Ight DV heres wat I wrote to my girl for takin me over another guy when I've wanted to be with her forever. And its a real fast 6 line verse/poem ight.

Damn I can't face it without you girl my lifes stripped bare naked.
call it what you want to but all i know is that im Forsaken.
First Ty then this guy i gotta dry my eyes for so long i've cried.
night after night head torwards light in the sky askin god why he took the love of my life.
Why diana why you doin this to me when all I know is that you could be fuckin him underneath the sheet.
Im drowning will you help me to my feet with you im complete but now I don't know how much longer I can breath.


and yea DV I know lines are stretched as FUCK but I can fix that with no problem ok. :thumbup:

So wats up DV havn't heard from ya and watcha think about my verse/poem above? :thumbup: good enough to join A.I :huh:

Liked the 2pac sig but the others no...

lets see some more... take a lil more time like a hour or so or more and lets see it then

didn't have time to do it so i did a 15 minute sig but here it is

This i was not feeling it. sowwy buddy

Unless u come some shit more complex than this.

Ight heres a verse/poem collab I did with a homie of mine about how a girl fucks you over in life ight.

Love is verbal reaction, just another transaction
get whats commin ur way for what you did
tried to keep dark secrets in shadows hid
under sheets fuckin him thinkin of the sick shit you did
said you love me & I believed you bitch even wanted to have a house,kids, and a white picket fence & shit
Its been 3 months since we broke up so you must be desperate
everyday you left my mind swept clean like anti-peresperant
I thought lookin in your eyes was like tellin truth
you left my emotions played with im scarred you left me bruised
thinkin you loved me damn what a fool
you opened my eyes im not blind
you look like shit but you was a queen with me
my paths open now no longer my heart bleeds
you opened my lungs suffocatiing no longer I breath
What was sought out to be you demolished my train of thought
and doin shit behind my back only becoming a Enemy
so now your with him instead of me
I never wanna see you again bitch Good Bye,Adios,Capiesh

*Glares*

1st- take A.I Sig off your shit.


2nd- the shit u just posted doesnt make commen sense and if u wanna be w/ A.I thats a weak verse and you cant beat any1 in our crew

3rd- GFX wise you got potential but it looks like you use pictures of artist and just write something underneith......so Diabolic aka Scuff would son u in GFX

So famo ...i dont think you got anythang we look for...........dont take this the wrong way i just tell it like it is...

^^is better then your whole crew and surprisingly not on your damn list here on the first page:/


DV.............is good
Calamity...........is good
Omen.....is garbage as hell in all aspects
Acuity........is also garbage
Revoke......is also garbage
Nostradamus .....is a legend in topical but not active
[Dot.Effextz]......who???
Mike Lowery ......is a convicted bitter many times over wtf is he doing here?!!:/
Sik Wit It....is defintaly not suiting his name
Diabolic.........isnt even on rv anymore:/
ECKO ...is garbage and a crew hopping groupie
Flow Intelligent ....i mashed him and hes garabe as fuck probally the most overrated on here

d.v your making the old crew look bad with this wack roosta
:/

where the fuck is tito and seventhird?
where the fuck is diabolic?
where is saran?
where is d.i game?
where is lady fiyas name on the shit?

wtf shit looks real garabe now and mad dog is here?!!you might as well let dopium and kontroversey in:/

kneegrow..lol^^if u havent heard thats not our roster anymore...changes occurd..

Ight well peace. Oh and CALI didnt we drop the beef? cus why u gotta piss and moan about everything DV I do but oh well fuckit if u wanna actlike ur 7 then be it.

dopium we dropped the beef but your still holding mine:/

hahahahahaha

anyways d.v show me the new list and ill say wether i wanna be down or not.you already no no poet you have can beat me and text id mash 99 percent of your crew and audio id smash at least 90 percent so let me see the list now or ill be forced to son a.i again:/remember last time?i beat 12 of your members then reitred when i grew bored dont make me mad:)

CALI does it seem to you like im elavating? :huh:

And Beefs Droped. :thumbup:

Cali....ho....watsgood

Authentik Intellgience .. [ if i spelled it right or A.I. ]

Good Luck with the crew. :thumbup:

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