my punches will rattle, but you found out when i threw the shit at you..
im up-in-this-battle... Im writin over shit like you a toy n we vandals ..
you lie n i tattle... wack disses.. currently my dick-is the only thing that you handle..

MC AK 06-30-04 07:26 AM

one man band, shut the fuck up.. stick to music
go back to band camp n u no where to put the flute stick
cuz u a wak MC, u aint never pulled no jacks 'buddy'
step to me, n ill leave u black, blue n bloody
broken nose, bruised face n even ya eyes runny
u get so fucked up kids sayin "mommy, he looks funny"
march 2004, they shoulda showed u the fuken door
go back where u came, MC's like thesell make ya FACE hit tha floor
shit look at the time bitch, i wish i could stay
but im sick of ritin to a nigga thats just so fuken......gay

Terumoto 06-30-04 09:09 AM

... You aint shit.. presence complacent, plus every bar ya flow-snagged..
wannabe nigga.. you no thug.. your names bout as good as your vocab..
fryin-this-dill, this cat is a dude im just im dyin-to-kill..
my rhyme-was-just-ill... your verse was like mine miness-the-skill..

spitonline 06-30-04 10:30 AM

devil made me do it
 
You should practice more often find a spot and
meditate.
you a flyweight a lightweight das dealin witt a
heavyweight
take my advice for ya own good don't disturb
me
I could have sworn i heard ya entire style comin
from keith murray
ya not worthy and furthermore ya waistin
ya time
i know ya heard me you should take ya career
one step at a time
take time out to develope ya skill i'll be waitin for ya reply
till then time stands still

SixX da FinisH 06-30-04 12:41 PM

wat the fuck?
 
ayo dis boal trash tryna git complex n shyt/
yea dis tek in ma grip will git ya chest wet n shyt//
muthafucka who u? talkin bout u heavyweight/
i deal heavy-weights n even ma drugs couldnt keep u str8//
im diein laughin at this pussy, jus waitin to git fucked/
im playin russian roulette wit a full barrel, try ya luck//
dats 1 less pussy ass rapper to diss/
u could try n shoot me from point-blank n u prolly still miss//

bitch!ayo ne body dats aint scurred afta dis 1 got his den battle me pussies!!!
*COUGH ONE-MAN-BAND* BATTLE ME PUSSY!!
~1~

j_da_monsta 06-30-04 02:29 PM

Being lyrically inclined will always gain you respect//
How tha fuck is Sixx da Finish gonna kill me over the net//
respect is what you lack, death is always a rebel//
my mental crushes you reality, which is the size of a pebble//
you life blows through the wind, shatter you false reality//
even if you were my mirror reflection you still couldn't see me//
crush you whole head under the force of my bank statement of account//
with so much money, im the cause of the U.S. deficit amount//

MC AK 06-30-04 02:54 PM

they was an alrite verse dog, but anyway..........

so much money, forgot to mention he got it from bein a hoe
u suck dick for a livin.. !juz waitin! to get a tag on ya toe
shit, u tha type to see sumthin illegal n ring tha po-po
just so u know tho "THATS HOW SNITCHES GIT FUCKED UP" (d12 tune)
cuz j-da, vanilla ice or ja-rule, fuck it, ya all tha same
all yall got bitches lyrics lame, nuthin but mental drain
about the same ol shit, same ol niggas in tha 'game'
j-da monsta, u aint scary bitch u 'tame'
so im finishin this off, your rhymes cant compeat wit complexity
you a shame 2 tha matrix in ya av, "what a pity..........."

Terumoto 06-30-04 05:00 PM

AK sucks dick... im droppin one line but not yet could he step-next-to-me..
id make it longer but im still trying to rhyme "what-a-pity" with "complexity"..

riddlemethat 06-30-04 07:14 PM

one man band plays this shit all by himself, alone/
Still sleeps on the street cos he ain't got a home/
Lookin like combulsin, but he jus playin his drum/
Play the symbol between his knees like i play his mom/
5 dollar hoe she got to go before that one man show/
Stupid fuck got a thick afro, like Angela Davis, it glows/
Kill 'em in a minute cos I'm a dangerous lunatic thats minded/
Fuck that slut all night put my hand down for a tit, can't find it/

riddlemethat 06-30-04 07:17 PM

Mr shade? can tell you don't get laid or paid/
You made this hard for yourself, like arcade/
No style grammer or a structure, lyrical value? ShÃ-t/
I could scan ya verse for talent and see no sign of it/
I done never seen some simple shit like yours man its pitiful/
So I'll pity you, shit on you an spit at you like Beanie Seagul/

