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Black Dragon 07-23-04 03:06 PM

Stay away from rap Flex, Like an AIDs infected person should stay away from sex//

||TekNEks|| 07-23-04 03:10 PM

this kids attempting to RAp...like acts i sever biens till backs collapse like bridges your only good at carry FAGS~/~ one

Black Dragon 07-23-04 03:35 PM

Son please attemptin? I'm near mastery, I wuz born A MC like Tek Neks wuz born a Fairy//

DV8 07-23-04 04:21 PM

2 lines?~black dragon~this cats a fully pleadged~crack faggon,
talkin mastery n fairies~sucks more milk than~dairies are baggin,

from queen city~thinkin he tough~2 posts this kids~not rough,
hard reppers~put him in cuffs~this kid blows n ~that aint a bluff,

im gonna ~be dissed ~from the bottom~but my verse remains on top,
might as well~slit ya wrists~cause the next emcees gonna be a flop,

2 of da same~top n bottom~like they sexin each other up in this cypher,
no name~stop n drop-em~question?is dat ya kid or your crappy dirty diaper,

Smok 07-23-04 05:41 PM

DV8 think he can rap nigga you ain't raw,fuck wit me I'll have ya body half off like a discount store.Yo albums don't reach stores,they let yo shit tumble off tha truck,yo raps say that you don't give a damn,cause don't nobody give a fuck.I bet you sit wit yo notebook right next to ya PC,cause we know ya freestyle sucks like a Benzino CD.Yeah you wanna be me,and you right I will flop,right in ya bitch,you must be good at seein chick get fuck by random niggas on tha block.In fact you Stop, dis rap shit ain't fa you.You should be a gay porno star cause gettin fucked is what you do.

ProForm 07-23-04 11:00 PM

Toastin like that, 'll have this fag stroking the rash.
His sig "blaze in this bitch", explains all that smoke in his ass.
Smok, what the fuck, rappin with a played out structure
Buttin heads with Pro, have this Hoes Gay ass ruptured.
Postin straight? Dude, ya learning curve dont alleviate.
Well, only sometimes when u rhyme gainst noobs like Dv8

troubledinocense 07-23-04 11:35 PM

check it i know theres no way u can harm me/sayin ya name is "pro"form but underneath it says "new to rb"/its ok if u not wit it/makin up gay ass names like proform and limit/if u was in public u be shook to spit it/cause in rap u got no part/even in text nigga u aint got no heart/my bars is bullets and watch em hit you/ my freestyle is gat listen how i shot and split you/....

flow2crazy 07-24-04 12:56 AM

Makin fun of peeps cuz they new 2 rb, have a look at ur banner...
U got 5 posts and thats all u deserve, howd u get past the shitty scanner...
Ur structure is weaker than a cardboard box...
Strong island? yea right and i bet u went to the school of hard knocks...
Good jokes kid but we aint doin stand up in here...
Except when i diss u all u can do is stand up and leer...
Now ur gonna see the crowd stand up and cheer...
Suddenly my opponents are starting to just disappear...
This boys "troubled" in the field of rapping...
Maybe he should stick to fuckin bitch slapping...
Hes proven his "inocense" but hes still guilty of sucking...
If this boy was a bull u still wouldnt see him bucking...

Venom 07-24-04 01:17 AM

Wuteva kind of shyt u spittin, is all brickz....
Gay dude no pussy yet surrounded by all dickz...

U on some dumb u spit like u froze up....
U aint jus wack u wut wack wantz to be wen i t growz up....

Learn ya lesson kid n dont spit again...
Cuz i dont think these birdz wanna hav to hit again....

Da compression will have u askin for forgiveness....
U done fucked up close da battle b4 u lose to complex illness....

