Yo K-M, I hear ya fam. I think what I'm talkin' bout is just the essential differences between being a "battle rapper" and an MC. I patterned it somewhat after "The Takeover" by Jigga. In that, he was basically just spittin' facts, he didn't use any metaphorical punches really, cause the truth hurts more. But I know it wasn't the best verse, I was running low on shit to say. I liked the verse I posted in the cypher more too, lol. I was like shit, I should've saved some of that shit and combined it with this...ah well.

itwas so-so. some of the joint u rhymed the same word twice. and some lines didnt make sence but some did.it was just iite, nufin' ta call a riot about.

its sad how u had like 30 bars of bullshit....

and for me to clap back at ya would be worthless for real....

alot of simple bars in there...
there was noting vicious noting ruthless just some personal diss that was so-so at most and the rest was like??? shut the fuck up.......

honestly if it was a bit better i would murder you right now...
but since it wasnt i dont see whyshould i reply back to it?... i mean honestly... good try...

i think this falls into the wack diss section with 2v.....

30 bars of bullshit eh? I get it, you don't feel my style. I didn't have that much to go on, considering I'm new to RV and I ain't know shit about ya. This was a diss, not a battle, so I kept it light on punchlines. Like I said, you got punches homey, but in most of your verses I could change the name of the MC you dissin' and it wouldn't make a difference. They're generic, and I ain't feelin' that too much. Anyways, shit's squashed already, so let's keep it chill.

Yeah, and if you want to drop some murderous verse, feel free yo, cause I'd like to see if you could flip it like I did, on some real facts steez.

Lets say B.E.S.T put up better then fuckin NYC haha 300 knows they got this ohhh and im bak so get off this jock fuck newbies cus they think they got it but they'll learn!

eerrr forget i wrote this shit.. lol totally mis-read the last post

This fucking sucked. Props on making it really long thought. Shows you don't know when to quit.

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