SixX da FinisH 06-30-04 07:33 PM

ayo riddlemethat, one-man-bitch, or shayde.... battle me, shyt should be fun merkin u pussies

Detrimental 06-30-04 10:32 PM

For RiddleMeThat

Speakin of bitches, Riddle Me That...Riddle Me this..
You are horrbile at rappin...like my ex girl is at suckin dicks
Talkin about gettin laid and paid, bitch you haven't seen pussy since you came out yo' mom
Shit you know it's true...i aint droppin a shell...i'm droppin a bomb
Scannin a verse for talent...i'd scan your whole body
Seeing any talent is more negative then you ever being an Illuminati
My rhymes would tear you up worse than a kid in Karate
Yea you speechless now...you have nothing more to say
I'll stop embarrassing you now...and continue a different day

B-Rad G 06-30-04 11:56 PM

Schematically in-substantial your verses are historically circumstantial
Your gone soft like hip-hop is gone commercial. Feeling is mutual
Couldn’t make money even if your boyfriend broke your pre-nuptial. Its lush
Finger your bum in the toilet then flush. You’re hiding the evidence
You are valuing safety over benevolence. Wack’ness over Cohesiveness
Don’t step to this. You will lose. Your dad spanked you when he was on booze
Turn of the news… and switch you on to Springer. So figure this.
Just dropped you down in a wigger dis.


Rate it before you hate it

MC AK 07-01-04 09:15 AM

this bitch thinks hes dope cuz he raps wit a dictionary
B-RAD G? you just mad cuz ya big words dont scare me
you a joke, when i come through ya tuck ya 'bling bling'
cuz ill stick ya fo ya cash, thats just my 'thing thing'
what chu doin uppin here, get the fuck back down unda
you aint shit but a bitch, u worse then a tranny on 'spinga'
u got kangaroos n daddys who beat u when they on 'booze'
even if you committed murda 1, u 2 ugly to get on the news
talk about radio-face, ill put u back in ya place
(news: aussie hip hop just suffered a loss...)
but u no what.....
they still dont have a picture of ya face
man u lil bitch.... u must be a bit 'poofy'
fingerin assholes in toilets... u fuken sick G
but put all ya weak raps away, u at an end
cuz ur goin out fasta then the next pop trend

Durmil 07-01-04 11:01 AM

puttin bullet holes this fake gun slingin bitch MC AK
Stayin by the beach the only way u gon keep this wolf at bay

KKbug 07-01-04 12:45 PM

boi you think you're so good
you have 24 posts i think you misunderstood
durmil what the f*ck is that
man i wish i had a f*ckin bat
you're from canada too
yeah i'm laughin what the h*ll you gonna do
you mite be 1-0 but you ain't bad
i mite be 1-1 but you pretty sad
2 line raps where did that come from
did you go to school you're really dumb
oh my god look what you've become
say something back i don't care what you do
it just lets me kno i'm loved by everyone but you

Yvonne 07-01-04 03:59 PM

ok lets carry on with the dissing!!!!

next person diss me....

Miss. Lyricist 07-01-04 04:12 PM

KKBug's stupidity ain't contagious, its outragious the way people got him shunned//
I'ma put him out his misery and leave the bitch stunned, like he was gunned//
I'll simply smash him like a beetle, or squash him like a roach//
After I finish spittin, he'll be polished like my broach//
I'm hot like fire, and because of this, his shit couldn't be drier//
200 million years later, he's a fossil, discovered in submerged brier//

MC AK 07-02-04 12:19 AM

the fuck is wit a 2 line response, that shit was weak too...

by tha way peep, no shit the AK in my pics fake.. it aint mine, i dont got a fuken camera, but yo if any1 can find a better pic of an AK that i can use in my sig then pm me tha links straight up... i gotta wait till i get a camera 2 make up my proper sig n ill put my pic up 2 in memba mugshots n all that aiiiiiiiiiight :thumbup:

the quiet one 07-03-04 02:32 AM

yo MC AK .......
mc ak you think you nice well heres a lessin/
i got a gun and a clip that tear yo chest in/
i spit deadly you show a gun and aint gansta/
i dont carry weapons and still kill more people than lung cancer/
from this moment on be very cautious/
cuz my flow so sick 2 bars will make you feel nautious/
when i grab a pencil i start writeing hits/
and just like the neptunes i stay wit the clips/
i shit on niggas when ever i talk /
holla at me cuz my dimes green and brolic like the incredable hulk/
holla at ya boy E.N.A.

