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Black Queen 12-20-04 02:29 PM

yeah, i may be young, but at least i can spell//
dawg, you supposed to go back to class after the recess bell//
you need to go back to school, try something new like learning//
cause everything you know now, you bit off bert and ernie//
your style is fucking boring, using the same words like penis, spittin, and gay//
man, i did you a favor, signed you up for the dictionary.com word of the day//

NewKid 12-20-04 02:52 PM

This Chick Iss More Of A Herb Than Nick Or A Dime..And She Does More Tricks With Her Hands Than A Mime..A Circus Lion This Feline Needs Ta Be Tamed Like A Head Surgent She Knows About Brain..
She Will Soon B A Cheap "Hor-Net" Like D-Wesley..How Is She A Black Queen When She Resembles Big Bird Off Of Sesame Street...

Def by Mouf 12-20-04 06:19 PM

Not only you but your rhymes stink....
Your attempt to freshen them up sucks...no wonder they're pink...
Your more horrible with every punch you throw...
And get fucked over more than brazilian hoes....
U must like bein on top...no wonder you postin in here...
I mean i would do it more often but my calculations don't = queer...

Devistation 12-20-04 09:52 PM

^^^^^^

This dawg is whack, I will turn you to rubber like that,
Your style is so unsolid, You couldn't even come back,
Snap, thats the shit that i like to convict with this,
But I owuld like to sincronize my verse and confirm my diss,
So when the cops come to take your home for eviction,
You will find how my rhymes are a lyrical addiction.

Word.

Def by Mouf 12-20-04 10:44 PM

Man ur verse needs more than sychronization...
Let's look for ur skill....i think u misplaced it....
And might i add to hasten...ur wack ass abilities....
I may be wack but at least people are feelin me....
Yeah u've devastated us all by just replyin....
But u'll soon be devastated by ur extinction like Mayans...

.Fatal Lyricist. 12-21-04 01:13 PM

Whoa...^^^ wack

Dis wack dude shood battle me if he wanna get murked up, word up.....
Cuz u da wackest black dude i eva seen or heard of......
Get off da site try sometin new like skatin........
Or matta fact stay home n do wut ya avatars statin......
U cant dodge dese bullets wit a great vest,........
i'll fill u wit so much lead dat i cood write wit chu on ma state test......

MaRVJay 12-22-04 01:06 AM

lol^^......

fam stop u dont u run with da lead,u a snitch dat run with da feds...
when i came 2 where u "from:" u was hidin "in ur house under ur bed".....
you aint shit ur less than me,matter fact u cant name a sicka vet than me...
do somthin else wit ya life cuzz u suck as a (sigmaker/topcial/textmc)...
lol....

Ill-Grammatix 12-22-04 01:17 AM

all you bums should stand down til the coast is clear
peep the last 5.... that's why i don't post in here

Louisville 12-22-04 01:27 AM

I feel "ill" even tho I aint "ill",
Yall cats is sick n this forum like me takin pain pills,
When i aint got no pain,yall lames still lackin game,
Im mackin dames just like hovas real mack is dame,
Uhh...i show respect in abundance eat weak fucks for lunches,
then i get u feeln soft like pac in poetic justice,....
but now im disgusted cuz my gold plaques have been rusted,
cuz i started wit "ill"s" name now my future is nothing,u nothin!!!!

MaRVJay 12-22-04 04:11 AM

why do even rap fam??? seriously u get 1 bar datz it........

im just speakin da facts,its no hope 4 u fam ya weak wit da raps...
and 4 spittin dat bullshit "louisville" u should get beat with a "bat".....

George K.Stanza 12-22-04 06:27 AM

dam kid's ill spillin blood, duke above em had no luck
after all it only took marv one bar...to prove he was wack as fuck
smack this slut but i'll go easy, n still leave em completely whored
cus i'd let you keep a shread of dignity..if you actually had some before
apathy's no chore when it comes to you proof of your parents shame
yeah you suck dick but your too stupid..to refer to it as giving brain

MaRVJay 12-22-04 06:51 AM

lol....

give it up stupid u'll get money off a rap-tour-fam!..
u use da losin ya dumb ass is probly a raptor's fan...
but how could steal ya name from a fat bald man.....lol
wordplay,punches,sickness period umm u lack all man!!
ya flow is weak....totally how can a poetry dude control a beat?
u know its heat,n only "cover" you gon be on is when u "go da sleep"

lol..fukk out of here stupid

George K.Stanza 12-22-04 07:17 AM

Marv's looking for attention hoping someone thinks he's ill
so he decided that he'd rhyme man with man...just to show his skill
on the real he's still tryin to learn the ropes, so i put it round his neck
because if i took the multies out his verse...there'd be nothing left
so don't expect a punch from Marv, plain n simple the fag's a dunce
alreday running outta ideas so he just went back to a seinfeld punch

MaRVJay 12-22-04 12:05 PM

dis dick neva heard of wordplay..i had typo's notice i ate em still..
fam stop feedin of my bar's tryin da use my flow as ya trainin wheels..
fagget nigga forcin gramma,madd at jay cuzz da boi banana's....
afta i take his "legs off" how ya gon call his george k."stan(za)"???..

nuff said

Scareface 12-22-04 12:20 PM

Look at This rookie wit The name of Marvjay
put em in A Blnder so his ass can be Carved Gay
How dare you try to Boast wit 17 post and no wins
And if ya want ya talent back.....its gone wit the wind


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