thats why im blowin this thread up....

word, agreed... Troop Tito and RK's good.. let them in.. :thumbup: , seven don't blow up the thread, rofl...........

yo.... i wana try out.... i'm mainly text... but here's a topikal i did bout 20 minutes ago when i saw a topik on RV i decided to have a go at writing bout it...... holla

Topic: “Blood Drenched”



[6:00 am] It begins……..

My watch reads 6:00 am, now it’s all about to start….
Adrenalins running, almost moving faster than my heart….
The clips are in, loaded…….. With balaclavas on….
Who no’s... maybe we’ll make it... or something may go wrong….
We all enter the van…. Confirming our plans….
Hands shaking, unsure, but we all believe that we can….
We drive by the police… who are completely unaware…
Or care that we are performing and operation which will bring death and fear….

[7:00am] Ready and loaded…….

We exit the van, hands on our gun handles….
Our sniper looks for good angles, while my other men scramble….
Through the ventilation shafts, face sweating with fear….
We peer through the gaps, no sign, the coast is clear….
The ropes are thrown down, we all slide down….
We are currently unnoticed, but all it takes is sound….
We crouch down, check the surroundings then gaze through the glass….
Guards are striding past, one of my men started picking the lock fast….
It was time at last, we kicked open the door…..
Civilians drop to the floor and bullets begin to soar……..

[7:35am] Clean break in………

There was quick and utter chaos, and the floor was stained red….
Five guards shot dead, one lying in a blood shed….
I sped to the alarm, typed in the stolen code to disarm….
I was pleased with my work, now I was slightly calmer….
I made the decision and my men moved into position….
It was an easy task now that we had taken out our opposition….
We jogged down the hallway, looking left and right….
There it was just a head, the vault was in sight….
We stopped in front of the door and set the explosive charges….
“BOOM” we stood pleased, while our problems list enlarges….

[7:55am] Trapped……….

There it was right in front of us, I put down my pistol…..
I walked to centre of the room, to examine the nuclear missile…..
I here shots out side… damn! Just lost my sniper….
My men pick up there guns and get ready to fire…..
We wheel the missile down the hall, until we hear footsteps….
We look left, ran out a door and we hadn’t even looked yet….
There they were waiting, about 30 members of the army….
Bullets begin flying, my friends dropping around me….
I leave the nuke, deciding it’s not worth my life…..
I’m on my own now and weapon less, except for my knife….
I climb into the ventilation, attempting to get away….
But then I stop…… and start clutching my chest in pain ….

[8:10am] Is this the end?..........

I lay in the vents… clutching my chest in pain…..
I had been shot, and now my clothes were a big blood stain….
I should have considered consequences, taking this job…….
And that would have stopped, me and my friends getting pointlessly shot….
I only thought of my self, and all the money I could get…..
Starting thinking of the past, man I wanted to be a vet…..
Why did I take this path, why was I greedy…..
Why did I not think before I started this bleeding…
Well this is it, I could feel it as my heart began to clench…..
Now all that was left was a terrorist and a blood drench…..

Yea both in
tell em 2 Pm me for the Passes

don't worry about it, i'll give it to them, Troop...

yo people can say i new round this part of town jus havin a look around wonderin if i could try out in here

drop a verse...... did u come from another site..?

lady whats ya aim? or msn..

yo nah i just been looking around on therhymepaper, rapbattles. here there and every where. so this is jus a little ish off the top of my head i usally do keystyles freestyle and what not so yeh. havent really battled before write songs and ish but aiight.

I could beat a verse out of a stainless steel wall
Blasting through writer’s block whenever my lyrics stall
Subject changes to come with and twist the opposition
More fashioned then r Kelly in an awkward position
I’m so corrupted and insane I even got myself disgusted
My ish so special it took the place off of ketchup next to mustard
The darkest warrior also known as a twisted, freak genius
I speak insane, demon, gangstuhh not only English
The introduction of the mad professor and outsider
Get ready cause compared to me you ain’t seen a dickrider
This culture is for rent but you couldn’t afford the bond
I’ll stab at you stem cells until your children start to respond

so what yall think bout my topikal above^^^ in?? yes or no

psykosis, not bad last bar was nice.. but no----elevate... :thumbup:
topical was pretty nice, 4fil, i'd have to ask everybody else on that one... it was str8 tho...

................Nuff Said.....
and fiya change that 2 A.I General Duchess..

boo@! when u change it.. or did i read it wrong on the roster.. rofl

^we not takin' over just merging, we loved the council when we were there and A.I. under Deadly's control took us as good fam, much respect and all... it's not a takeover, we just one big fam, makin' new changes around here... haven't heard from u in a long time verbal abuse, and uhmm willa said she's considering closing the femcee tourney, the whole forum..! iz crazy, but yea i'll see ya around, girl.. pz..