No.

iight well are you going to spit soon??? cause ima prolly start keyin my shit up now

well im uppin for unholys verse and i will spit wunc i see you have started or whatever

Well im busy with other things ill do somin later.

yo you might wanna get back on causae you only got 2 hours left til your deadline and i already told you that i dont want to win because of you not showing.....

but fuck it here is my verse

Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...
His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...
Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...
You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...
This guy seen me merk Accomplishment now your scared of battling...
You ran from this snake before the attack when you hurd my rattle...
You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...

blahh not my best but fuck it

This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..
Ur Crew is Crazy Facin the Best and Only Dark Knights..
My Words will Haunt u Have u afraid to Turn off Lights..
Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..

Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...


I Love Fake Personals.

yeah you didn't merk me either you pm'd a buncha fags to vote for you...

done..

black :

Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...
His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...
^^ str8 opener decent personal 6/10
Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...
^^wasnt feelin this that much 5/10
You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...
^^bad punch wasnt hott 3/10
This guy seen me merk Accomplishment now your scared of battling...
You ran from this snake before the attack when you hurd my rattle...
^^hott sshyt nice punch 6/10
You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...
^^hott shyt funny ass personal your best line 9/10

overall: 29/50 (58%)

unholy wun:

This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
^^nice multies and punch decent opener 6/10
Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..
^^more good multies .suckyville??? lol 6/10
Ur Crew is Crazy Facin the Best and Only Dark Knights..
My Words will Haunt u Have u afraid to Turn off Lights..
^^str8 bar not too complex 5/10
Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
^^str8 bar again still not too hott 6/10
Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..
^^hott finisher good shyt decent closer your best bar 8/10

overall: 31/50 (62%)

good verses from both of you but i think unholy edged this one out with his multies...they just made his verse have more impact close battle

vote : unholy wun

~!1!~

umm no its not a fake person you retard.....strobe said no and let you be the mod for RI......so fuck off

and as for you accomplishment.....no i didnt pm anyone......they came and voted cause they saw you

I actually think that Blak had this i mean it was a tight battle but on the whole Blak won it on the following.

Creativity: I like the way he used links i think that wont ever get played as long as its fresh links and it works well which it did here.

Wordplay: Not that Uns was bad but Blak was just more on his game on this occasion.

Structure: Un had a good structure and kept it even but looked a lil too short and basic.

Punches: Good hard hittin punches won it here but only just for Blak on his game

V/Blak Siinz

upppin......#1

Edited.

Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...
His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...

^^ ??..difficult to comprehend..reword it...sounds like a diss tho

Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...

^^ good personals...but, your flow is choppy...reword it

You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...


^^ aiight...decent
You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...

^^ BLAH...not feelin the continual use of gay humor

This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..

^...simple, but the last line was a good punch and beat anything in his first 4 lines

Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..

^^^ decent

Vote: Unholy...punches actually landed


peace

uppin.....2-1 you man

This battle actually sucked.....

I was expecting so much more from both of you cause all I hear is about how good you two are and I was disappointed. Black Siinz didn't have any good punches. None of his lines were clever in the slightest and his flow was way off due to stretched lines here and there.......Unholy wun wasn't too much better. He also lacked punches and hit wit was not apparent in this one. His flow was better than Black's because his lines were short and to the point, much easier to flow with. That is the only reason he won this battle.....

Vote - Unholy wun........you both have a lot of elevating to do