Ma skillz twist, in ery direction which way am i sprayin....
Dis dude said i cood spit n i coodnt even hear wut he was sayin....(lolz)

Now lemme end this quick n painless b...
Ya rap skillz on RB ya cant regain u c...
Itz plain to me, u jus wack kid...
So retire now b4 u get smacked kid....

hahahahaha jus a lil sumtin still havent seen me at ma best lolz ill holla lata jus keyed dis cuz i was bored 1

Terumoto 07-24-04 06:58 AM

SD original is a heeeeeerrrrrrrrbbbbbb.... but yeah
2 minutes...

yo, ima leave this kid ruptured n bruised, get fucked you gon loose
im up on this dude.. ya lyrics were wack, and ya 2 set structure was noob
rip ya to hell, punches were herb.. flow was shit n it fell
but i dont need to tell em.. cos ya ended up dissin ya self
i rip cocks like you, sure ill "crack on ya " .. watch as my hits rock
ya "feelin my line", .. so ya finished when my shit drops

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-24-04 07:15 AM

one man band is trash shit i got da rite 2 call em,he gets hyped of boredem-
he a bitch his wife exstort em,cant win battle's so he stay's in da cypher forum-
^^true

u really borin marv,with ya ass corny multi's matter fact just all ya bar's-
neva been in a studio so only "mic eva u'll rip" is wun of ya "jordan cards"-

admit it u know im spittin it well,i spit shit dat u make u stick 2 ya dell-
ima "call" u a bitch cuzz in jail dem dudes made u "sprint" in da "cell"-

Terumoto 07-24-04 08:38 AM

lol... bullshit i cant win battles..

hmm.. so your a wordplay man huh?

ur knowing this...bruised wit violence, i bring it hard, my views'll silence
this is pointless...like a jew n a virgin debating over who's the 'tightest'
your the pc mc, sittin there, ima eat ya like a vegetable
you gon need it and you probly know 'help' is right next to 'tools'
only way you get saved is by floppy disk, get clocked n ripped, ya know, i try to respect gays
but come on now, marv.. we all know 'chess' aint the only time you 'check mates'
kid youre done, ive already fucked you up, this the sequel, prepare to RUN, g
ill drop you like 'europian painted fans' - ''youre face's weare da RugBe''
rock n fuck up this smug geek...marvelous spits more cliches than cash money does
but seriously dawg, a 'scale from 1-10' is the only time this fags number 1
I stomped this rook, n so forth.. only reason im round the cypher is im soo bored
but this dick is the only mc i know that can turn a "HOT site" into a "SNOW board"

one

DeHotBwoy 07-24-04 11:10 AM

2 Dropz Whoz Hott Complex On da Spot
Sittin next to me is the only way u hot
Like if i ask about skillz u got ne
and like u a leaf i rake-fake mcz
Pass a couple of dimez watch ma sikk rhymez
U Pass LimeZ waste dimez show bad rhymez
and won 6 battles by facein the same person 6 times
Im Takein ya life man u should stop all ya wackness
O wait u cant u need help started 6 song Track-miss
I Be Hott crazy wit fiya like ma own Burners
u might blow up 1 day by Eatin-Cheese-Burgers

JRad 07-24-04 01:42 PM

Oh no, here I go about to burn this ho
Slow-Mo rap, Oh shit you ready? No?
Look at this guy who has a avatar of Tupac
I bet he thinks he is him, but let's see whos hot
If I put a gun to your head, what you gonna do?
I wouldn't, but still, would you run lil' foo'?
------------------------------------------
Shit... it's only 6 lines limit .. right?

flow2crazy 07-24-04 02:11 PM

Whats goin thorugh ur head when u post these weak lines...
Ill blow u up like u in a war and be steppin on mines...
Ur avys goin round in circles cuz ur dizzy from my punches...
Only way u packin heat is when u pack chili in ur lunches...
Ur not ever gonna be hard even afta a million crunches...
The reason u went slow mo is cuz u cant think of shit at a regular pace...
2 u rappin is like trippin right in the middle of a footrace...
This boy prolly thinks hes gonna come on the site and takeover...
To bad hes just like all the other newbs, just wit a makeover...

