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Terumoto 07-14-04 11:49 PM

biggie... ill rip ya in two... my raps is pastin-ya-verbs..
wack bitch.. clairvoiant? quit makin-up-words...

Ca'lam 07-14-04 11:55 PM

raping-this-kid,caught him in the bathroom really taping-his-shit..
retracin-ya-skits,last time i heard of it was being wasted-on-spits..
hes lazy-with-flows,slow like he driving miss daisy-n-hoes..
hes amzingly-broke, chains small like i was blazing-a-rope..

switch it back up, more punches than gloves are allowed..
the only shit you rockin, is blacked-eyes from-me-now..
multi talented, matter fact kid, iv perfected ya style..
you not even shown love here,let alone respected in crowds..

tee hee.. shit liked this line right here:
the lines-ya-wrote-be amusing, but i hit hard rhymes-are-bruisin..
hottest verse u ever written... but think about whos-style-you usin?.(lmao)

flow2crazy 07-15-04 12:02 AM

I aint startin no beef... its a mother fuckin cypher...
Read the title chief... go on n change ur diaper...
U stink like a queef... shits never been riper...
when u said it was my tombstone... i know u were talkin bout pizza...
U couldnt bury me if u wanted 2... y dont u go to little ceaza...
Itll save u the cash that u wont b makin wit ur songs...
Just learn ur directions... cuz u dont know ur rights from wrongs...

Terumoto 07-15-04 12:11 AM

calamity:
ima treat ya verse like a cheap ho, and penny-fuck-it..
id post what i liked from u.. but i didnt like any-of-it..
I-rip-into-piles.. aint felt anything you writ-in-a-while..
youre supposed to be wack, so quit nickin-my-style!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rippin-him-when i drop, im like a narrator, spittin-the-end..
cos half ya verse was wack, the other half didnt-make-sense!!..


flow2crazy:

fuck.. if you bite your verses what youre lended-is-stricken..
n how u gonna start any 'beef' anyway.. when-your-a-chicken

Ca'lam 07-15-04 12:13 AM

hehe...

i be rippin-hisflow, everytime i drop a lyric, its be trippin-his-dome..
istrait bitchin-this-hoe,im bout to drop some c4 and be glitchin-his-home..
you tryin-to-hard.. my spits be hot, leave you crying-with-scars..
dying-with-sars..im implying-my-bars..retrying-is-flawed..quit lying-you-garb..(garbage)

im flushing-this-turd,roll up a blunt while im crushin-this-herb..
just joking-you-heard?, maybe not cause you deaf-as-a-clerk..*
im first guessing-this-merk, keying up shit that definatly-hurts..
these heaters-will-flirt, you opposite like deamons-in-church..


*=clearks listen to headphones when they clean some times..

flow2crazy 07-15-04 12:19 AM

O so we have a comedian in this thread...
Come to my block n ill leave u full of lead...
Whos biting shit in here by the way...
Im doin this off the top just like every day...
This sallys from the valley in Cali...
Dont dilly dally cuz for u there is no rally...

Biggie:
why r u even trying to keystyle...
U lacking the missing "key"... style...

Terumoto 07-15-04 12:45 AM

calamity:
Stop ruinin my style, it was good, but your lame-n-just-fucked-it..
ok man... you got the flow down.. now try incorporating-some-punches!..
im purgin-this-bitch, flock him with verbs, n he gets burned-when-they-hit..
try increasin ya vocab.. gay that u gotta shorten-words-so-they-fit..(garb?)

my verses are original so man, your copies-aint-fair...
AND quit usin hyphens when half ya multies-aint-there!!(retrying-is-flawed??)

flow2crazy:

yo, i know youre trying kid.. but youre verses are funny-they-not-rough..
the grown ups are talking now, would you mind shutting-the-fuck-up?


lol... you better not steal my style for good calamity cos youll never hear the end of it..haha

one

B-Rad G 07-15-04 02:10 AM

Calamity and One Man Band. Cartoon like raps another sammity-sam
Dick ride eachother, another Tommy & Pam.
Pimp side eachother, another blowy for some glam
Change your names from glen to gwen
Shemales to fe-men. Roosters to hens
Don’t ever say your hip hop like a pad an a pen

toy

B-Rad G 07-15-04 02:10 AM

Calamity and One Man Band. Cartoon like raps another sammity-sam
Dick ride eachother, another Tommy & Pam.
Pimp side eachother, another blowy for some glam
Change your names from glen to gwen
Shemales to fe-men. Roosters to hens
Don’t ever say your hip hop like a pad an a pen

toy

Ca'lam 07-15-04 02:32 AM

ok..

