I vote for Cam..we're in a voting ring..he voted for me now I have to vote for him..my vote shouldnt count though cause Cam's sexuality is locked and contained..his gayness needs to be released..haha

both were great injoyable peices

Baren was love to his granmother i felt the love you expressed and feelings were in my opinin realy drawn out good stuff...

Deacon i injoyed your peice more there for its my vote, this because the words used well the way i read it jus sounded right
the rhythm the verses...well to tell you the trueth i can't really explain it but...lol...lets jus say it was more of a complete picture


Gongrates to both peices


one has to win my vote there for it goes to

DEACON

peace

Cam dont be a bitch.....i know more about poetry then you ever will...so meh
but no hate...to me deacon's was better...if you cant except that.

BITE ME

lmfao

i wasnt bitching, i just dont like how any of you voted .. none of you seem to grasp how to write other than give text a 'flow' and tell a story, shits deeper than that but blah .. fuck it .. i only signed up cause i thought it didnt go on your records ..

= /

cam read my freakin sig mayne....lets be for real here im not at all lying about this....the vote was weak and me and him arnt down at all he'd vote against me anyday of the week even if i clearly won...honestly this battle should be over..i hav to fix these polls.......

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nevermind this battle shouldnt be over hahah......

3-0^^^^^ i mean if that seems fair.................................

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lol.... deacon im tryin ta be ya friend... lol u just wont let it happen... u continue to diss me and shyt when all i did was battle u... i won fair and square bro... 1

Well I expect nothing less than thought prvoking lyrics from the two of you...you have really brought it all together and lived up to the topic with your words...I appreciate it..and you both should appreciate your elevation because it brings the best out of you...

now to the pieces...

Camarac / Baron Mind

For showing me when Angers Raised, to just turn And Walk Away

~it might be the storyline from an Eyedea song~
~not copying though..decent line~

if there's ANY form of heaven: please tell my angel That I
Loved her Dearly..
.. i never got the chance to do so, before she Passed By..
But Clearly..
our Bonds Alive. i sense ur presence though were Miles Apart
and you'll ALWAYS have a place ..
next to the Memories trapped in the Confines of my Heart.

~some had stood out..a lot different...
but I know your a good writer and you wrote
this as if you were trying to put the pieces back together~


this was a good write but you could have been better man

Deacon

just a nieghborhood fixture on the corner drinking liquer

~more of a storyline..more imagery..appreicated...~

Blames the system of building jails instead of schools,
Blames religion is a sent of useless rules
~i liked this line here it just makes you think a little~

the slightest touch from the heavens can heavily change its odds,
and tip the scales to either side of the problem in our lives,
He found faith in a cage and his minds already free,
He could float through these walls far beyond what he can see.
He sees the sun as a cross that he'll carry if need be,
but ofcourse his body wants to join his soul and be free

~the first two lines of this got me..the rest was icing~
~good imagery and wordplay..which is usually
nonexistant from you~

this was great

now for a judgling...I would have to go with deacon on this...
a liked what both of you had to say and you painted pictures
with the topic beautifully but deacon had stood out more with
his wordplayand imagery compared to camaracs straightforward picking up the pieces approach...if my reply to judge these pieces isnt appreciated...at least I didnt copy and paste like Gege :kid:

I rock coffhouses and battle outside of this...ill hear twenty some poets from six a clock to eleven on a friday night..I know poetry
and im well aware of both of you approached this topic so now
im picking who stood out to me..take it like men please

Vote : Deacon