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Pop Lotty 12-01-04 03:26 PM

thought this would be dope, but what's winning matter...
when they put me up against the retarded jimmy fallon?
lol
got a rare habit, confused by the cam you just stare at it
and try pointing to ya homies for help...
but theres no one there, faggot
lol...
& you gotta be prepared, thought i warned you hos
cuz it seems like the curve life threw you, went & formed your nose
lmao....ahaha
got a missing tooth there, & i was wondering why
but i found out it just up and ran for the hills, found under ya eyes
wack
ya face's peaks and valley's, i'll tell ya how its looking, son
that ya cheek's sprouting another nose, to make up for ya crooked one
ehhh...
your site's a bad omen, i dont take it light dude
and i just hope posting that pic... won't crash this site too
lmao
watch this kid fall, with my fists' impact ya chin's mauled
cuz see, shadow's will leave pulsate, with no contracting involved
coo punch
see, shadows edge is deadly, you'll never best me
cuz its clearly spelled out...
that the end of pulse, is always SE
ok

Phantom 12-01-04 04:54 PM

I didn't think it was that good but w/e

headgames 12-01-04 04:58 PM

Old skool man, old skool^^ *loving it*

Phantom 12-01-04 06:14 PM

Yeah, I just wish I can get my FIRST sig back.

I still have the CB one but, meh.

headgames 12-01-04 06:15 PM

what was your first sig???

headgames 12-01-04 06:15 PM

Phantom's gay it's ok
noone likes him anyway


Mad multi's rate hoe
Join the council hoe

gunit101. 12-01-04 06:28 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Phantom
I didn't think it was that good but w/e


:shrug:

different strokes for different strokes.

you just prefer mens strokes is all.

Phantom 12-01-04 07:30 PM

Oh, im dead now. :(

Someone drop a verse and bring me back.

Nynth Degree 12-01-04 07:40 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by headgames
what was your first sig???

The one with the hand, 'member?

Phantom 12-01-04 07:42 PM

You memberrrrrr.....;)

headgames 12-01-04 07:57 PM

yes I do, I remember now

streetryda 12-01-04 09:49 PM


critique this!!!!



Im breachin zeke and deke'n his punches and stuntin this yungin's growth...
im gross like cigarette smoke, float in ya lungs leadin to murda she wrote...
coat ya ass with lead cuz i cocked and stocked it with 16 hollow tips quick...
emit ya to heaven cuz i stoop'd to Zeus' group levels and write fluke hits...*
Bettin me and hound leave ya steppin down now thats a simple Epic Ultimatum...*
played~em and deflate~em cuz this made~em outa breath with how i degrade~em...
rezerektin~em but my lines infectin~em and wreckin~em in a state of emergency...
forsee the mercy after my punches start roundin up like im battlin guernseys...*
sicker flows? ya wicker goes out when my quicker wind blows and shows ya up...*
baretta's i stick both up and boast up about my heat got ya ina toasted muck...
roast this kid who claims to take RV to its grave but see ur lines are played...
sawyed the verdit away cuz i persuade the votes cuz i displayed how ur afraid...

*zues is an alias he had
*epic n ultimatum r 2 more alias'
*gurensey is jersey daury cattle
*play on his sig

headgames 12-01-04 09:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetryda

critique this!!!!



Im breachin zeke and deke'n his punches and stuntin this yungin's growth...
im gross like cigarette smoke, float in ya lungs leadin to murda she wrote...
You tryed to hard to flow and missed out on a hard punch
coat ya ass with lead cuz i cocked and stocked it with 16 hollow tips quick...
emit ya to heaven cuz i stoop'd to Zeus' group levels and write fluke hits...*
No
Bettin me and hound leave ya steppin down now thats a simple Epic Ultimatum...*
played~em and deflate~em cuz this made~em outa breath with how i degrade~em...
ehhh
rezerektin~em but my lines infectin~em and wreckin~em in a state of emergency...
forsee the mercy after my punches start roundin up like im battlin guernseys...*
almost
sicker flows? ya wicker goes out when my quicker wind blows and shows ya up...*
baretta's i stick both up and boast up about my heat got ya ina toasted muck...
wack
roast this kid who claims to take RV to its grave but see ur lines are played...
sawyed the verdit away cuz i persuade the votes cuz i displayed how ur afraid...
wigitty wack


Ok, look, quite the multi's for now and start paracticing on throwing harder punches and use more personels, also, you have to get more complex with your wordplay, after you elevate in that, then you can start battling with flow and mult'is add dope punches wordplay and personels and it'll be a deadly conection. As of now, you look like you would do well in songs and topicals... try a lil of that

Wickedclown 12-01-04 10:57 PM

ayo this is an open mic done by me and Zeke. mine is the last 2 verses.
let me know what yall think of my portion of it......



Zeke First Verse-My First Girl
Thinking About You Girl Coz I'm So Far Away From You...
Wanting You To Know That This Love For You Is Always True...
Not A Day Goes Bye That I Dont See You In My Eye...
But I Try To Cary On My God So Lonely I Could Die...
And My Hart Feeling The Sparks That You Be Giving Me
Why We In Two Different Places Girl You Know It's Insanity
Seeing You Is What I Need To Carry On.....
This Song Is What I'm Sending To Your Girl It's Bin To Long

Hook-Zeke

You Are More Then Just My Friend....I'm Gonna Love You Girl Untill The End...Coz You Are More Then Words Could Say...I Love You Girl In Every Way..

Zeke-Second Verse Movoing To A New RelationShip
I'm Standing Closer Don Know What To Say But I Wanna Get Close To You.......
Your Looking Lovely Delicous And Fantastic Attracting So Refreshing Girl You Make Me Feel So New.....
But I Dont Even Know Your Name Girl Spology..........
And I Just Saw You Smile But That Wasnt Nuff For Me
5 Minutes Of Your Time A Short Converse And I Will Be Satisfied....
So Tell Me What Would You Do If I Came And Talk To You Would You Turn Your Back And Walk Away?...
Or Will You Stay Give Me The Time Of Day Girl I Wanna Get To Know You Tell Me What's The Best Way?....
I Dont Know If I Stand A Chance With You In My Arms Tonight...
Tell Me Baby That You Want Me Like I Want You So I Can Hold You Tight...

Hook x 2


WickedClown-His Relation Ship Status
just me an' you baby boo, imma hold you true all through the night
and to your delight i turn down the lights slip under the covers outta sight
gettin to the sexual healin you deserve, makin ya swearve
payin attention makin sure to hit every curve, tantalizin every nerve
gotcha hollerin out sayin my name, hold tight baby gurl to this moment
right now we the closest we ever been just take my hand and hold-it
while i take you away to a land of extacy, come away with me and you will see
the beauty of this land to be while i show you things outta this earth and wordly
cause with me baby gurl nothin will ever harm you, slip away and let ya mind drift too
ya here with me baby boo and and nothin can change that, not even the time that insues


Hook x 2


WickedClown-Closer Ending It
... now that the motion has ceased the magic dont have to end
thats why this letter of love im here to send and your past wounds to mend
never could i hurt you in any way, a thousand poems i could say
but none of them could ever show the way i truley feel inside every day
so lay back and relax baby gurl as you fall asleap in my arms
know deep inside you will never know the meaning of pain and harm
slip away into a deep slumber and dream of the days to come
and know the love we share is felt only by the luckyest of some
no one could ever come inbetween us and thats my word as a man
we can do it all boo, belive me if anyone can do it we can
togeather forever, you and i as we watch the hour glass lose its sand


Hook Fade Away

Pop Lotty 12-01-04 11:00 PM

Battles only.....


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