^im glad you applied, but its my job to let you know:Your rhymes are denied..
not even worthy of family guys,this herbs just rockstar,he rhymes in disguise..

brought forth to demise, and in my eyes i'd rec bad his entire record..
verbally tied his averx, so now he not even able to step quick..

ima train with these words, i'd run over ya gurl,put ending to worlds..
if ya verse resembled a rolly polly, it still couldnt suprise and unfurl..

mad scientist at work, all day amputatin wack emcees with no play..
stompin on ya solar shine, so you can say i gave you a sonny day.. (sonned him)

yeeeeehhh booorrreeddd

Terumoto 07-15-04 02:54 AM

yo im rappin-n-coastin, now ur writs are different, ya crap-just-dont-flow-son..
you got 100% shitter soon as u dropped my style n went back-to-ya-old-one..

lol... DISS ME

Ca'lam 07-15-04 04:02 AM

lol aight..

the reason you a one man band is cause no crew will inlist you..
couldnt come face2face with hard metal if beat with two pistols..
and you wouldnt be throat-hard, if i chocked you with BrimStone..
if i gave you a map-n-dolly, you couldnt carry this win home..
dont even bother replying with some multies and weak punches..
cause i'll eat you rutinely like you was PB&J in my lunches..

Terumoto 07-15-04 04:15 AM

not too bad man... im feelin some of the lines-that-your-writing..
maybe cos youre still using my style......... miness-the-hyphens..
I bring no weak punches n multiples, ignore-what-this-chump-says
you just gotta take out the "weak" and im packin "multiple-punches!"..

I'ma check-this-kid, flex-with-hits, n wreck-the-bitch..
If youre verse is no.1, then i guess the best-is-flipped..

lol

one

Ca'lam 07-15-04 04:21 AM

no need in using ya style, cause i would only be handicapped..
your style is played out, so im deciding to hand it back..
i cant believe the herbs rap, tryes to pursue some kinda fortune..
but everytime i read his lyrics,i slit my wrists while screamin "TORTURE!!"..
my style is much fresher, untouchable like L.E and NESS..
yea ya rhymes are pretty smooth, i guess if you minus Finness..(smooth lol)
raps not ya strong area, you and i both know it's true..
i would call ya rhymes weak, but even that rejected you..

Terumoto 07-15-04 05:53 AM

man, i know your type, what u doin is the lowest a-guy-can-do..
talkin all this shit to me, when it actually applies-to-you..
I drill-kids, with skilled hits, bitches like clam get killed-quick..
even if ya mouth had herpes ya still couldnt produce an ill-spit..

Youre just feelin raw cos of that time u got ripped-up-n-i-beat-you..
Im deliverin hot, and i aint talkin bout no pizza-or-chinese-food..
Stompin-this-lame, poppin-ya-frame, leave ya soft-in-the-brain..
im rockin-ya-game.. couldnt get ya verses on track if u hopped-on-a-train..

drop ya mic n tie the cord-on-ya-neck, this cats ignored-by-the-vets.....
ud think u was spittin with a 2 by 4, the way your shit BOARD me to death..
lmao.. lame...

u ready to battle yet?

one

Yvonne 07-15-04 07:34 AM

the fuck you get ur verse from?..its worthless than a condom
if this nigga calls himself an MC,then rap would fit justin and Nsync
i make you shut you filthy trap,cos thats not how to fucking rap
even if you the cat,i still finish you up,like jerry and the foolish cat(tom)..
from cali to I.T..peeps gon hear about the new anorexic gay
cos as you eat up my spit,you throwing up till you decay...
i give u 8 lines for today,the next 1 will be a page..
it wunt take me just a day,but a a sec to get u monk locked up in a cage..
so start diggin ya fucking grave,cos theres no space for you on the stage...

monk<<<<monkey

shadow 07-15-04 10:05 AM

^ the only weight he carries is his boyfreinds sack.....
he's wack..and he says hes good but its an act....
even though your a gay ill let that avatar stay...
leave it there its ur closest form of gettin pussy anyway...

