contend him you tend nothin //you a pesnet spend your time// pretend how to rym //

this for gfx

^^^
shit i dont know y dis lame hype,dem bar's u spit was written they aint typed //
dis nigga should of been "left" rapverse look he cant even spell his name "right" //

i dont think ya rap's his hott,let's see u play dat thug shit when i flash da glock //
splash ya pops,oh u "wear makaveli boxer's" so now u think ya "ass is pac"??? //
dont!...all dem bar's you spittin dunny datz should stop!,ima be da last da flop //
everybody let's leave dis dude alone he like da "liter" so he got "trash da drop" //

oooooooh

sup marv.. im prolly gonna be in ya crew soon :)


ima flatten you n' ya crew, wackin' this dude, till hes battered n' bruised
damn marv.. ya structure is herb.. aint anyone ever tell ya two slashes is noob?
whatever man, its you that its on, so you can do what ya want
fuck ya baseball bat, big leaguer, I make ya blood ooze with batons
Im regroupin' n' renderin' cells, spittin dope raps n' constantly sendin' out L's
I'd say im hot... but check the sig, brotha, sorry ya already said it ya self!!
wreckin' the shelves, im madd on audio, knockin albums in a promisin' way
kid, if youre the hottest on the site... then i guess it must be opposite day

u trash dont matter whut click u is,str8 keyed i aint gota diss u with pens-
u aint post da rest of whut i said which was "madd multis" aint gon get u a win-
(true dat is whut i said)

u "pussy" & u even got da scent,im gettin rap $ u could use my watch 4 rent-
look in ya sig beside's my me which wasn't wun no ill spitta gave u a complament-

ima send a army da u,like i give a fukk "marv im bout da b apart of ya crew"-
&??? dogg i dont know how da fukk u r state capitol must feel real sorry 4 u-

no hate, no hate...

ya punches werent hittin' marv, sorry to say I ate ya words fa snacks
haha... yeah... quick keystyle, cats just say that in case they verse is wack
Dispursin' raps thats rockin' shit, frightening, I scare whores, flock n' rip
plenty of vets have given me props... im jus' wonderin.. wheres YOURE compliments?
Im delvin' it deep, dispellin' this creep, flipped n' stripped this fella is weak
ya vocabs wack man... spit like a baby... aint ya know 'to' and spelled with a D


one..

fed of my whole shit....

dogg u scared da battle me dont spit on here no more you a bitch wine-
it must be da person u battlin cuzz ur not known da have "lunatic lines"-

a vet? u got props from a kidd with about 20 wins dat happen da like ya-
but in real battle you take "L's" so now i get y u only rap in a "cypher"-

nigga i been pass ya flow,will wun of u vets pleez let dis bastard know-
dat goin 2 da studio is different from usin COOL EDIT or dat ACID PRO-

its just a cypher.. dw bout feedin..


Yo, ima taint ya blood n' paint ya mug, watch as the flames brew
Im famed dude... quit dissin me on battles.. ur the one versin str8_hood
yeah you jus' passed my flow, i mastered it, man, ya writins beat
stifle beaks cos ya flappin ya mouth like ya stand a chance to rival me
that diss bout cyphers weak... I just come here when im goofin' around
If I was writin a real "cum-back".. id scrape it off the roof of ya mouth
I munch rhymes for lunch times, easy to see marvs shit cant crunch mine
Ya parents musta been jokin durin sex... cos 9 months later out comes a punchline
of course im a vet, to me this thang is just simple, I write amazing n' cripple
cant "thrill" or "beat" me, cos im "endin ya career in the game" like ya name was initials (in case ya slow...MJ... mike jordan n mike jackson)

damm my badd i had da drink some coffee ya bar's had noddin off da sleep-
u not da "king" so if u gota "crown" on u must gota "problems with ya teeth"-

pleez stop it with ya hurt jokes,u just hatin u been seen me merk folks-
its sad 6 of ya wins came from a person with da title "this is my first post"-

dude happy runnin round sayin i got me a mean crew,im cocky n seem rude-
"switch ya name up" if strobe was da "ban(d)-one-man" it probly a be u-

if its a cpyher u shouldn't have da feed dogg

Curse n' retreat, merkin' wit heat, my words will defeat, bring it
I dunno if ya ill or not... so before ya rap try learnin ta speak english
I aint battlin first posters? it might seem that way cos of hoow bad they get ripped apart
sorry man... but its a known fact that fake personals just dont hit as hard


id make it longer but im busy... on the phone and writin a battle verse

u dont really want beef cuzz u soft u know da type da just tattle-
at least u told da truth but really who had da write 4 a battle???-

just open ya eyes bumm,ya moms look like 708 she just make da guy's run-
and ya ryhme scheme ya words is more forced than "nicky parker" in a size 1-

soon i'll be goin on tour 4 money,but u know whut dogg all dis funny-
cuzz u gay i mean who would take picture's of they recordin buddy's-

