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riddlemethat 01-23-05 08:52 PM

Wow, with a mug like that I'm surprised you posted it//
One under an still think you're hot, but your not...You shit//
Reppin a label no one's ever seen nor heard of, it's under. gagged//
Your rhymes couldn't fight their way out of a pink wet paper bag//
Point ya finger at ya self cos thats who you dissin everytime u spit//
You a lyrical disgrace, I'm all up in ya face, leave you 6ft under in a pit//
You a disgrace to tupac take his name of your sig before I puke//
Put ya pen an pad away an freestyle to me you pre-written gook//

Detrimental 01-23-05 09:48 PM

You better pass the mic dude before i puke
You joined in may but still seem new
You always had a dream to be on top of the game
Couldn't do that unless you stood on top of a plane
Back off before i put a lyrical red dot on ya to merk you
Somethin simular to what i can a period commercial
So you best turn ya ass around so ya thong don't ride ya crotch
Cuz i'll have ya twisted up everywhere runnin around in knots

....Gone.... 01-23-05 10:47 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Detrimental
You better pass the mic dude before i puke
You joined in may but still seem new
You always had a dream to be on top of the game
Couldn't do that unless you stood on top of a plane
Back off before i put a lyrical red dot on ya to merk you
Somethin simular to what i can a period commercial
So you best turn ya ass around so ya thong don't ride ya crotch
Cuz i'll have ya twisted up everywhere runnin around in knots




hahaha herb :laugh2:


Watch i'll put pepper in my mouth so you can feel my spicy flow'z
Detrimental you hoe, get jump by blacks quick for saying, O HI YO
ARKON? Take out the "r",my bars got you LOCKED UP, it wont let you out
of my wrath punches...that middle finger in your sig is the exact rec loss count
i'm glad that your white, so i can see you, my punches aint gonna miss
even if you was black, my punches still find you, it has x-ray visions
kid why have a snake in your sig, and you not dangerously poisinus
you and that snake only have on thing in common, RATTLE DICKS


a little freestyle diss, wun

Detrimental 01-23-05 11:23 PM

So what this 8 Mile shit you tellin me everything i know?
I am white, i am from Akron, i do have 1 loss and i rep the cobe
But what's your advantage on me? That you're black?
That you have all these fuckin cousins to get and you got a gat?
That you can only glorify yourself atleast i can be seen in the dark
Atleast i got a mans voice your puberty hasn't came to its start
And that's exactly why you don't record yourself rappin
Cuz everytime you do your voice ends up crackin
So go on diss Akron, go on and say more stupid shit
I bet you couldn't define my name or yours you clueless bitch


no offense to anything sounding racial in my shit.....just a diss lol
peace

....Gone.... 01-23-05 11:54 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Detrimental
So what this 8 Mile shit you tellin me everything i know?
I am white, i am from Akron, i do have 1 loss and i rep the cobe
But what's your advantage on me? That you're black?
That you have all these fuckin cousins to get and you got a gat?
That you can only glorify yourself atleast i can be seen in the dark
Atleast i got a mans voice your puberty hasn't came to its start
And that's exactly why you don't record yourself rappin
Cuz everytime you do your voice ends up crackin
So go on diss Akron, go on and say more stupid shit
I bet you couldn't define my name or yours you clueless bitch


no offense to anything sounding racial in my shit.....just a diss lol
peace



KID I AInt BLACK, I'M PUERTO RICAN


try be a pitsburgh? try to make an comeback? but you've have fail
newbe touching my quick spit hotness, leave this kid bony and frail
how you got on a label? I guess by an little kids camp talent scouts
your rhymes will never link to profit, even if you have gold teeth in your mouth
so you do audio? I'll leave multiple holes in ya, like an microphone
you cant do a 3 way on me, only you've done that is by a phone
my punches are like lunatic hoes, it'll cutt your dick off. LITERALLY
Your slowly elevating, like an turtle. still havent reach ill punches purperty


freestyle diss, wun.


*3-way, personals, flow, punches.
*pitsburgh-lost today, 41-20, thought they were going to make an comeback when the patriots were 30.

