i never said u aint got no experience

i'm just sayin u ain't been on here long so u still classified as a newb

and i've seen some of ure stuff
it ain't all that hott
no offense, i'm just bein truthful

yeah i know but on never try anymore........if someone wants me to try then i will in one of my last text battle

yo some one explian to me how to make sigs on adobe photo shop i just got it and i am lost man

yeah and i put my custom user title as New to RB so but wit flash i have been on this site since it opened but i dont use that much anymore......so yeah

"flow Intelligence" told me ta come n drop a try-out here.....so ima kick a lil key fo man dem....gimme a couple min n itll b up...
~WuN~

aiyo look, droppin da tryouts for 'strategies' that r 'HYPTNOTIK'
u kill mc' z 'religiously'? i BUN up mc'z lyke i 'bun' da 'kronik'/
juss a lil 4 min freestyle, this is only da try-out so nun special
once PRAKTIKAL don wid mc'z i leave DEM retarded n 'special'/
'crackheadz' wanted ta fuk wid me, left they 'ashes' set in a 'mineline'
MURKIN mc'z wid pucnhes left n ryte, dey be callin me da muhfukkin 'PUNCHLINE'/
on da serious note, i want in...cuz everlastin iz how i rep, TO DA DEF!
ima rep tha 'hyptnotik strategies' tyll dey aint nun lef/
if i was jay-z i b sayin 'excuse me miss', but im 'praktikal' sayin, 'ready fo this?'
'styll' watter runs 'deep' ya flow is soft, has no motion, ya only 'flow' is ya "piss"/
strate goodz im on FIRE, call me da MILITANT cuz im marchin ta 'war'
im so hot leavin mc'z bodyz 'scorchin' on da hardwood floor/

juss a lil thing if ya'll lyke my style holla @ ya boi....
~WuN~
police neva catch me....cuz im TOO GLORIOUS
yo IM da one they should b callin NOTORIOUS

respektz must b paid ta 2pac,Biggie, Jam Masta Jay, and all da 'salyed souljahz!
peace

ok playa

first off drop all the / at the end of ure lines

second work on ure punches try to beef them up

also work on ure wordplay cuz it seems real choppy
and ure structure needs improvin to

u got potential playa
but just keep elevatin, get a few wins under ure belt
and then come back
but until then i gotta say NO - sorry playa!!

damn seems like that boy needs to work on a lot of shit

well u got give em sum criticism
it's the only way anyone will elevate

ya well lyke i said it was a keystyle...ma battles have punches n shyt cuz i have some1 ta hit lol...but s'all good ill go look somwhere else cuz im not wanted in hs payce
~WuN~

yeah i agree wit king kid needs to elevate a lil bit and work on his structure cause if his structure stays fucked then its gunna throw off his flow

king you wanna do a tag topical or just a normal tag against some peeps wit me?

yo blacl man i willl do that shit wit you to i will be on later man ok thnaks

alright yo killah im in this

aiight whats hood fam