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Wickedclown 12-01-04 11:02 PM

.... ok, well its posted so why not tell me what u think any way... mines in red

[.:D:.] 12-01-04 11:02 PM

ahem......:thumbup:......

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...osophamusic.htm

Phantom 12-01-04 11:06 PM

...Smartass....

[.:D:.] 12-01-04 11:39 PM

^^how??im testin my skills....lol....

Phantom 12-01-04 11:55 PM

Super Smartass

Don't fuckin come in here when you KNOW I can't hear it and that you wouldn't give a fuck about what Mike would say.
It's not funny.
Fuck you and your audio.

[/tired]

[.:D:.] 12-02-04 08:51 PM

LMFAO...i do care...i take any critic...good or bad....but dats yo fault...u aint got no speakers...

Elemental Soul 12-02-04 09:00 PM

heres some simple shit for u kids to rate

Acid in their veins,morphien in their brains,
So insane, life follows death,escaping the pain,
My blue eyes seem to be blind,darkness over light,
Pitch black vision,how can i believe in love at first sight,
AIDS infected players,inseminating dead seeds,
Save neglected prayers,desinegrating testies,
Decelerating technology,to prevent this planets obiesity,
Treat the streets equally,so that we can live piecefully,

Pop Lotty 12-02-04 11:05 PM

........wtf don't u get?

Logic The Goonie 12-04-04 12:16 AM

Back open but dont post whack yo.

Nynth Degree 12-12-04 04:23 PM

Vs. led poetic
This is quick said, I'll get cred for droppin' on this shit head
You only had a bitch when I heard you were dope...I was "Ms. Led"
I ain't even gotta try, you'll never de-feat me
You'll prolly no-show, like rock n' roll on BET
You'll get smoked like a Newport, no wonder you changed your account name
In other words, you're like the XFL...without game
Don't pout mayne, go blow ya nose and wipe ya tears
Fuck Tyrone Biggums, talk about you's the biggest hype in years!
I must be prophesizin', I'm not meanin' to boast
But an "L" is the very first thing I see when you post!

Get at me Soc:thumbup:

Logic The Goonie 12-12-04 04:29 PM

This is quick said, I'll get cred for droppin' on this shit head
You only had a bitch when I heard you were dope...I was "Ms. Led"
i get the concept, poorly worded
I ain't even gotta try, you'll never de-feat me
You'll prolly no-show, like rock n' roll on BET
too simple
You'll get smoked like a Newport, no wonder you changed your account name
In other words, you're like the XFL...without game
slight chuckle, think harder
Don't pout mayne, go blow ya nose and wipe ya tears
Fuck Tyrone Biggums, talk about you's the biggest hype in years!
ehhhhhh
I must be prophesizin', I'm not meanin' to boast
But an "L" is the very first thing I see when you post!
fuckin ill

It was all extremely mediocre cept for the closer which was dope as fuck, keep tryin at it.

Artemis 12-12-04 04:34 PM

blah....................................

Logic The Goonie 12-12-04 04:41 PM

^^Not a battle verse :nono:

Artemis 12-12-04 04:43 PM

lol blah, lol anyways, This a punch froma battle verse I'm puttin' up soon, weerd....

My rhymes are “cerebral”, hit you wit ‘em, say “you’re mental”
And I’ll “beat” you wit “no words”, like you was an “instrumental”


blah. :)

Nynth Degree 12-12-04 04:46 PM

~Sonofisis~:
9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!
You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews
In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass
So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"
This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God
Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch

9th Degree:
My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades
So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed
That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row
If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp
Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down
You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested

Word :thumbup:


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