There Is No Loop

There clearly is.

Whats your definition of a loop?

http://img10.imageshack.us/my.php?image=wertwsg.jpg

except for. as you can tell..
its basically one big loop.

thats what im sayin man. there aint a pattern at all

I didnt listen to your beat yet but your print screen image has no sens, 2 intros, 2 intros number 2, then 3 hooks, then an intro, then 6 verse, then 3 hooks , then 1 intro, cant wait to listen to that!

Thank fuckin christ. Bring some logic.......

Im not the crazy one after all

Theres a repitition of sounds isnt there? His bars are very short. Somthing that plays once, then plays again, is a loop.

You can see it in his picture, the same compisitions have been placed next to each other, there for creating a 'loop'
no its not the best loops, nor is it usable, but it IS a loop and is possible to rap on.


heres his layout.

intro, intro, intro 2, intro 2, chorus, chorus, chorus, intro, berse 1, verse 1, verse, verse, chorus, chorus, chorus, intro.

Like I said, clearly there are loops.

The Acoustic beat definitely has potential if you add something to it. I thought that was the best beat of the two..

You can rap to the beat. it's a 4/4 count. the only thing is that it's hard because you can't ride the beat. there's no back drums helping you to stay on a 4 count. As for it not being a loop, it is obviously a loop because the same thing plays over and over in four counts. Young, you're pretty good for a beginner. I'm not a beat maker or anything, but just a suggestion, put some drums to carry the rockstar beat. if you put that deep bass drum on it, it would be dope, and it still feels kinda empty, try adding small stuff here and there to fill the beat. Just a suggestion from a listener.

Jett, it does loop, and you can rap to it, it's just more difficult, you need good rhythm.

why cant ya just go intro,verse,chorus,verse,chorus,verse,chorus?

if you listen Intro 1 & 2 are the same thing, i just dropped the snare.
its because when i was doing the beat i was actually freestyling to it
and i dropped it to add a litttle more to it.

I just named it like that to know my placements.

Its the same melody, and hi hat..

its kinda like a break down..
to slow the pace of the fast snare..

its not that hard to catch..

jett what are you talkin bout....i got dope flows to both of the beats....the rockstar one IS SUPER easy.....

i mean i wouldnt use them no offense the instruments sound too blah for me...the patterns arent bad tho.

^yea i feel ya. lol.
they sound real beginner ish.
i'm working on Acoustics the most right now, because Rockstar just needs a bit of changing up and switchs.

but i feel ya. tahnks for the feed though.

obviously i fucken suck and have no clue what Im talkin about cus i just dont get it. Whatever.....flo on it. I CANT. my bad for sayin ne thing....The second some one does summin on this I wanna hear. No hate or disrespect, Im just fuckin baffled.