you're a odd ball like 3 testicles
that'll bust with no limit like mystikal

you dont take time ta notice that ya rhymes are barely floatin
Uve been cursed wit crap rhymes i was the one to deliver the potion

this kid aint sick but my punches will make'em vomit though
u say u deliver potion... when did u quit your job at dominoes?

lol ^

He thinks he has his rap rhyming picture perfect
I yell out ya name..but no ones herd of it!

this cats another kid that thinks he can fuckin rap,
even with L's and W's his skill always ends in ack,
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w-ack...l-ack...

you should just stick to poetry..cuz ur the worst at this
and how's he gonna end up in ack?
.....when no such word exists?.....

Trying to sound crazy? Sorry bro ya failed,
This dude hasn't be deranged, just derailed.

ur disturbing the order of arrangement ya sure is deranged
Ya got whack lines whack rhymes ya rhymes need change

watch you mouth...or rest assured..I'ma have u chopped in rations
& why you mentionin my name when u sopposed to diss revelation?

it was a late post you see an honest mistake
I dont even gutta diss u cuz ya ass is fake

u fukin suck,so shut your mouth fore you get laced hoe
and you talking straight out ur ass about that late post

Today, 09:56 PM #187
The Revelation
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Today, 10:01 PM #188
NiggaPlease
Do What You Say,Mean What You Do

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a late post?....5 minutes differnce between them kiddo :nono:

yo man u beef more TTI ya got urself a deathwish
You aint know wat ya doin dont step ta dis

and yo......i was watchin the vmas when i was postin in
get off my ballz nicca

i got a deathwish but like neglecting fathers..you don't pull through
And ur like some soft pavement way we ain't scared to step to you

you came at me when you sopposed to diss rev..you on my nuts nigga.

You act like you got cats behind ya well nigga ima find ya
My crew will whore you and own you so fuck you ha

dont even have to step.......to u..hoe.........im topical...and like i said....i was watchin the vmas nuff said

wat a pansy boy...gotta start crying and running to crew for help
so...go pussy... bring ur crew..I'ma stand alone & kill by myself\

And I know you are topical faggot...Hence..the reason we battling topical....and I am watching the VMA's too....STFU.