Mad Dog 07-15-04 11:07 AM

This is a newb thread...so what u doin here?
Im only dissin here coz we aint battlin in the crew battle...
...but u know this is D2R's year/

So step aside Shadow and follow my lead/
Like ur name is supposed to do bitch diss the above...
...this is an easy victory/

No attempt at fightin i'll crack u mosaics/
Ur names fragile like what u named after...
...defeat aint nice...but its a shame u gotta taste it/

why am i here lol

La Cosa Nostra 07-15-04 11:23 AM

26-2, heres one for you, your whole verse was wrong, cuz X aint a dude
hate to be rude, n change the fun mood, but when shadows on stage, he only gets boo'ed
eat more food for thought, cuz your lossed for ideas, now get off the mic
what a surprize.. the crowd !cheers!, sin sparks your inner fears, bad dreams at night
u write child hood memo's........gettin fucked by transvestite, it aint right
like ya asshole, it aint tite, word is, you scream, while ya 'bf' tells you not to fight
despite, the fact that you think you can rap, im thinkin your crap.. n all ur spittin is wak
shit, your words get u slapped, only wrote 4 lines cuz ill skill is what you lack.

Edit: heh this was writtin in like 5 minutes.. eh fuck it.. this was 2 shadow if any1 didnt realise.

flow2crazy 07-15-04 12:41 PM

Sin? ha the only thing u done wrong is try to rap...
Win? yea right ull neva do that wit ur crap...
U need to understand im not trying 2 make u cry...
Im just givin advice cuz u stink worse than a pig stye...
Ur a transvestite? u made his asshole not so tight?
Thats not right! get outta the dark u gotta see the light...
I know u try to keep ur sexual desires hidden...
But u say ur tight... you got ta be kidden...

Yvonne 07-15-04 12:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by shadow
^ the only weight he carries is his boyfreinds sack.....
he's wack..and he says hes good but its an act....
even though your a gay ill let that avatar stay...
leave it there its ur closest form of gettin pussy anyway...

you go by the name shadow...with ur weak fucking line i see ur fame is hallow
you just like the some foolish cowards,be confusing me for a gay,when you pop ur ass for 1,backward 'n forward
i say im fucking good and i aint fronting like a bullet proof....

son,your lyrical condition,is critical as i fucking mention
you spitting like you in tention..if you dont fucking pay attention,
you'll soon collapse outta hipertention......................................

flow2crazy 07-15-04 01:11 PM

This boy wants to go to xxxtasy but thats not in his forecast...
Hes to busy runnin from fights and being the outcast...
Hes quotein shadow cuz his weak rhymes are overcast...
Stop dreamin bout being good... u wanted 2 race then came in last...
This niggas fly... weight i messed up there...
Ur plain like bread and butter... go away ur gonna make people stare...
Avator of a bitch u neva gon reach...
Stop dissin niggas whose rhymes u cant even breach...
Im feedin off ur shit so call me a leech...

Jonix 07-15-04 02:17 PM

And so we meet again, this faggot wants beef
Why don't you bustaz understand when I said not to mess with me
You just as dumb as that other dude that I dissed in this cypher
If it was you to diss me underneath, then I'll go hyper
Well maybe not, well cuz' you act like you black
You say the word nigga again you probably might get clapped
Cuz' you whack, I'm not believin' you callin' me English
I'm hotter than the equater burnin' there ain't no way you can estinguish
Flow 2 Crazy? It should be Flow 2 Fade Me
Diss your ownself in a cypher as this rattle is yours... since you cry like a baby
Maybe? Hah............................................... ...

flow2crazy 07-15-04 03:07 PM

Once again u need to realize... that ur the only one in a disguise...
Pretendin 2 b ghetto... then puttin mascara on ur eyes...
Ur new to this site so spare me the grief... of crumblin ur ass like a dried out leaf...
U put a mic in ur sig n think it makes an mc... to bad it aint helpin ur still flimsy...
Wear ur underwear over ur pants n say ur superman... burnin up like ur in a fryin pan...
U gotta realize ur not hot... only mental for comin into this spot...

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-15-04 03:26 PM

^lol

i could see dudes aint exspose u latley,fukk a army u betta stay close 2 navy's-
lyrically u a "sane-1" so how da fukk u gon come on here & say "flow-2-crazy"-

datz enuff rite there...get at me if u wanna battle

Smok 07-15-04 04:08 PM

Marvolous ya really not, its clear you got a problem wit rhymin.You say you got dem bisquits, but you ain't eatin, punk azz starvin and dyin.Ain't no savin yo private Ryan you and ya niggas soft like peaches.Yall never see no pu$$y even if you owned Miami beaches.Leave yo head holy like cheezes,see if Jesus walk wit you.See if yo punk azz dubs get you to tha hospital.I'm hotspital des not riddles I kick in a text.But if I see yo name again you'll be tha sickest on a stracha wit alasharations on yo necka bleedin on ya Mecca you know dat I'm betta.

