Voted For: mR iKiLL.

yeah u ran this one battle here...

ya had more hard hitting punches...i liked ur word plays and flow was constant all thru....your concepts were much more clare to me....and anyhow i liked the attitude u had on this verse...

the only thing wrong with ur verse was the personal on his name...that was kinna the weakest...but u still get my vote for gettin more plus n stuff on mu point of view...


holla at mine or this is getting off!

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OneStepBeyond
Beat you once so I'll beast you cunt... Drop your verse,
But before it hits... The "No Gay Shit" rule will stop it first,
Funny because it was his rule.. 7/10
Claim you aren't who I say... Frontin' as fuck though,
"I'm not Sik Wit It!" Well tell us somethin' we don't know!
Dope line.. I dig it.. 7/10
Pull your fuckin' skirt up... Think you clappin' shit?
You tryna get a W... But 'u' couldn't even get 'half of it,'
Meh... 6/10
This kid is broke and you can tell by first impressions,
So why the fuck would I rag on you when that's all you're dressed in,
Hahaha, I like it.. 8/10
Think you're some gangster? Wearin' colors and hurtin' dudes?
The only signs you throw up usually say will work for food,
Pwned... 8/10
You ain't goin' nowhere, hope you ain't a dream believer,
Miss Kill? Yeah... I couldn't really see it either,
Nice.. 7/10
You're ridin' a bike uphill, ain't easy is it,
So why just drop my verse when I can beat you with it?
Meh.. 5/10
PUN INTENDED! But let's get ready for you're old wordplay,
Want me to respect you? I only respect DIRT on Earth Day,
Dope.. 8/10
You said text battlin' is killin' time? Sure, it works,
But shit... I said "It's killin' time" before this verse.
Blah.. 5/10

Total: 61/90 = 68%


mR iKiLL.
When it come to this shit rap shit i far from sweet
My rhymes hard, bite my barz, you'll loose all ya teeth
Self glory is whack.. 4/10
Im the future in this bitch ... You the one left behind
Im pm'd everyone and told em i beat you ... Im One Step Beyond
Whack.. 3/10
Man fuck text im fine ... But when that Nine Thing click
I'll have you lookin up from the floor like a Spike Lee Flick
Honestly?.. 3/10
Bitch.. Yo girl aint tell you? ... Bout how i had her singin?
And bout how i call her 'navy' .. Cuz i filled her up with SeaMen?
Dumbest/oldest fuckin' wordplay I've ever seen again.. 4/10
Nigga im a demon ... Plus i say wit my gun too
Im sick, i spit AIDS ... 'Fuck Wit me' if you want to
Wow.. 0/10
OneStep you're not vet ... Im bout to defeat this rookie
It get my dick hard when i realize im bout to eat this pussy
Whack.. 1/10
Alot people idolize my ways, cuz they learned that violence pays
So with no remorse, OneStep will get took like my toddler days
Not bad.. 6/10
It's far from rage ... Im just an emcee with a mad temper
But i crack faces like im beatin on some glass dentures
Nah.. 3/10
Im done fuck it,who cares who won this shit
Just remeber my name 'iKill" ... i Run this bitch
Weakest way to end a battle.. 0/10

Total: 24/90 = 27%


Winner: OneStepBeyond

This was a full out slaughter by OneStepBeyond. Took this hands down..

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Yeah Kirk thi sone. I'm too tired to explain but he was just better. Church.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Easy win for OSB. Ms iKiLL was whack as hell your punches were retarded and what were you thinking with

"It get my dick hard when i realize im bout to eat this pussy"

^^^That was horribly gay go get yourself a gay pride shirt for that line {According to the "No gay shit" rule that should be a DQ}... You left out words in some places like

"OneStep you're not vet"

Add an a make it sound decent at least. And you talked about havin sex with his girl when most likely your still a virgin. Elevate

OSB you didnt come super hard but it was enough to KO him at least your verse wasnt gay. Few good punches like half a W and the will work for food made me laugh. Congrats

V/ OSB

Took one step and Kanye West yelled "JESUS WALKS!"

This was feedback posted for mR iKiLL.
 

you are self idolizing too much try to insult the other guy more and try to say original things

Voted For: mR iKiLL.

i liked mr Ikill's verse better. Dude really came harder. good battle by both sides tho. Appreciate the efforts. Cool shit overall mayneeeeeee. good hitting punches. keep it up homie.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Opener-One Step Beyond
Punches-One Step Beyond
Flow-Tie
Metaphors-mr iKill
Personals-One Step Beyond
Vocab-none
Closer-Tie

OVERALL-One Step Beyond


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