Yo this dude got only 1, his self in his band... its cozno1 likes you/
This clown is soft......even with a blunt knife you'd be easy to cut through/
He's so useless he cook a dinner and give you stomach flu/
My skillz are duplicate to tha terminator....they can't be stopped/
Your flow is decrepit..........you should find a new style to adopt/
You try and sell a record and wonder why it flopped/
Tha police got involved and you got yo' ass shopped/
Doin time in tha slammer...i guess yo didn't realise tha rules of grammer/
Yo' shits old ya need to upgrade....Its ancient, all decayed/
I hope yall no first aid...coz imma carve yah up in ma copters rotor blades/
Yo bin on here a while i'd expect you ta know tha concept of rap/
One snap...... brake this fools back....../
Yall need tha begginers guide it be right round tha corner, i draw yah a map/

Haha, check this man out. lol

Im like Hey!...

I'd think he'd know by now... that his style ain't botox, not raisin' brows//
Seem's ya mom's stayed~home raisin'~clowns,... cause ya can't spit~shit, only makin' sounds//
Ya specialize with mouth, but the down~side,... got more things goin' in than out//
I'll simply lay you out, professional, i do it where they can't hear you shout//
A surf~fanatical? Quit sayin' "Dude" dog, that shit ain't "Radi~call"//
Wonderin' why ya fuckin' up,... errors purely grammatical//
This man's Co-lateral, just 'uh terminater wannabe searchin' for groupies//
I'll leave you chopped.. shot.. and dropped.. like in all three movies//
Need ta pick up the wind dog... cause ya flow ain't flowin', only suckin',.. no blowin'//
Just mowin' and mowin' and droppin' ya boys to my feet//
Taken' they life, left to right as if i held down delete//

You say that "errors purely grammatical"... well I take offense to that/
don't ever use my name in vain; you kats is way too dense to rap/
ya fascination with felatio's beyond my mental cap/
ya whole verse's about smoking the sausage... i'm starting to think YOU into that!/
You think that faggot shyt is cute?... oh , I forgot... ya name is Thumper/
It's no wonder... you're a fruit yaself... who likes to play the plumber!/
just for the record... ain't nothing wrong with laying pipe... if you's a brother/
just make sure that it's a female... if it ain't... stay undercover! (fuckin' homos!)

Nice. Finally, some other skill! Now I have to kill you! LOL.

Go back and edit that post just hit backspace and apologize//
I'll just have an admin remove when it was last modified//
All you have is multis, cuz all of your punches were lame//
You talk about him saying gay shit, but you still saying the same//
So what are the rest of us here supposed to say?//
Since You saying the same shit and dissing him for being gay//
Come out of the closet.

Im sick n im a pimp So im like A Flu 2 Screw....
Imma give u sum 'Skill' n take da S away n dats wut imma do 2 u....
u aint an emcee i'll butter da Mic so u cant even grab it...
I aint banks but 'if u so gangsta' let dis 'Warrior' 'Work magic'....
if u put socks on gangstaz u still couldnt 'DeFeet' dis 'Thug'...
Dis aint fear factor, but imma make u eat 10 slugs.....
i can get u killt in 2 seconds i jus gotta make a deposit...
When u dead i'll hang u up, now who should come out da Closet.... \

How come im always underneath these weak ass bitches~
Their weak lines remind of rusty ass trailer hitches~
All i heard outta u is who u aint but never heard no disses~
Its like ur tryin to hand over the win n blow some kisses~
U gotta butter the mic cuz ur afraid of wat i do when i get it~
In a battle id murder u... id take the win like a bandit~
No1s ever heard of u... its like the whole worlds deaf~
But i think theres a reason for that its called ur tone-deaf~

Damn Late post. It was intended for -Rated-R-.

