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Kirk 01-10-06 02:11 PM

Voted For: sabre

dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry
canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country
^Decent punch... I feel like I've said something like that before........ So it must be good. Lol.
representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind
after this, you'll be more read than the new york times
^Haha, dope. Took me a second to realize it.
this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt
all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out
^Meh... Alright.
i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple
the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle
^hahaha.
bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it
i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup
^That was dope. I loved that line.

Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer...
Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer...
^best line you had.
Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak...
Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique...
^Not that funny... And thats what counts hoss. To me anyway.
Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse...
Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst...
^Whats with the gangster line? Minus 27 cool points.
I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt...
Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped...
^Second best line and not that great.

Sabre wins due to creativity and the ability to make me laugh and keeps reading. As soon as I saw Gkillaz "i'll murder you" line i was just like "maaaaan, what have i gotten myself into." But yes, vote for SABRE!!!! TOOTH TIGER!

Kirk 01-10-06 02:13 PM

What the fuck? 3-1? You have to be fucking kidding me? gkillaz, stop pming for votes.

Mentalz 01-10-06 03:16 PM

Voted For: sabre

GK you keyed your verse and it showed. Overall weaker punch's, though it flowed better in my opinion... thats not what wins battles. Sabre had better punches overall, a few played but for the most part they had more spice than GK's. Nice little battle here. Keep it up.

V/Sabre

Peace.

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Mentalz 01-10-06 03:20 PM

I seriously dont see how you got 3 votes already GK it's an obvious KO for sabre in my opinion. :p

GKillaz05 01-10-06 04:03 PM

hmmm...? I really dont see that at all, and yes I did key my verse, but still how is it a KO for me?.. hmm.. W/E - UPPIN'!

Mentalz 01-10-06 04:14 PM

Meh. Nevermind. If you can't see it that's your own set back. Good luck.

Snypa 01-10-06 04:55 PM

Voted For: sabre

Flow: G
Personals: S
Punches: S
Multies: G
Metaz: S
Creativity: S
Structure: G

V - Sabre

even tho sabre did not have the multies to help his flow (which was decent) he did have the punches and metaz that hit,and im canadian too, so i kinda felt it...LMFAO, jp....

but overall it was the punches and personals and multies that got it for me...

good work to both of you

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..Grillz.. 01-10-06 09:57 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry
canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country
3/10...weak, need i say more
representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind
after this, you'll be more read than the new york times
3/10...ummm...makes no sence
this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt
all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out
3/10...boreing, played, old news dawg
i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple
the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle
0/10...not even good enuff to score, especially dissin' handicaps man...weak..dude, that was the worst line i have seen in a wile...seriously
bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it
i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup
4/10...sadly the best line, and it had the word syrup in it, weak dude
Overall...13/40...weal dude, didnt flow very well, hardly any multis


Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer...
Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer...
3/10...kinda weak, dissin' cancer patients, weak dude
Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak...
Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique...
4/10...also a lil weak, geek?, dude get outta the 90's
Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse...
Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst...
4/10...played, i need not say more
I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt...
Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped...
8/10...best line, flowed pretty good

Overall 29/40...was prety good, flowed good, good multis as well, was a tough decision but it goes to GK

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sabre 01-11-06 01:26 AM

you're a fucking joke man, you can't say shit, i've seen your rhymes

this is ridiculous, you get the biggest herbs to vote for you man

GKillaz05 01-11-06 09:17 AM

I dont get anyone to vote you cry baby. They vote on there own will. Also, thx for bitchin' about the votes to Strobe more or yours got DQ'd then mine.

sabre 01-11-06 01:52 PM

man, every credible head that has come in here has said i'm fucking better than you and your garbage and i should've had the win already, so stfu, you get d/r's, look at all your other fucking battles, the same cats always vote for you man

Daubs 01-11-06 02:02 PM

Voted For: sabre

Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer...
Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer...

VS

dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry
canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country
i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple
the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle


sabre was more consistant, both had a filler bar and a couple of plays wernt fresh but sabre got this.

G, you went for more of a flow than solid punches.
NO HATE

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dazy 01-11-06 06:39 PM

Voted For: sabre

hey sabre ur lines were better and were more punchin canadas finest more like canadas worst

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D523 01-11-06 06:39 PM

Voted For: sabre

sabre deffinately won this one.. letss review

dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry
canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country
doppee opener 8/10

representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind
after this, you'll be more read than the new york times
^ lol all you can do is laugh at this. funny bar 7/10

this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt
all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out
..=( played .. 2/10
i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple
the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle
lmfaoo.. it took me a while to get it.. but only because im not canadian and dont know the nickle has a beaver .. funny line 8/10

bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it
i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup

.. =( whyd you leave this peice with a played line 2/10

27/50

G Killaz

Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer...
Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer...

pretty good.. multis in there.. eh 6/10

Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak...
Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique...

dope 9/10

Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse...
Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst...

=( played 3/10

I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt...
Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped...

eh=/ 3/10

you said 10 lines.. you gave 8

21 / 50

.:Mike Check:. 01-11-06 07:17 PM

This was feedback posted for sabre
 
i was feelin both verses actually,anyway, jus checkin tha pollz


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