yo im up for TRY OUTS kiddo put me up in there

im ghetto pushing hondas no need for a lexus my records create a bigger buzz then beez in texas/ jus free ya necklace/ im spendin bigger checks find me in every hood like newprt ciggerates /not to figure yet u be a sore lover i got bitches in bikinis like ashantas source cover/ im a raw brother wit a sceamin team when ya only jump off is a trampaline/ hands is clean but i got grams of weed when im smokin wit my boys we got family trees...... ok thats enough holla at me PM me or IM me at LDUABGREP71 if im in ~UNO~

ok my thoughts first the style is simple and the name is wack your a raper? second the whole paragraph thing i didn't like. thrid you got a wack ass record of 0-1.

i say no but it ain't up to me

as for other catz on here um like drag-on you simple too and your name is taken but the record is ok so i say elevated and you might be in

ill bing aka U.G i personally liked it and i didn't read all the post so u might be in already.

Golden shellz i didn't like it and the guy in you sig is ugly.

golden shellz: elevate more i wouldnt alow you to come but trigga the masta so welcome...
lil bing : elevate
lyrikal: elevate too you ok though juss come bak
betarap or w/e the fuk you are: structer ya shit and no you fuking suck elevate more

all yall elevate and learn to structure ya lines
stop with the shitty selfglory usernames

lol
juss elevate

here im gonna spit this shit is hot plus my name is the lryicial virus brotherpara well her this is a true story well its not a story realy but its all true i am gettin better and better heres my verse i want in this shit!!!

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/
and how about i say it with a (shout)/ (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some hoe's/
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/
ill be one of the best not sayin im am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people who said i couldent do it with a threat/

im gonna be in audio soon so yea

holla back at me peace

check my shit out

^no...and the last 5 people that tryed out NO.....elevate and come back....and when my crew says NO...then go elevate and get some wins...this is not a newbie crew....uppin for more tryoutz

word we will acpet dope n00bs but you guys...fucking elevate then come back

yo i want in this shit

heres my verse

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/.
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/.
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/.
and how about i say it with a (shout)/. (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some pretty nice hoe's/.
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/.
ill be one of the best not sayin, i am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people that said i couldent do it with a threat/

you neeed a lil elevation try joining out side crew

werd....no more nooobs....