and I got mine in on time cuz its 11:20 here...........
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yo is LI in this battle.............?
cause I was typin so fast tryn to git this shit in I dont know if he was in it........... but I thought he was cause he posted a verse............. |
i know it 11 :20 deadline was 2hours & 20 mins ago eastern time but
. .But I'll Let It Go...... At Least you bothered posting.. I'm Sure Shadow Wont Mind. Yes crew votes allowed. as long as thee elvated |
Lmao . . Bab's L.I posted for SPuL could you not tell.
L.I's name aint on the thread & its to late to edit you verse that's pretty much fucked up your personals. |
damn i feal dumb.............................. :huh:
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yea, he posted my verse. Well, yea, guess only 4 people posted. Uppin' for votes. I'm back for a while, so yea.
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yo y'all know that i battle in elevated
if u want proof look no further than my sig. both them battles in elevated anyway i'm just gonna drop some feedback on the two i think won and why.................... Soul Skriptz u are the definite pick cuz u had the strongest verse out of all of them. u had a nice structure with everything kept similar length and it helped u with a tight flow from beginning to end. ure verse gave me a lot of laughs with some funny ass lines. u had a lot of original punches in ure drop and personals were like in nearly every line. ure wordplay was slightly basic in a few spots but mainly u had a complex rhyme scheme going on. took it to every MC in the battle, didn't really focus on a particular one, u shared out the disses. u opened gud and stayed consistent throughout ure verse but ure closer............DAMN that was sum funny shit, best line of this entire battle!! SPuL personally i think the other three verses were pretty weak when compared to skriptz they were just not on par with his level. but i do think that out of the 3 SPuL had the best one. even tho ure lines were pretty stretched it didn't fuck up ure flow which stayed tight from beginning to end. u had a nice variety of punches for each MC and the personals were gud in there to, sum funny shit. u to had sum nice original punches, not like some verses that are full of played lines and personals. u had a nice rhyme scheme although it was pretty basic vocab in a few places, not as gud as skriptz. overall i think u came pretty weak compared to wat u can do, u cud have had some better personals and some harder punches. but u did come stronger than shadows edge and babylon so u get my 2nd vote. V/ - Soul Skriptz & SPuL |
Soul Skripts
I choose you becuz you was wicket and had everything, Punches was on the basic step and Stuff..Structure was desent anfd very easy to read giving a good type of spit in balance..SImilies was put in there and a lil bit of metaphores..Dont know about personals becuz I wasnt very into it..this was a quik vote Spul You came aight SO I choose you becuz you creativity murked it.. I liked how your style was and how the punches mainly stayed focused and direct, Also the metaphores was On top and structure was decnet and Had a few more things in there... Rest Of Yall I have to say babylon was close..and shadows was Not very into it in my opinion, Kind of lacked in alot of things and came weak in a way, Triple N was decent and Ordinary, But babylon Murked it with the No No No part.. 1st=Soul Skriptz 2nd=Spul Also Soul Knows I battle in elevated |
I'm guessing im
Winning. Oh yeah if your gonna vote Make sure you put 1st = . . & 2nd = . . |
Cos its
1st vs 2nd 2nd vs 1st. |
Wow.
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ok, so me and Soul move on.
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