~Lady Fiya~ 07-24-04 02:40 PM

ha rofl i guess this nigga thinks that his flows are too crazy
femcee serves ya 'til u face 'em positions like ya fuckin' "avi"
ill's an understatement cuz ur rhyme status is far under it
u think u tight when u battle newbies like the one u dissed
nigga reppin' navy like them lil' kiddie rhymes gonna waive ya
4 tha country> give up ya gun, surrender so Bush can "save" ya

my first cypher, damn not bad.. flow2crazy no offense.. just a cypher
ha ha ~wun~

Thumper 07-24-04 03:03 PM

Yo, i spit the furious language packed like a sandwich//
The only flow ya know that causes extensive damage//
Cerebral cranium have it injected into ya brain//
You can shove it up ya ass but its just not the same//
I get steamed like a locomotive but more explosive//
My temper tantrums have a habit of leavin' bodies floatin'//
My flow's Roller coastin', but thats just my way to vent//
Thats why when i drop, its an anticepated event//
Crazy to an extent, but it seems to me your more lazy//
Crazier than alley McBeal seein' transparent babys//
Your illusionary ass isn't capable of impossible feats//
Cause ya drops arn't breakin cement streets and concrete//
I'm glazed and diamond dusted, it appears ya flows rusted//
My occupation is slaughterin' bitches like Colonel Mustard//

~Lady Fiya~ 07-24-04 03:13 PM

this is not fa writtens nigga diss the one above you
this ya first post sry tha noob doesn't know whut 2 do
wow with a name like thumper reppin' disney cartoons
Bambi ain't shit that's y his ma was shot with harpoons
as were you, come to RB show ya skills in tha Battle
cyphers are a test of thought sumthin' u can't handle
no one gives a shit if ya crazy nigga i'm tha lunatic
talk bullshit, i spit flows while i hit the toilet and piss
so go stump sumwhere else, go gain a newbie belt
to duck my shit, ya betta wear bullet-proof stealth

ha ha ha lol
~wun~

Percept Shun 07-24-04 03:13 PM

I'd be punching him hard, but that'd be animal abuse to this baboon.
Still, how can I respect a guy, that named himself after a disney cartoon?
This is your first post, to bad its not your first whoring.
Your bars are like tylenol PM, leaves the audience snoring.
Thats why I'm popping you, cause your verse kept me laughing.
Not because its good, but because of your corny ass rapping.

Thumper 07-24-04 03:41 PM

Like every other nigga this man's one in the same//
He think i play games so he's tryin ta play off my name//
Com'mon dog its not like everyone hasn't done~it~b4//
But this is where i step~in, in order to even~the~score//
First post on this name, but my experience will out~brandish//
Your claimes of fame are fucked up and out~landish//
This mans' candid, keep messin' i'll leave this man stranded//
Im the deranged lunatic that labels niggas and keeps 'em branded//
Weak nigga, he'll never get his name in the stars//
Decided to drop lines cause he couldn't swing on da bars//
Ya fucked up now son, i'll make ya sorry ya came//
Thumps the sound of my foot stoppin' down on ya grave//

Yvonne 07-24-04 06:06 PM

gir,boy,who the fuck is you?...only 2 posts,bitch u already screwed
it says diss th person above you,buh u 2 dumb to do wut u spoded to
i flip this thing left and right,make you know RB is for the illest iight?
4k i see ya "name glorification" as a waist of time,i see it like blood driping down my knife
you wishin to rip niggaz and bitches/man 'fore u say a word i got ur mouth sealed wi stiches..
i came herre for a reason..and ima rip u for a season..till u creep and start bleeding..
stop dreaming to be the best..X gonna put ya chest to rest..all ya moma gon do is wash the blood of ya vest..
cos my name speakes for itself..danger & death is what gonna get to yaslef

M-Eazy 07-24-04 06:35 PM

i got nuthin to say, sounds like ^'s a basehead
been here a month longer than 'thumper', and talkn bout wut a waist he is
how dare u get on someone, dawg, u softer than tissue
but 'thumper's just as bad as u, cause he aint came bac to diss u
fuk it, u think u rated for adults only, puttn "XxX"?
i think 17's time for a part-time job, ya lazy meathead
but u sittn on a comp., thats how i know u broke
'bart simpson' told 'Krusty da Clown' that u nuthin but a joke