AngrySquirrel 07-03-04 02:02 PM

ReplytoDragon1
 
MC AK what's the motherfuckin basis,
You got all 6's and 9's and I'm holdin all the aces
and by the way Why does your name have an AK
When I heard you wuz 9 when you gave Michael some A
So shut your mouth up you fuckin ass bitch
Cause Ima do you like saddam with a shovel and a ditch
And as for countin my lines don't go into fuckin shock
cause my words'll kick your ass, while yours'll suck my cock
So, I'm leavin now, bye bye you fuckin retard
Next time I'll drop off some viagra,
Maybe then your raps will be hard.

MC AK 07-03-04 02:32 PM

yo angrysquirrel, i think in ya blind rage you forgot tha topic
its 'diss tha person above you' not 'lets hear ya whakest shit'
did you really take 5 hours to rite that one rhyme?
the post above had been up fo ages "shit.. look at tha time"
i cant believe this kid really wanted to diss me that bad
n get merked for bein a shit MC.. maybe thats the reason hes mad
angry squirrel, that was shit.. ya first post was a mistake
face it, your bound to screw up in this rap board ya fuken fake
so go back to tha drawing board n write me another rhyme
ill come back in a month once ya finished, u still tellin me u need more time
pussy................

seriously, you either a really slow mu fucka or u got beef, which is it?

AngrySquirrel 07-03-04 02:58 PM

Alright, I admit it, that shit might have been misused
not half as bad as the last anus that you used and abused.
And by the way do realize that half your shit doesn't rhyme
perhaps you should take a lesson from me and take your fuckin time
so yeah i'm new here but im about to drop some hits
so pack your bags and move your ass or write some better shit
that previous shit you wrote while beating off to 8 mile,
shows that your shit, doesn't scare me, and sounds like its from a child
So get off your ass, pick up a pencil, stop fucking your little brother
and I'll come back and write a response as soon as I'm done with your mother

Ca'lam 07-03-04 05:15 PM

i'll drop a verse so fast, it'll have ya head twist off ya shoulders..
this kid aint even movin rocks, let alone budge some boulders..
couldnt cook rhymes, with "Salt N Pepper" in his tracks..(songs)
can see hes used to mook lines,wackness rubbed off when he spat..
ill take a word, flip it, then make you gargle in ya own failure..
i bet you work at mcdonalds, and type verses from ya trailer..
dont blame me because you couldnt hack "shit" with colon knives..
before you drop some shit like that ^, i advise you to think twice..


wow im bored as all fuck lol

Blaq-Ink 07-03-04 11:29 PM

im bored as fuck..lol...
hoops i laugh as im seein u try
u can BITE my bars but u'll never FEED-on-my rhymes

u free stylin ha....the only thing comin off the top off ya dome is dan-druff
how can u anyway cause ya words has a restricted distance like a cops hand-cuff

Yvonne 07-04-04 04:08 AM

son i gatta say this but u so wack!!
if those 2 lines were dissed,u need a slap
wake up it says disses the person above u...
not dick ryde d gayass above u.....
if ya didnt get it then dony drop...like a doped fool...
i dont wanna waist words on this Blaq ass...
so ima end up by saying drop an honest vote
in my wack ass battels below......lol...........thanx

yo u not the only bored 1..we in 2 ;)

MC AK 07-04-04 09:01 AM

yo styles got less then crackheads, ritin they wills
u rite whak shit fasta then richie rich makin mills
Xxxtasy, you jus made tha guiness book a records
worst use of lyrics in a battle 2 date, your right, a waste of words
head back 2 tha suberbs fasta then magnetic trains
even if u was speed racer, my bullet's ed hit ya brains
im on point like hollow point, ill go straight through you
you can wear double teflon, but im still gon kill you
so take my advice bitch, stick 2 ya fuken pills
if you keep rappin on tha innernet, your wastin ya dolla bills
so go bak 2 ya IP n tell em you wan a cancell
n let us be, if i was council, id use ya words as land-fill

brainsurgeon 07-04-04 08:33 PM

I destroy newbies, but in battle a vet is preferential
cuz this kid is a punch bag, I'll hit MA harder than any heterosexual
Your lyrics are off fool, this Nightmare easily ignored too
carrying a backpack into public aint enough, you needin a bomb too
with one word rhyme schemes, think you a object of envy??
If this faggot's face was on a milk box, wouldn't be a "suspected MC" (Missing Child)
I pity you very much kid Nobody feeling those fairy punches
This bitch is "a celebate pervert"; the fagggot aint "hitting anybody"

