If you ever try to rap again..there will be an international vendetta to rip out your voice box...

vocals are loud as a mother fucker.. flow was way off.. n quit tryin to be a gangsta... delivery was way off... sounds like u talkin.. i see a lot of cats, learned how to do audio, they get so exicited n post it(that use to be me 2..lol) but music takes time.. dont just post what u did.. make sure u got hte flow down, make sure u know how to deliver each word on each line... lyrics were sub par... this has a loTTTTTTTTTTTTTT of ROOMMMM for improvement...

n MUSIC TAKES TIME!!!

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