Follow-Up 07-15-04 04:25 PM

u is a glock u look like a smok
stop, and shop, till you drop
im not a cop, i just like to pop
my album will flop while yours not
im hot, u drop, alot of hots
while im floatin away on the dock

man fuck this shit im banned from this bitch neway why not

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-15-04 04:39 PM

lmaooo^^^^

follow up is real trash did ya'll see da shit fam was writin?-
ima call you "wisdom tooth" now u got banned 4 "bitin"-

Smok 07-15-04 04:54 PM

Tha way you rap tha computer shouldn't let you post.Cause I'm quite sure that everybody would agree that ya raps is a joke.Ni99a I'm Smok, you better act like you wit tha program.Or get cancelled never seen again like tha Homeboys in Outter Space program.And I don't have ta repeat bars my freestyle fresh and so clean.Gon and try me like tha towers I put ya f*ckin head on lean.You better believe I'm mean you know Smok spit wit a hot mouth.My words pushin on yo rib cage waitin on yo heart ta pop out.

Yvonne 07-15-04 05:36 PM

nigga shut ur ass up...cos you just a wack fuck....
your text record tells enuff...all u gatta do is duck...
my pc kisses me..while your fucks up..you a bitch...
you just a down fall to ur fam,staying herre cuts roots you from the ground..
if you wanna call me a bitch change punch trick..cos it off reign now
i aint never seen a nigga cant spell "bitch"..u just a lousy fucking prick
so i shut ur lips with iron steches..so next time u think b4 u spit

Smok 07-15-04 05:58 PM

It seems ta me dat yo stupid azz been poppin too much X.So I guess you a Ja fan I bet you gon start singin yo text.Yo flow is a reject from a stack of rejects yo respect don't exsist like pu$$y you don't get.Be wit a chick and won't hit,but you a lick tha muff.I don't care bout ya text record I will fuck you up.Tha people can see and spectate yo rhymes is so shitty they stink.You usin dem drugs I can tell its startin to affect what you think.Stupid azz hang it up you not fuckin wit me.And ya pic fits you right, you a bitch dat need ta have a set.

Yvonne 07-15-04 06:32 PM

i see u trynna hit me hard cos u a 50cent dick ryder
if u can fuck me up,make ur record show u a winner
a looser in text,a looser in audio..and to finish it up..a looser in rapperz
i know mine aint much,but i bet one line and a punch,
will get you brushed out..leaving u like a clunky cunt..
take a look at your structure,looks like a bitch under preasure
that shit brings nothing but sorrow,i borrow u my spits till tomorrow
cos u deliver this for u to swallow,i aint no fucking homo
im a gurl and bust in solo,so check what you think..u fucking transvestite
9 posts and new to RB..i'll make u know this is more than the army
i'll bomb ur fucking country,and be more brutal than the iraqi...
the fact that you spit back shows u the fucking fan of ja brat
stupidly claping back...when u already eaten up bu the cat....
i aint in to X and if i was..i pop 1 and i put u to rest
come back online and place this post on ya chest...
u aint even got 1 u the fucking old vest..............

1

Yvonne 07-15-04 06:33 PM

i see u trynna hit me hard cos u a 50cent dick ryder
if u can fuck me up,make ur record show u a winner
a looser in text,a looser in audio..and to finish it up..a looser in rapperz
i know mine aint much,but i bet one line and a punch,
will get you brushed out..leaving u like a clunky cunt..
take a look at your structure,looks like a bitch under preasure
that shit brings nothing but sorrow,i borrow u my spits till tomorrow
cos u deliver this for u to swallow,i aint no fucking homo
im a gurl and bust in solo,so check what you think..u fucking transvestite
9 posts and new to RB..i'll make u know this is more than the army
i'll bomb ur fucking country,and be more brutal than the iraqi...
the fact that you spit back shows u the fucking fan of ja brat
stupidly claping back...when u already eaten up bu the cat....
i aint in to X and if i was..i pop 1 and i put u to rest
come back online and place this post on ya chest...
u aint even got 1 u the fucking old vest..............

