freeman - structure was good........flow fell off a lil......vocab was pretty good........some good multis.......wordplay was nice at times.......some of the punches connected........good personals......

oakley - structure was good.....flow was pretty good......vocab was ok...........multis were good.........wordplay was ok.........punches were pretty good..........personals were nice........

breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - oakley
vocab - tie
multis - tie
wordplay - freeman
punches - freeman
personals - oakley

conclusion - freeman takes this in wordplay and punches so he gets my vote.......personals were very close as well.......and i think freemans closer won this battle......

VOTE - FREEMAN

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114734

thanx........

Both Of Them Shits Was The Wackest Shits Ive Ever Heard

Winner = Freeman

Oakley- You Had A Nice Verse, With nice Punches. Your Flow Was Dope, And Your Structure Was Nice And Short. Your Personals Were Nice, And Your Vocab Was Ok. Stay Away From Sex Punches And Such.

Freeman- Nice Verse, Your Punches Connected Hard, And You Flowed Nicely. Your Structure Was New, And Good. You Had Nice Personals Too, And Vocab Was Ok. I Liked The Sig Makers Line.

Oakley
Punches- B+
Flow- A-
Structure- A
Personals- B+
Vocab- B-
Overall Grade= A-/B+

Freeman
Punches- A-
Flow- A-
Personals- A-
Structure- A
Vocab- B
Overall Grade= A/A-

Vote= Freeman, In My Opinion He Came Harder...

oakley ate you wiff the personals son

ok my brake down:


Freeman you came oright man. some good punches in there but didnt really attack him if you know what i mean. If you used more personals in your verse you would have won this .

Oakley you came with that line on WEC and it was good and attacked his crew. I felt your verse hurt freeman more. And isnt that what battling is about?

Vote Oakley:)

No hate

uppin

You will get banned for that bitch... 1 line voting...

Uppin... its 3-3...

Pz...

Damn Free, you ugly, big nose, and you suck at rapping. Oakley took this one, although his wasnt good, he had better punches, better personals, better meta's, flow, you know... everything. Vote/Oak

^^ do you wanna get banned... fag,,, read the rules on voting, ya herb.... anyways... heres how i see it.... quite a close battle... but most catagories were jus edged by freeman... tho ive seen much better battles... free your personals brought more wit. as did ya punches, but you could have hit harder... but i vote on punches and like i said yours came that bit harder so vote=free... but it was sumwhat disappointing all round...... lataz...

only newb's say this was a wak battle....
thats sayin summin, ne ways i came bad here....
uppin....

Punches: Free, Oak used a lot of played gay jokes, so this goes to Free. Oak would've taken this if he didn't have thrown played punches in there.
Wordplay: Free, the battery powered bar/line whatever was nice.
Multis: Neither, y'all need to use multis seriously
Personals: Tie, Oak had the font line, Free had the sigmaker line
Opener: Oak, better opener, the UV line was pretty weak
Closer: Free, ended with a nice personal, Oak's was alright, Free's was just better.

Vote - FreeMan

Oak, I've peeped a few of your battles, and you were doing good, this battle didn't even compare. Use more creative punches, add a little wordplay. Free, add multis to your verse, it'll correct the flow, make it on point.

You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention
Oak's best line

Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
Free's best set of lines (Don't know what to call it)