KKbug 07-24-04 09:50 PM

man what happined to this motha f*cken site
and who told you to pick up the mic
you have an 8 line diss
thatz so small it mite as well not exist
okay i have a question ''dot''
have you been smokin a lil' to much pot
man by the way u rap u probbly blow
itz pretty bad when you can't even flow
go head and diss me back
but itz still gonna be bad , hello your on crack
you suck more dick then i do
get off the site get a clue
why can't you see,your the joke here
you can't scare me i have no fear
go ahead call me a whore, a ho, a skank, a slut
but when i say it back don't f*ckin start sayin what
your probbly only thirteen
walkin around dissin people like your the king
itz pretty bad when gurl don't even want you for a fling

Percept Shun 07-24-04 10:10 PM

By someone with 177 posts I'd expect something better.
But it seems you couldn't deliver lines sending a letter.
I'll tell you where your from and thats on the ground dieing.
Cause you couldn't drop flows if you were on your knees crying.
I can beat your whole verse by just saying - "FUCK YOU".
You've got people in your respect list but not one of them respects you.

Abraxas 07-24-04 10:23 PM

ha, i laugh at this kid, who probably lives the ways of Boondocks/
I can beat this guy in typnig text if my hands were handcuffed and locked
This guys a free agent cos he sucks, can't even get a crew/
doesn't bother trying out, cos he knew he'd get kicked out, with a "Fuck you"/
This wack man thought his rhymes were as hot as plasma and coal
But his rhymes were old, colder than cold, comes from the south pole

Thumper 07-24-04 11:28 PM

Set and ready, now my missions stated//
Fuck~up the bitches, and extinguish the hated//
I'll mail ya fam a gift so they'll know you never made it//
Be able to tell ya last reaction cause ya puples dilated//
Like a Crimson tide i sub~divide, and always the last~man~standin'//
Only time ya make impact is when your body landed//
Bet ya didn't know that ya flow was a little low//
Prolly explains why your speech is a little slow//
Pack up and go, just gave ya a warnin' ya ungrateful motherfucker//
Best take heed, or i'll have police claimin' your a jumper//

ProForm 07-24-04 11:43 PM

Disregarded your first 4 lines, cos that shit was filled.
Onslaught, yes, when you write, most of ya script is killed.
Reusing crap in your drop, why bag on dudes with no crew
When wack is abundant, and elevatin newbs are so few.
So I looked at ure post, and ure records discredited.
U proly won with dicked votes, plus that shit flow was edited.

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-25-04 05:38 AM

ya moms said my dick is so long,i guess datz y she been on my dick dick so long-
u nice? ya so wrong!,u a "rookie" cuzz ya bar's they dont come in a "pro's-from"-

u dont know me brother,my punches 2 sick cant get em u could only wonder-
u new but u aint gon rap no more now ya "posts" is gon reamin "kobe's number"-
(he got 8 post)

u gon merk sombody? well it cant be me,dem guns come in really handy b-
just know dat i could kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"-
(ooooooooh)

Terumoto 07-25-04 05:53 AM

for proform..... i couldnt resist.....

yo im bendin this phony, wack bitch.. ya punch efforts was faulty
but dont stop kid.. It was hilarious when you attempted a multi
wreckin' a bunch..eat cats like you for dinner, breakfast and lunch
ya vocab was fake.. but at least it wasnt as bad as that editing punch


marv:

sorry kid, but ya aint tight, ya came wack, so now its flame time
leave abbraised lines... ya inner woulda been good.. if it wasnt the same rhyme!?
yo, strippin ya frame.. no flow so i go for rippin this gay
since ya say ya so pro.. how didnt you know post disses are played?
flippin n slayin... im bestin' cores.. my rhymes more fresh than yours
ya crap son... what mc puts quotes round some words n calls it a metaphor..

