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Jonathan Mill 03-17-06 11:26 PM

You spit your rhymes out hoped to be selected
Raw's trying 2 fit in and feel social accepted
Only to be humiliate and openly rejected
In a cipher session, your work never catches recognition
Cause you come to battle unprepared with only half a rhyme written
Your motivation is out of gas and you have no ambition
Those metaphors are clumsily like a hand with the fuckin' thumb missing...

Dirty Nigga 03-18-06 10:07 AM

Jonathan ....
you couldnt ''catch a mill'' if you was the 'Wind'...
Only time your ever gon be ''shit'' is being rimmed
And I aint talkin about those hot ass Daytonas...
Ya lifes a joke....
..........shiiiit, Even ya Avyis playing-on-ya...
I'm sprayin on ya, and not a 40 cal, just ''Busta-rhyme''
I'm like god you cant see it or 'Touch it'..
.........................So ya must be blind
or I'm just ahead of my time...I cant even wear a watch
I can make you ''duck lower''...than lesbians headin for the Crotch.

vinceness_deala 03-18-06 01:19 PM

carmelo i wanted to battle u but fuck it/ its a million of u in "mind" but u the smallest "nugget"/ you fucked up like "rims" with no tires/ so i'm gonna just tilt my brim and spit fire/ u must be playin wit cocaine/ quotin big daddy kane/ and only thing u sick wit is aids/ u worthless like the duece of hearts, in this game of spades/ u use ur hand when u horny and cum in ur eye/ since u can't see me, its me tha deala from the chi

mind- word play "gold mine", nugget- "carmelo anthony (denver nuggets)", rims- he was talkin about rims in his rhyme.


chi town, chi town yeah thats my city. i'm a shit starter just call me the internet 50

Dirty Nigga 03-18-06 02:37 PM

LOL @ This 50 cent wannabe.....

Lyrically ya on the same page as 50....& I'm Banks with these writtens..
cos I'm handin out Punches to this 'poor kid' like its Thanksgiven....
now thanks is given, cos Dela luvs my rhymes, Hes hooked on lines..
no cocaine needed..
...........................But you'll be dope, man if you fuck with-Mines..
I'ma crook of crime..you suck with rhymes, cryin thru these unlucky times
BITCH!!....you wont ever be your Idol....Unless your ''tuckin-Dimes'' [50 cent]
This enough of my mind...I'ma just speak from the heart, where should I start?
HA!!!...This dude claims to be a ''deala'' but he's only ever pushin - Carts!..
Let me rip the confusion apart...and confirm the people of your whackness..
Wonderin about your skill? READ ALL OF THE ABOVE ^..
.................................................. ..and you'll see that you LACK-THIS^
Its called skill with words, I'm ill with verbs, to real for herbs...
Fuck stealin rhymes, after I'm done you gonna be BITING-CURBS, Motherfucker.

vinceness_deala 03-18-06 02:59 PM

the only lines i'm doin is urs, i'm ghost writtin/ u sayin the same thing i said, now who's bitin/ u talkin all the extra shit, u ain't talkin bout fightin/ like i said b4, u can't see me cuz i'm fast as lightnen/ i'm out here pushin pounds, neva pushin carts/ i saw u out there tryin to hustle but u ain't got the heart/ i ain't a 50 wanna be, i'm a shit starter/ i'll shoot ya arm, leg, leg arm head like the carter/ lil wayne, let me put u on a lil game/ u keep talkin shit to the deala mane, i'll read ur brain/ put ur memory on the ground, and stomp/ i ain't gone stop no matter what, til i'm richer than donald trump/ but back to u/ i'll kill u tryin to fit in my shoes

Meta.Phor.T.Cal 03-19-06 05:30 PM

Hey Yo..