You have no flow! And I'm supposed to be impressed by that?
You really made no sense, then you act like you the best in rap.
Leave the site. With 15 posts, nobody will notice.
So many spelling errors in that verse, a retard wouldn't quote it.
Why am I getting attacked by those who don't know how to spell?
You came at me with a diss, you tried your hardest and failed.
I didn't have to respond, I didn't lose any face with your diss.
Rated-R? That's cuz you were the girl that got covered in piss.

dunny really fuck ya crew and ct talkin bout da techs ya'll clappin-
but GFX stands 4 "G"ET a "F"UKKiN job or somthin n "X" out rappin-

shit he got no wins so far everybody on here know dis kidd's a bumm-
him beatin me dat chance is like "jenny craig turnin catholic" they "slim da nun"-

nuff said u aint worth no more

Oh. My. Fucking God.

Wow! Goodness gracious, your whole first bar wasn't even direct!
I don't have a crew, oops! Plus I don't even mention tecks!
Go back and do some research, or continue to look like a dick.
You throwing empty bars and we're supposed to be impressed by your shit?
Get out of here. Don't even come back into this thread again son.
Go to dictionary.com and learn how to fucking spell some.
Idiot.

Need anyone who can't rap go to GFX/
You can't cope with this shit it's juss to complex/
I procede wit my nine when this bitch start to flex/
I'll crush you wit one blow like tha tyrannosaurus-rex/
His flow and rythym is all outta shape coz it too convex/
He couldn't scratch shit even if it where infants decks/
Yo imma obliterate you nothin left but minute specks/
But your used of that when your havin sex/
You be microscopic, she gotta put on magnifyin specks/

I'll smash you, any wack crew, and I'll leave you all in "Shackles"/
You like a sub-division "Chain Gang" letting all these textees trash you/
let me ask you "Mr. Too Complex", who said that shit was hittin?/
Ya text got no effects on kats... not even LatinKitten!/
Think I'm kiddin'? ask anybody here... I'm sure they'll let you know/
If we took them shackles off ya feet we'd put them on ya flow!

WE ALL OWN YOU!!!...lmao... just kidding around man... don't get froggy! lol

Yo yah already got skillz yah proved that/
But im still gonna squash this cat..Hear his intestines splat/
Hestitation is it's own form of icarsaration when it comes to combat/
you spend more time in tha gutter than a fuckin sewer rat/
My rhymes are so phat they need plastic surgery/
Your ryhmes belong in a lil kids book...go back to nursery/
Yo say iv'e got no effect you should be dun for perjury/

im the Greatest Creative and hope ya DIG
Leave ya hole Verse ugly like that man in ya SIG (AVATAR-SIG)
Now Kidz fuck around these days thats what i heard
This Dude Chouldint Be fly if he Raised by Birds
Now i Clap Cowards to see there face after Rush Hour
My Punch claps Power,it will have u knockin down the Next Twin Towers

You may be complex but where's your illness?
it's like you had a bottle of whackness and spilled it
all over yourself, you whacker then big bird's singing
like those annoying sounds that makes your ears start ringing
so for my 2nd last line, let me go ahead and use your name complex
your living in the projects experimenting the effects of same sex sex

Verbatim he's canadian....that's more wack than a arabian/
Tryin to rap coz i'm fadin him....your skills like trumps you should be tradin them/
My teeth is white they sparkle...yo's is rotten and black like charcoal/
This guy trys to diss me he lost his marble's....juss sit back and marvel/
I can flow while im doin cartwheel...leave this dick clueless like miss marple/
He's emphatically dumb its clear as day...he's bad under pressure juss wither and frey/
This site is full of clowns like you its like a buffet....I'll snap your neck with no delay/

VerBatim uh ohh


Uhh Ohh... What happend kid ran out of Skillz
Think a Second.....Hmm If u want some there starting to make Pillz
wit nuttin u have u cant spit for shit.... SON
And the only thing u do is get murked and u say this site is fun

ShackleS

Dogg Look at me for a Long ass...... SECOND
U say u got punches...... when there no muscle u FLEXIN
Where does it come from Dude..... ur ass is WHACK
Yea u do melt shit not from Fire....Acid-Breath u need a TIc-TACK

Late post this is for shackles or wateva

Wait a second! why the hell r u even allowed to hold a mic~
My words will flip u around like im "turner" and ur "ike"~
Thats weird... ur fake ass hell but u still look so life-like~
I got u all shackled up like ur in an old cowboy movie~
Ur old rhymes make me think u should be sayin "thats groovy"~
Ur styles dull wat u need is a big bottle of brightener~
I bring light to pussies so they call me the enlightener~

thats all i need...