Jonix 07-05-04 04:00 PM

Ayo it might seem that your last two lines didn't match the rest,
I'll feed this fag a herb since his rhymes did not make any sense !
No offence kid, but you know I'm way iller than you
Leave the keyboard alone faggot and pick up a mic fool !
Cause' I'll be ready to battle you, you whack text-cee
You prolly can't rap at all, which then makes you a crap emcee !
Ain't no games being played, on how you label yourself a surgeon
I'll dissect your whole face before you could even call ME a surgeon !
fuckin' faggit.

Venom 07-05-04 06:00 PM

first off u need to get ya rhymes n ya punches tight//
u cant even spell faggot correctly get ya grammar right//
wordz iz wordz and they cant hurt shyt but feelingz//
u crackin on othaz but ur choice of wordz arent quite appealing//
im stealing off on ne dude who gets close to me//
dont talk shyt or find ya face on a missing poster b//
make a toast to me, not to roast wit me//
cuz everything i do is how its supposed to be//
im on chronic, ebonics but u neva catch me on phonics//
think quicka than 10 sonicz, carry devices that arent pneumonic//
so pick up da mic and talk to me jonix//
doggy im dominican and i eat shit like u like i eat rice//
u aint nice, dogg on ya last bar u used da same word twice//

holla bak 1

MC AK 07-06-04 06:03 AM

fuck this nigga, you talkin bout anotha mans gramma
look at yours, "shyt".. it aint a quite appealin manner
when you tryin 2 spit sum whak shit, ya words aint sick
you even admit, that u been smokin hard on tha chronic
you don watched 2 many movies, now u think u mel gibson
but u aint a lethal weapon, so just keep 2 steppin son
you aint even reppin son, fuck gunzwik, come 2 new york
niggas herell stick u up n cook yo ass like pork
stab u with a rusty fork, i see that you can talk tha talk
but when you try 2 walk, like new born, you tumble down n fall short
shit, im done wit chu, get bak 2 smokin yo chronic
you like an old mobil fone u got replaced by polyphonic

Terumoto 07-06-04 06:31 AM

Ima burn-this-bitch, discern-with-hits, scorchin-n-such..
youd think his lines constipated the way hes forcin-too-much..
distortin-his-mug, MC AKs verses are played, i think hes fetchin-for-rhymes
but he still flows wack.. for fucks sake dog please stop
s t r e t c h i n - y a - l i n e s

dunno why i did that..haha

Jonix 07-06-04 02:19 PM

This cat needs to work on his multies before he even spits
I'll be that nigga scorchin' wit flames leavin' ya crisp into bits
One man band, you need a crew to protect ya
I'll leave your name forgotten like D12 son, they're waitin' to collect ya
Stretch somebody's lines? You probly have strech marks on ya waist
Fatter than Pun behind a screen, bitch this nigga's a waste

Blah...

J Gutta 07-06-04 02:29 PM

aight Jonix...(santanna Town beat)..

Jonix Bitch made nigga

ayo check it i aint dipset..but i kno this boi aint eva grip tex//
and yo b;z up no crip set..and who am i gonna hit next//
and this bitch made nigga thinkin he bigg his name jonix//
he lookin nigga a lil no nigga..washed up lil onyx//
DIPSET DIPSET DIPSET..click click u got hit next//
tha text i grip and bitches i hit iz u funked out and flexed//
holla back bitch..once iam gon u gon miss me//
aight i wanna here tha next nigga that diss me//

e.z nigga wun...

HellRaZoR 07-06-04 02:35 PM

one man band yo lines compared to a 1nite stand
throw away the mic it doesn't belong in ya hand
weak shit u spittin tryin 2 drop a diss
errytime u droppin shit u make the miss
u might burn this shit , but u aint runnin this shit
fight with me , fuck it i wont fight sum fuckin lil kid
don't wanna make u cry while im killin u with my flows

HellRaZoR 07-06-04 02:38 PM

refferring to one man band
guys above posted just b4 me


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