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Voted For: Evolution

these verses were actually pretty weak, but evo definitly took this one, better punches and structure, the link also helped a lot, couldve had a lil better flow though
metaman, not wut i expected, you actually have some potential, just elevate some then try again naw mean, this was pretty one sided tohoguh,

rtf, link in sig

v/ evolution

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Voted For: metaman

good verses from both of ya. heres how it breaks down:

Open: Both openings was ok, Metaman's, i didnt even get really and evolution's was a little basic and been done before but was better cos i understood it better.

Close: Again with evolution, i seen that punch in different ways before a few times. Metaman's was more original but could have been worded better, but i still liked it.

Overall: Metaman had some ok punches that were on target, no real personals and metas not working, but i really liked the Sly -contender line, nice one! Overall it wasa good verse and i can see you doing big things in the future..

Evolution: Had a good verse aswell, the punches were ok but could use some elevation wiv more metaphors and more complicated lines. The punches weren't hitting as hard so you came off a little weaker but i can see potential there. Good luck man, no hate.

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This was feedback posted for Evolution
 

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