1

Yvonne 07-15-04 06:33 PM

i see u trynna hit me hard cos u a 50cent dick ryder
if u can fuck me up,make ur record show u a winner
a looser in text,a looser in audio..and to finish it up..a looser in rapperz
i know mine aint much,but i bet one line and a punch,
will get you brushed out..leaving u like a clunky cunt..
take a look at your structure,looks like a bitch under preasure
that shit brings nothing but sorrow,i borrow u my spits till tomorrow
cos u deliver this for u to swallow,i aint no fucking homo
im a gurl and bust in solo,so check what you think..u fucking transvestite
9 posts and new to RB..i'll make u know this is more than the army
i'll bomb ur fucking country,and be more brutal than the iraqi...
the fact that you spit back shows u the fucking fan of ja brat
stupidly claping back...when u already eaten up bu the cat....
i aint in to X and if i was..i pop 1 and i put u to rest
come back online and place this post on ya chest...
u aint even got 1 u the fucking old vest..............

1

Yvonne 07-15-04 06:34 PM

i see u trynna hit me hard cos u a 50cent dick ryder
if u can fuck me up,make ur record show u a winner
a looser in text,a looser in audio..and to finish it up..a looser in rapperz
i know mine aint much,but i bet one line and a punch,
will get you brushed out..leaving u like a clunky cunt..
take a look at your structure,looks like a bitch under preasure
that shit brings nothing but sorrow,i borrow u my spits till tomorrow
cos u deliver this for u to swallow,i aint no fucking homo
im a gurl and bust in solo,so check what you think..u fucking transvestite
9 posts and new to RB..i'll make u know this is more than the army
i'll bomb ur fucking country,and be more brutal than the iraqi...
the fact that you spit back shows u the fucking fan of ja brat
stupidly claping back...when u already eaten up bu the cat....
i aint in to X and if i was..i pop 1 and i put u to rest
come back online and place this post on ya chest...
u aint even got 1 u the fucking old vest..............

1

flow2crazy 07-15-04 10:27 PM

postin 4 times n it still aint a good spit... after the first time you shoulda quit...
The only way ull sound good is to have it prewrit... cuz all u got is weak shit...
Ur like a blunt u gonna get hit... blow u out like a candle and thats it...
Its over now ur saga is complete... dont know when it started u never could compete..
U wouldnt be hot if u were on preheat... slowly ur disses are starting to deplete...

Terumoto 07-15-04 11:58 PM

my raps rip you up n leave you messed-with-ease..
after you get votes... all the voters gotta check for STDs..
I dont give a shit about ya, youre just another-ta-fall..
cos like "music with santanta" your simply "nothing-at-all"..

If i my nuts is dry, i can get cumback by ya drool-n-spit..
kid rides dicks liek nothin else.. and boy hes got the tools-for-it..
ya gon get get hurt-n-mauled, im dope and alertin-y'all..
Ima lend ya a belt, pussy... just so ya skirt-dont-fall..

Wordz AhGod 07-16-04 12:53 AM

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One Man

my slugs get spread like the end of onemans lines/
I'll flip quarters at my building, while whachin my dimes/
I kick start Ur heart, let U get speratic/
befor U met me, Ur pace maker always red "inactive"/
Im bringing silence to lambs, U herds get shot on site/
thats why I login to RB, like a nerd I'll control, alt, delete ur life/
Hold Ur mic like I do Ur heart, wit a strong grip/
Ud better pack for a hot life time, cuz aint long for this/
I'll snatch Ur backpack befor U pull Ur book out and retaliate/
Multi master? U aint never met Rakim even back in 88'/
Ur lady hates the way these breaks daily devistate and shake a bitch wit lyrical showers/
but lately the way U make me is enouf to take these rymes into the lab for hours/
I'll crush this cypher and shit on niggaz wit no clue/
U couldnt see my punchess? I dont blaim U, the hits went completely thru U/

Speak

P.s. vote on my battles on honestly in my sig, It would be much appreciated.

ProForm 07-16-04 11:47 AM

This nerd is equipped with his comp and his brain,
Working together to leave youre whole mentality drained.
But thats cos YOU'RE a dickhead, and HE loves to dry cocks.
Spat in his face that brang him down, leavin this Eye Dropped.
He talks hard for a geek, yeah Im speakin sly dude.
Fuck, middleweight, and still he spits those weak-ass lines noobed

flow2crazy 07-16-04 12:49 PM

proform i missed ur form... ur rhymes were weak like an old lady...
im rainin on u like a storm... in the 80's ur words werent trendy...
Im gonna put u on a skillet...then serve u up...
Ur style makes me laugh harder than a joke...
I left ur ass in the dirt then went to smoke...
ur style couldnt faze me if it was a brick...
Cuz im the hardest ever to kick...
So heres some... chill out...
U gotta stop pretendin... before steam starts 2 spout...


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