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-25-04 06:05 AM

i mean dogg go 2 da studio and just regard dat text shit,u made dis vet flip-
& all dem dudes in ya sig aint ya friends dos da ppl ya moms had sex with-

dis fag waits me da spit in dis post i proved dis guy's sweatin me,let it be-
fukk ya "current battle" i could get u killed & make you lose ya "idenity"-

dis kidd's gon exspose ya ass,so just pm ya buddy's & get da low da talk ya trash-
dis kids flow gets all da laugh's,u not from "sandiego" u from "frisco" with all da fags-

might as well set up a battle dogg

Terumoto 07-25-04 07:13 AM

nah all my slots are full.. plus its not like we got beef or anything.. it IS diss the person above you.. I got respect for peeps, less they punk kids..

an i been here for an hour cos im WORKIN... lol... cant concentrate so i must diss fuckeerrrsss


yo, this homo? ima splatter him, bones n ligaments? ill shatter em
Ya supposed to diss me, kid... not fill me in on who im battlin?!
im spittin hot left right an center, just cos i feel wreckless
n what you talkin bout, netcee? i dont know what the fuck a pm is???
marv check this... im flippin all this wack shit ya flow statin
n whats a personal when you had to change my location??


One

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-25-04 07:25 AM

battles aint about just havin beef dunn nahmean a real rapper a battle a 100 niggaz at a time

one man band is real a fag i wonder how dem bitches could actually sweat em-
its called diss da person above u but it look like he was just askin me question's-

scary ass nigga pick a battle with a newbie dogg i really doubt you want me-
dem 3 dudes in ya sig like "snoop's group" out of 100 battles only "2-won-3"-
(213..get it)

nuff said dis shit is wack

Thumper 07-25-04 01:13 PM

MARVOLoUs ^^
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Observe how i perform my deeds//
Takin' the illest to un~realest, an gettin' the hottest to freeze//
It seems you skipped a chapter and went straight to shit//
Had a foothold in the game, but you willingly slipped//
Believe i'll fuck you up if your ever in my vicinity//
I'll drop kick ya ass as if my name was trinity//
Have you feelin' naked when your stripped of your pride//
I'd inspire you to continue, but you'd just be inspired to die//

threatz 07-25-04 03:37 PM

Da fuck kinda name is "Thumper"
I'm on top you lower den a bumper
on a damn car on da mic i'm rated R
while your PG13 cuz your friendlyr
den da damn teletubies team

Thumper 07-25-04 07:27 PM

You see, Thumper's the man that can do what you can't//
His direction's straight fixed while yours tend to slant//
I'll have you mumblin', crumblin' and stumblin' hard//
People know you fought a beast, they can tell by your scars//
I warned Dr. Doolittle, when a monkey and horse clash//
Cause the offspring end up havin' their face look like an ass// (pic)
I'll burn ya up with some metabolic tonic//
Cause ya ass is in dire need of some 'Hooked on Phonics'//

Tolerant Level 07-25-04 07:31 PM

treatz send texts
but i break his verse as i snap his neck
but he dosent kno when his cummin for sex
cause his momma got more hiv then when he got vex
see i think u love homo tv
because u rhymin about the telly-bub-e's
cause u got sick from yah dads HIV

DeHotBwoy 07-26-04 12:17 AM

Now da kid on da mic im sikk ya kno diss
u cant mess wit me the flow is ur Piss
i will take u out dizz world with ease and shit
My Punchez some Weak but some leave u Lit

DeHotBwoy 07-26-04 10:25 AM

I Can tell y ya most hate ur probley the Worst
Fuck my mom look u too 4 secondz to Burst
u try to act hard when u like dickz ya self
I might not of told u yet but my skillz bad fo ya health
U had a Wack bar and now MARVOLous is Proud
6 Bars at minimum and 2 so thatz not aloud
wait fuck it u gay 1nce fucked a guy in Trinidad
even if that was 6 linez the deleate them cuz they realli-bad

DeHotBwoy 07-26-04 10:30 AM

man u thought i was finished but i got more to say
U ran out of barz cuz u knew this kid complex chould spray
u aint kno it but u the worst about to blow it
Dickz by the way and when u pissin thatz tha only way u Flowin
imma kill this shit and put it in a Red-Rhyme put u in a hearse
Yo u lil bitch wassint it way past ur Bed-Time when u spit the verse

DeHotBwoy 07-26-04 10:35 AM

one man band look

Youz a faggot tryin to get up in the game
When u was takein a shit on Natinioal Tv then was ya fame
imma take it away Spray it away i kno ur gay
They gave u lloyd bankz to practice rap game still chouldint play
u juss whack yea im callin u whack no respect fo you
u that ass and u prolly been rappin since u was 2


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