This was feedback posted for David Lama
 

Yeah, Lama merked. .

Voted For: KempoMRK

lets be honest dude, you could say u been rarely sick
k, em’s alot better than me.. but you ain’t slim shady bitch
^
weak

Just stay in school , look how ya slay spellings dude
‘N O, K ain’t describing ya skills, its what girls stay telling you
^
thats a lil bit better..

So Im’a Drive off and dump ya body with a load
you don’t need to pack up….but your still gonna hit the road
^
first line could of set the punch up better

I warned you about this, don’t act like ya lost the card kid
but if you’re special K, they taking the cereal off the market
^
Ha, that made me laugh a little

I’m a cool killer.. Let ya smoke.. Then u’ll die high
I need help for a drive bye, while You can’t help but drive Bi
^
uhhhhhh......NAH.


Kempo, your verse was just better in every aspect, both came weak

but kemp got this..

Voted For: David Lama


KempoMRK: Hate to say it but your verse was terrible. Practically no punch-lines and some of ya shit didn't even rhyme. No multies, no nothin. You definately don't belong in elevated front lines. Take it down a level and "elevate" some more then come back to "elevated".

David Lama : Again not such a great verse. I wouldn't consider it elevated but it was much better than Kempo's. You had a punch line or two but they weren't that great, try some multi's. But yea, you easily took this one.

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Voted For: David Lama

both verses were weak but if you actually did it in 10 minutes or less then I guess its str8. K's verse had no decent punches but he made the attemp. his lama personal was really weak and childish. dont do that 10 minute battle stuff. the results wont usually be as good as it should be.

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Voted For: David Lama

lets be honest dude, you could say u been rarely sick
k, em’s alot better than me.. but you ain’t slim shady bitch
Just stay in school , look how ya slay spellings dude
‘N O, K ain’t describing ya skills, its what girls stay telling you
I warned you about this, don’t act like ya lost the card kid
but if you’re special K, they taking the cereal off the market

VS

Dude's a huge geek, the net is his life and the rest is a pawn,
Cos if I told him to go Home he'd instinctively press the button,


Allah got this one, his verse was solid. Seen better from you kemp.

Stay up.

RV's voting is pretty much disgraceful n stuff .

Yeah, Lama won this lmao. It was a 10 minute key that we did 6 months ago, so don't expect much.

Voted For: David Lama

lets be honest dude, you could say u been rarely sick
k, em’s alot better than me.. but you ain’t slim shady bitch
Just stay in school , look how ya slay spellings dude
‘N O, K ain’t describing ya skills, its what girls stay telling you
So Im’a Drive off and dump ya body with a load
you don’t need to pack up….but your still gonna hit the road
I warned you about this, don’t act like ya lost the card kid
but if you’re special K, they taking the cereal off the market
I’m a cool killer.. Let ya smoke.. Then u’ll die high
I need help for a drive bye, while You can’t help but drive Bi

vs.

Nothing

Though this'll prolly get DQ'ed. Lama = Alah right? Anyways, your shit was pretty tight. The second bar was the dopest, imo. Kemp came forced as fuck with the played wordplay. So ya.

v/Lama