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cold souljah 09-04-03 03:11 AM

alright syntext hers a few in oldest to newest form


fairy tales that i wrote?, then you just bullshitted-
stayin committed to be a fake prince?-
take hints, when you were dethroned you been a snake since-
now you taking shots at me-
talk is cheap, glocks are deep-
an apology,… is not needed, cuz in your dream i was heated-
waited till you pulled out your gun-
pulled out mine, u pleaded, I didn’t give fuck, shot one-
burned your forehead, i left, fuck that went back and shot more lead till you so red-




i spit life drainin lyrics so you stay hidden-
you spit pussy gay ass shit so i stay spittin-
so listen and stay sittin-
youre bullshittin and ima continue hittin-
youre wack and you stand up?-
put your hand on your dick and feel your nuts blow off-
your gay lyrics got you in this shit plus, you a show off-
i got you thinking im so soft?-
howd i do that?, you must me overdosin on zoloft-
shut the fuck up and keep my name out ya mouth-
before go off on you and show you what im really about.




Its only necessary to pull out my bestiary all aimed at Legendary not even left secondary-
Clean homicide, no trace left, a body with nothing to hide with the face of death-
Still the investigation is hasted, but nothing found, time wasted-
See ledge that’s what happens when the stage is set-
And a vet goes up against a clearly no hearted souljah-
Being sent dearly so departed I scold ya-
I told ya, got a protective aura so you spit I don’t get fazed-
I spit one line, get dazed, too much haze-
Left crazed, seems like you’re stuck in a maze-
But ways to get out but your blinded-
So hard you try but you can’t find em-
You run but the lyrics give chase, you’re faced with two ways-
You stop, spit back, and hopefully you don’t get placed-
Or you keep runnin and keep your pace-
Either way you’re fucked, no point in stayin ducked-
Your stuck in a split decision-
Putting you out of commission-
Cuz I doubt you mod workin is weaker than you dissin-
Too much whishin your brain ultimately dissolves-
Cold metal leanin on your head, blast with the magnum that revolves- (magnum revolver)


what do u think am i in?

**~SynText~** 09-04-03 03:17 AM

ayo i vote in for these reasons....

flow...on point
vocab.....nice
wordplay...on point
punches....didn't really see any but theres potential for em
multis.....alright


lets get two more in votes

cold souljah 09-04-03 03:22 AM

i know about the punchlines but its a working progress itll take me awhile.

no disrespect but could you guys change your name.
somethin thats catchy?

cold souljah 09-04-03 03:26 AM

oh and im not audio but im workin on it,kinda. that will probably take me a few months

cold souljah 09-04-03 03:30 AM

how do u check pms?
cant find em

Mc Haze 09-04-03 04:56 AM

yo heres a tryout,,

u is wack,
i smoke crack,
im gonna smack,
u in tha back,

Mc Haze 09-04-03 04:57 AM

lol just fuckin about heres my real tryout 2 battle links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77638

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77633

**~SynText~** 09-04-03 10:17 AM

um ok first IJL will not change the name.......plus you ain't even in yet youngin...2nd Haze ya not gettin my vote with those pre K lines holmes ......and to check ya pms go to forum jumo and its like one of the top ones....yeah its the first one.......

SmokaJoka. 09-04-03 02:28 PM

To coldsouljah: IJL has kept it's name for two years for underestimation of other emcees that think we are weak.....we will not change our name.......fix up ur vocabulary and try using wordplay....and make another tryout if u want.....

To MCHaze: fix up ur wordplay in battles....and u will have better punches......

so far.....no disrespect...but no to both emcees.....

peace
4:20

**~SynText~** 09-04-03 03:43 PM

aight once cats

Da Joka 09-04-03 10:19 PM

werd IJL fo life

n what happened wit whyte? did he drop audio links?

**~SynText~** 09-04-03 11:50 PM

nah i don't think he did yet holmes but lets get more tryouts

~ProPaiN~ 09-05-03 03:32 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by SmokaJoka666
nah^^he is past fam.......but u told me u wouldn't be that active propain.......if u can be active then i'll immediately add u to the roster......

peace
4:20



^^^AM Delighted to roll wit my dawg Smoka just lIke the Old Dayzz hahahha let the GAMES BEGINnn...


Quote:
Originally posted by Mistake
i dont like him...sounds like he has an EXPLOSIVE attitude...hahaha i crack mahself up...:D


^^^NOBody Asked you to Like me.......Cuz Am GAngStuH ya HEAAAAAAAARD!!!...lol


Quote:
Originally posted by **~SynText~**
you on Crack^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6


^^^hahahaha Hoook me up wit that White Widow aka Morta....hahahaha

SmokaJoka. 09-05-03 10:24 AM

lol^^Mistake is in IJL...he was fuckin off.....but he does tend to talk shit to us.....lol......aight...u better be active u anus......u will be a nice addition to the IJL roster......again...LMAO.....aight coo.........

peace
4:20

**~SynText~** 09-05-03 02:44 PM

werd we got a new member **jumos out and yells
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