You are so wack, you only embarass yourself when you rap.
You post your best bars, hoping that nobody responds back.
What type of half ass emcee uses "Movie" in a verse?
I could try my best and still couldn't make you look worse.
Your style is flat. One dimensional, yet you try to challenge me.
Then you realize, I'm sharper than out of tune piano keys!

Oh my God, I'm sick!

Comples Illness this ones for yah ya bitch!

Aight you tryin to diss me wit only 4 lines...
Imma bout ta rip this bitch and rip out yah spine/
so ya back starts to recline....in a way like tha kama sutra/
Yo yah need to practice rap wit ya tutor....see this cat imma nutor/
Yah need to get yo ass off tha computer...this guys juss mediocre/
Imma blaze up leave ya lungs black like a smoker....dissen me look at this joker/
This dude get played like a board game...does anyone even know this name/
COMP...lete reterded homo....Imma rip this shit so u understand, in slow mo/

Come se me wit the fist... dogg ull never fight again
ill fuck up bitch.... like i was just about to do to my FREIND

Now Lil Bitches like ya'll.... should be put away
Put u out like a Cigarette on and ashtray... And now i found out ur gay
u wanna do it bitch ill kill.... ya ass QUick
Now imma call u chili never hot rhymez... and u allways suck dickl

dissin hard hitter(person above me...)
 

:cussing: ColdSteel remember the name
they call u hardhitter cuz u get hit hard an like swallowin thangs
probally a ole fag use ta scene
use tha battle sites ta pick up young boys greeting them dressed up as a queen
i spit lacerations bars scar like belts
ur style's like masturbation u only feelin ur self
i spit the truth the answer take the spit farther than you
u soft i seen shit in baby pampers harder than you
hardhitter or better yet u a limp biscuit
im far from a vet but dont get this shit twisted
every punch i missed it or looked pass it
ur lines are waterd down like a romance book passage
beatin me!...... stop it!!u aint foolin wit this
defeatin me u bettter off playin pocket pool with ur dick!

-ColdSTEEL :shoot:(i dont know why my post jumped over here..but it was aimed at hardhitter) :cussing:

cold steel more like hot shit
wit flies and stank on top of it
get off the boards give it up
oprah has a better chance of doin a sit up
im playin this shit is weak
but i coould beat dis kidd anyday of the week
im killin time and cold steel with out ryhme
even in slow motion this boi waiste time
your new but thats no excuse to be hard
thats why your computer has a perental advisory guard

Truth be told, but really. It's not like you can help it.
We tell you keep it in your head, but you don't wanna be selfish.
Looking at you, you couldn't possibly get any worse.
You so fucking wack, drunk bums wouldn't recycle your verse.
You have alot of nerve telling somebody else to leave the thread.
When we'd see a better improvement with you leaving instead.
Follow my advice here. Don't me see you post again.
Or I'mma have to battle your ass, post first and still win.

I throw punches at dis dude, dat will definitly make ya head hurt...
u talkin like u da best, when u dont even got a record....
And plus u cudnt beat me even if i allowed u to bite....
u make no errors when u type, i can tell u definitly white...
If u think u so nasty go and battle da numba one vet....
I aint even a newbie and u prolly cant beat me yet....
wuts da point in u talkin shit when u cant even back it up....
getcha ass puffed in a mata of seconds, so wuts da point in actin tuff?...

I love doing this shit. Love it to death.
 

Thanks for making this easy. I appreciate the help.
Calling a Jamaican white. You love to embarass yourself.
Don't you pay attention? I don't battle fags like you.
I'm here to have fun. It just so happens I can spell and write, too.
But you can't even get off your one line: "You can beat me, son!"
My lyrics crush feeble minds like yours, and I'm only having fun.
You take this far too seriously, that's why your shit is wack now.
I don't make requests. I order you to lose you rap clown.

ima be nice for now and be easy on you
you have to make your own cause no crew wants you
central conneticuit were the real thugs come from
get the fuck outta here before i woop dat ass son
you beat me in a battle sorry kidd never happen
thats like dame dash rapppen
im talkin to you ryhme and reason
while you text battle i stop you from breathin...
pm me if you serious wanna chance
but this is a handicap match..
cause you aint got no legs and tryin to dance....
hol at cha boi-1-

This kid comes from the bean, well your area matches you.
I'll place a verb in your wackness... cause its what you do.
Judging by your text, you must be friends with Osama Bin Laden.
Because like the twin towers, your wins and loses equal destruction.
My punches'll leave you shaking in fear, leave this pussy calling his record.
..........because these cat's verses are square, like the boxes in checkers.