TecKnic 01-23-05 11:54 PM

Its no doubt the kid postin above me really is mental
Quit his job...all cuz they didn't give him free dental
I mean you know rednecks dont know what a toof brush is
they think that fat chicks with saggy boobs are Lushious
Call me Mc Hammer Cuz we know you Cant Touch This
Go take ya white ass to Ray Allen and ask him what clutch is

....Gone.... 01-24-05 12:06 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by TecKnic
Its no doubt the kid postin above me really is mental
Quit his job...all cuz they didn't give him free dental
I mean you know rednecks dont know what a toof brush is
they think that fat chicks with saggy boobs are Lushious
Call me Mc Hammer Cuz we know you Cant Touch This
Go take ya white ass to Ray Allen and ask him what clutch is




Yo homie.........


like the way you posted UNDER me, is the same way as your skillz
cant spit hot flow'z even if you attatch your rhymes on an hot windmill
I'll put my hand in blood, so when i grap you, then you'll have an redneck
couldnt fold my lungs, even if you punch through an board game of chess
Talking about breast? like grannies tits, i'll leave you with an DOWN FALL
my punches are cold. wont satisfiy an girl cause your dick will be small
Call yourself mc hammer, when your punches cant even fold a nail
Go to an doctor, see if they detect sickness, i'll bet you it'll 0 on the scale


HAHAH WUN.


CHESS AKA CHEST

GET IT?

TecKnic 01-24-05 12:16 AM

nahh that wasn't towards you mista it was too the dude above you...

....Gone.... 01-24-05 12:22 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by TecKnic
nahh that wasn't towards you mista it was too the dude above you...



but still you liked it?>....................................

Terumoto 01-24-05 12:26 AM


Listen to me boy 'fore ya get smacked, scarred, n' dropped on ya teeth
Y'all droppin it weak, someone dope step in n' show em how we drop hot to a beat
Call it ill or call it unique, but when one MB speak there's alotta mystique
King of this shit, fan me wit a leaf, feed me grapes n crawl to my feet
When will you newbies learn to read, 'fore you start flappin ya lips?
When will y'all learn to rhyme, 'fore you think ya rappin it sick?
Y'all steppin in the line of fire, we spittin bullets, clappin ya quick
Gawd damn it ya thick, you newbies been avid as shit
Chill out, relax, learn the game n' learn to be patient
Jus step back n' listen, cuz the vets hold the concern of a nation

TecKnic 01-24-05 12:36 AM

This Kid Above I'll lieterally eat him like the colonels chicken
The Shit you spittens "already written or bitten"
See I"m the one who can spit straight offa the top
Leave ya brain Splushed and Splatterd like apple sauce
Look at this funny looking nigga in his lip gloss
When I write i write bout whatever i feel like
Fuck you up so bad i wont even feel right...

annd...ahhh shit i messed up.

Detrimental 01-24-05 12:37 AM

What the hell mista can't tell the difference between "a" and "an"
"A" is after constanant startin words and "an" comes after vowels you puerto ri-CAN
And what the hell this other newbie comin at me like he a vet
He hasn't even seen one fuckin pubic hair yet
I used the MC Hammer line back in April 04
When it comes to ya mother i love to rope whores
All ya'll are basic Tecknic TECHNO
You think ya been here from the get go on you GOD needs to let go
AuTh3nTiQ, aw defend this you must of never took English
Remind me of the dude off American Idol tryin to sing shit
Only you attempt to rap pretty much the same concept
To be rappin like that you must be on shit
But i'm a go by riddlemethat's sig cuz you aint worth killing
All of you fuckin airhead can blow me n find the cream filling

....Gone.... 01-24-05 12:39 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Detrimental
What the hell mista can't tell the difference between "a" and "an"
"A" is after constanant startin words and "an" comes after vowels you puerto ri-CAN
And what the hell this other newbie comin at me like he a vet
He hasn't even seen one fuckin pubic hair yet
I used the MC Hammer line back in April 04
When it comes to ya mother i love to rope whores
All ya'll are basic Tecknic TECHNO
You think ya been here from the get go on you GOD needs to let go
AuTh3nTiQ, aw defend this you must of never took English
Remind me of the dude off American Idol tryin to sing shit
Only you attempt to rap pretty much the same concept
To be rappin like that you must be on shit
But i'm a go by riddlemethat's sig cuz you aint worth killing
All of you fuckin airhead can blow me n find the cream filling



HAHAH SERIOUSLY YOU IS WACK :laugh2:

Detrimental 01-24-05 12:41 AM

lmao at OMB that was nice lol.....and Tecknic lmao that was a horrible verse.....i'd love to see the out come of their battle lmao

Detrimental 01-24-05 12:45 AM

ah fuck you....and you think you're o so GODLY? i'm sure....


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