TGH: your topical was very good and u stayed on topic the whole time...your wordplay was good and your structure was top notch...everything was pretty consistent and the whole verses flowed nice...your multies made your verse even hotter and the rhyme scheme was good...lots of emotion and good meta's

overall : 8/10

shadows: i think you had a hott verse but u didnt stay on topic throughout the whole thing...your verse was more on an insightfull level...you had perfect structure...consistent flow good multies...some decent meta's but i wasnt really feeling your verse because it didnt stay on topic and wasnt as consistent as TGH's....but still a hott topical verse from you especially since it is your first 1

overall : 6/10

vote: TGH

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