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Clockwork 07-14-06 08:33 PM

Voted For: Sangre

I vote for Sangre. It was kind of hard to decide which one to vote between but Sangre got it. I like the last bar of your verse. That was a nice closer. U also had better punches than Irise so that's why you get my vote.

..Grillz.. 07-19-06 05:20 PM

Voted For: iRise

v-iRise

srry Sangre this kid stomped u, thats the best u could come up with in 30 mins...serious son, u need to get some skillz if u wanna say on this site...he had u on the multis, personals and on the flow, u got brutally murdered on the punches...my vote goes to iRise

Dickard. 07-19-06 06:33 PM

Voted For: iRise

irise-your lines were a bit long but still effective pretty good use of the rhyme scheme good punches in the verse could use some harder punches but you got the job done none the less good flow...brought out ur punches good.

overall: 5.5/10

sangre:Your verse was structured weird but flowed okay.....you had some okay punches not enough to beat your opponent..never underestimate ur opponent then u come weaker then him.....i think you should stay fluent with punches through out and not die down.....keep elevatin....

overall: 4/10

v/irise

rtf on my battle verse rexless once he drops...peace.

Go0niez FuKCaz 07-26-06 10:05 PM

This was feedback posted for iRise
 
i like ya name but yu need to elavate ........5'z p0ppin

Czar Bishop 07-28-06 12:52 PM

Voted For: iRise

Both ppl need to elevate. There was no personals......

But iRise's shit was easier to read. So he had a better flow.

Plus, he had better wordplay.

So i'm gonna go with iRise.


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