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Kawn Flixx 09-19-04 06:58 PM

ha it do look ike a cum stain :laugh:

to TurnHeads:

your punchlines don't connect,they barely even hitstrait
be original nigga your names from a AND1 mxtape

ha
theres a ballplaya named turnheas :laugh:

crit next

shake-spear 09-20-04 12:23 AM

ya punches wont hit-me "sugar coated" like ya siggy/
and if proverses.::Rap Is Life::.his life must be shitty/

MsBoOtYpHaT4U69 09-21-04 10:56 AM

Mutha fuckas I'm back 2 spit a note of relief/
ya rhymes are more done than da Jay and Nas beef

Dirty Nigga 09-21-04 11:00 AM

Had A Sexual Relationship Wit Ya Mom n It Ended In ''S.T.D'z''..
Ya Rhymes Wouldnt ''Entertain The Black'' If U Was A ''Reg'' On 'B.E.T'

eph 09-23-04 01:15 AM

mama jokes have no affect, snap out of that 60's minute.
thinks hes fly, only pussy youve got also had the word tipsy in it.

Yvonne 09-23-04 11:33 AM

the only time u abuse is when the mic's put down ur throat (abuse)
u'ld be a head if u write..cos nb wanna hear a goat(write..opposite of verbal)

.Fatal Lyricist. 09-23-04 11:45 AM

i'll spit sum shyt lata

eXpLiCiT CoNtEnT 09-23-04 11:49 AM

ill be a "flame spitta" ill be banned "fo' bein too sick"
the only way you get votes is to be dick rydin "dicks"

cordless 09-23-04 02:22 PM

flow 2 crazy-
im busy like crosstown traffic and my name is jimi hendrix
run you so hard - you couldnt finish a sentence

thefranchise 09-23-04 04:03 PM

niggas fuck wit me and ill hit u wit the clip//
leave u niggas smaller than a chinese niggas dick//

Kawn Flixx 09-23-04 06:50 PM

^
yo that's mostly just a filler though

use some wordplay to make it better iight?

heres mine niggas:

you're not a "first round pick" you chosen dead last
you don't have "flow",you barely attempt even a "draft" :laugh:


get it nigga?

crit this please

peace

ill bing aka U.G 09-23-04 11:09 PM

oo thats iight check this

i slay emcee's more then blade slays vampires//
got you girl on my dick more then a baby on a pasaphire//

("i dont no if i spelled that right its the thing baby sucks on")

Pro. 09-25-04 07:21 PM

shit theirs no debate..with a record like Oh!! an 8//
Oh!!just wait.........................no need for a rhyme//
why?....cuz all he gonna do is recite an bite mine!!//
at night he's lookin for a gay plumber ta lay a pipe line//
he just lookin 4 tha right sign...leanin ta tha left //
every time he speaks he got Dick...beamin on his breath!!

flow2crazy 09-25-04 09:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by cordless
flow 2 crazy-
im busy like crosstown traffic and my name is jimi hendrix
run you so hard - you couldnt finish a sentence


Did i diss you or are you just jealous of my style~
Cuz your shit stinks like ol' dirty clothes in a pile~
^^no for real though u just dissed me outta the blue

The best 'chord' i heard outta u had 'less' sound~
The type where your words are nowhere to be found~

eph 09-26-04 04:33 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ProVerse
to TurnHeads:

your punchlines don't connect,they barely even hitstrait
be original nigga your names from a AND1 mxtape


diss to Proverse:
"im sick of this fagget".

ya droppin wack lines, maybe ILL cause ya spittin the flew.
dunk yo head in pussy, so ya ripe...n skip to my loo.


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