I'll Break U Down Like A Pound Of Dat Sticky Green Shit..
Cuz U Havin Hot Rhymez Is Lyke A Hick Wit Clean Pitz! [armpits]
Itz Not Neva Gone Happen, Ur Jus Stankin Up Da Joint.
U Can Reach Da Eiffel Tower An Styll Not Get Da Point
Bytch! Yuh Neither Hot Or Not, Yuh Mearly Jus 'Warm'
Imma Have U Dodgin More Bulletz Than Dat Video By Korn
I Was A Swarn Leader, Bitch Niga Feeder, Bring Da Heater..
Beat U Til Ya Blue As Fucc And Lookin Lyke Skeeter! (from da cartoon doug lol)
I Dont Need-yuh Ta Tell Me Dat U Trippin' n Fell-Be...
Cos I Got More 'Pennies 4 Thought' Than A Walmart Sellin-Spree
Why Yell @ Me? Im Happy Witta Trigga, Beat Down Dis Wack Nigga
I Throw A Punch In Dealaz Direction & All He Can Say Iz 'Go Figure'
U Already Kno Im Sicka Than V, & Comin Harder To...
We'll All Understand, Juz Put Down Da Mic If Its 2 Hard For U!

Wordz AhGod 03-20-06 02:08 PM

I Got his folks asking" why U fucking wit dat dentdy boy again?"
caus he dont want beef...the ova flow'll give u food poisoning...
u not in my leaque like that nigga johnny knoxvill...
but you can sleep like a baby...bloody in a hopital...
you on ur own dick...swinging like micheal jacksons monkey...
I got the old dough...so I'll beat u for that nu money...

just some ramdom shit.

vinceness_deala 03-20-06 03:17 PM

eyedentdy, be cool be4 i put a dent in ur eye/ if u woulda played by the rules then u wouldn't have 2 die? its tha internet 50, but i'm from the chi/ i'm a real nigga i'll leave it up 2 u 2 cry/ u ain't really a rapper so why u lie/ u ain't really a scrapper until u get high/ i ain't reall beefin wit u i just wanna take a piece of ur pie/ i want it all, what used to be urs soon will be mine/ i'll rob u and sell yo shit back/ aye this nigga is weak, man excuse my back

SINCITY 03-20-06 06:51 PM

Look At Dis Bitch He Claim He A Deala On Da Block

But Da Only Blocks He Movin Is In A Lego Box

This Motherfucker Gotta Be Kidin He Aint Throwin Now Slugs

Ill Spit On Um Like Pumkin Did Newyork On Flavor Of Love

Kenfolk He Need To Get His Mind Straight I Married To The Game

He Just On His First Date

DeHotBwoy 03-21-06 03:57 PM

Rookie of the year who is u puttin in fear
Wit spitz Like dat I can feel when near
That shitz just weak like Avy & da rest
Why test put ya shit to sleep & get blessed
Go 2 church find god cuz rappin aint you
The # of Post's u got is the only way u clappin da 2
Just stop reload find a sport or skill
Cuz Kidney Disease won't make u Ill
How could we feel a spit or a verse like that
Just like a empty box of lighters there aint no match
Letz just stop the rap let brim lean
Cuz I bust & just cut ya gut & rupture ya splean ~1~

So.Rell 03-21-06 04:39 PM

To All above me...

Ya'll garbage as fuck, text...why even Enter.
I'll Lumber Jacks that'll turn ya Log Offs into Splinters.

6 line minimum, First and last warning.
-Po'Et-

Flashback 03-22-06 03:05 PM

dude aint real.....he's SO.FAKE..aww..did i hurt his feeling?
and the dent'll leave ya mouth in pain....like i gave you a filling...

im bored....

Faime S. Quotez 03-22-06 04:08 PM

in text, you're nothin but a hopeless amatuer
so its nothin for me to 'fuck up flash' like 'broken cameras'
i'll roast this challenger, ya key's are just wack
you claiming you bored - well RV's bored too ..of readin ya raps
ya knees'll collapse tryna step to me ..

i aint even gonna finish ..

(X)eed 03-23-06 05:13 AM

^^^^^^^^
"deep" as flows.. how "deep" can he go?.. even if he could "mobb'his styles still amataure
kids quite.... low... "ass" deep as a "hole"
keeps goin.............................................. ....... but thats how far he goes..

Faime S. Quotez 03-23-06 04:49 PM

^^dats under me, you and ya fake rhymes need to quit
i would say ya shit is wack, but i aint even waste time reading it
you'll get replaced, fine, easy, quick ..i'll put ya keys to a end
you say you "exceed all expectations"....
........................................just like ya 'losses exceeded ya wins' ..!


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