Voted For: jmsbnd07655

MAN U TOOK THE SHIT OUT MAN HAD PUNCHES BUT LACKED SUM PERSONALS BUT OTHAWISE U WERE AWESOME MAN, KICKED HIS ASS, MAN AND WATZ U PWIT DA NAME BIZZE MAN WAT A BIZZARE WANNAB ANYWAYZ BIZZY U LACKED PUNCHES FLOW AND THE REST .......... IS HISTORY
RETURN THE FAVOR 4 MY BATTLE AGAINST IMPERIAL WIT AN HONEST VOTE

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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

ok biz sstructure nees work, we dont know when a line ends so we end up payin more attention to tryin to figure it out rather than pay attention to the disses, and it had nice flow though, but j's had better structure and had harder disses.

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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

woah you have improved loads since we battled well done nice spit both of you but i lked jmsbnd's verse better... lemme break it down.

opener: bizzey
closure:bizzey
punches: jms
personals:none
metas:jms
multies:jms (more complexed)
flow:jms
Structure: jms

ok nice battle keep elevatin yo...

no hate... well done

Voted For: Bizzey

flow: jms his flow was easier to read ( biz you got kinda bunched up towards the end).
punches:bizz contained more of the in this
multi:goes to bizz by a lil (jms your multi part in the middle was aight yo)
personals: this goes to bizz he had them throughout
enjoyment: both were enjoyed

Voted For: Bizzey

Gotta give it to bizzy. His metaphores were much more complex and the punchlines were cold as hell. jmsbond's flo is tight but you just didnt have the punchlines to finish this one off.

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Voted For: Bizzey

bizzey took this...

Bizzey: betta multis...betta punches...betta structure...betta wordplay...overall it was a tie...but bizzy's multies won it for him here...

j....: tite verse...but it was a little basic...da punches were ill...but the structure was basic...use multies or somethin to make it more exciting...