ur the shit <---term people use when someone's dope.

That shit is not wordplay...That shit is just trash...you fuckin suck.

I would merk you too peices in one second..so don't even try steppin to me kid.

Know your place.

no bitch, your fuckin shit
don't even know wtf wordplay is then get the fuck outta here

This was feedback posted for V.i.P
 

BEST BARS:

and im only 5 lines down, so scream Kayo(K.O) like im a ref that counted to 10
and he thought he could win, and solitude have skill? only if the voters pretend
so feel the movement, V.i.P never falls, so creep in the dark and keep it moving
so im close to him? nah..im goin hard on my last two like new recruitments

VS

God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch
Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit
Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel
If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people


TIED ON PUNCHES...

CANT DECEIDE A WINNER, COULD GO EITHER WAY.


PLEASE HIT A BATTLE IN MY SIG, I WAS GONNA VOTE BUT IT WAS A TIE TO ME.

GOOD SHIT FROM BOTH.

Voted For: Solitude

vote-solitude...came with harder punches(decent) and more personals off nameplay..flow was better than VIP overall...Vip your shit was hella stretched and the structure was bad.Punches didnt come as hard.

overall-this was one-sided effort...keep elevating and work on the points were are needed.

RTF link in sig or Vote Will Be Removed

This was feedback posted for Solitude
 

v/ solitude..

a much better, cleaner verse. some ight punches also. the opener was the better one tho. even tho i used a line like this in the punchline league couple days ago.

not enuff post to vote, ill leave this as feed

Vip- i think you lacked punches in this, they just werent strong enuff. try to think up better concepts and keep your verse clean without stretchin ya lines. word.

return the favor- me vs. elite

Return the favor-

Voted For: V.i.P

Aiight imma have to go wit V.I.P. on this one...

its a new day, and im hittin up dude like lunch bullys, give up the pay
or witness pain from an upper classman, but it isnt freshman friday- V.I.P

God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch
Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit-Solitude

V.I.P def got my attention when it really came down to the opening lines. The first 2 of Solitudes seems played kinda now adays. Over all V.I.P sounded a better verse. Good battle.

bumpity...........

Voted For: Solitude

this verse was fucking hilarious

Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel
If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people

^hahahahahahahahaha...classik!!

Solitude, pretty to the point verse...funny...nyce punches...just if yu gonna use his name...dont do it repeatedly...thats redundant..and shows us...yu realli have no creative skill....i like that line i pointed out though...good shit

VIP, yur verse was more of a self hype, especially the way yu ended it....wasnt feeling it at all....Solitude took 100% shots at yu, yo

up ya content and focus on ya opponent...dont tell us waht yu can do...show us....unless, of course, yu do it with good taste...

thanx for the votes

uppin

funny how you came on an alias...and tried to battle newbies..and still having a hard time beating them....2-2...

wow, funny how all the vets realized that u didnt even come close to beating me
and i made an alias becuz i wanted to join another crew so stfu and i would say stick to OMs but you suck at that too

This was feedback posted for Solitude
 

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Voted For: Solitude

"If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people"

lmao that's harsh... I liked it... best line in the battle...
Solitude pretty easily dominated in this battle...
He just had the harder punches and personals...
V.I.P. didn't throw too many punches to begin with...
The 1's he did throw were either weak or played concepts...

Opener: Solitude (just for having more feeling and being far more harsh)
Closer: He (ended his verse much stronger than V.I.P. did)
Punches: Solitude
Personals: Solitude
Creativity: Neither
Complexity: Neither
Structure: Solitude

Vote: Solitude

This was feedback posted for V.i.P
 

jus checkin polls..................................

Voted For: Solitude

well solitude did come better, just had some wittier punchlines and didn't come played. solitude, you did have a very weak closer but the rest of your verse helped it win this battle.