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Voted For: Mike Macs

Vote- Mike Macs

Weak battle.

Flow- Tie. Pretty basic flows from both catz.

Punches- Mike Macs. Some alright punches. Five star had too much self-glorification shit in his drop to throw one.

Personals- None.

Wordplay- None.

Multis- None.

This battle came down to punches. Mike Macs threw some, and though they were weak, they still hit harder than Five star's...

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This was feedback posted for Mike Macs
 

ya'll wack u no i'm betta ya'll need to step back we all no that ya'll both sniffin crack .

Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

MiC MaCs u should hand over your rapping writes

1. u got merked.
2. ya Verse was just stupid..

For Instance:

"You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account"

^^ What the FuCk...that shyt is too ConFuSing...i still dont FUcKIN GET IT..

" N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics "


^^ wHAT THE HELL was that supposed to rhyme with?

I cant even comment further on ya verse, and people call me wack..Oh my GoSh!!!

u just crammed wordz to make them rhyme, and ya whole verse aint flow for Shyt...
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Five Star:

ya verse definitely topped dudes, at some cases ur shyt aint rhyme too....and u got off flow...meaning, u aint finish ur lines...

I dont like ur structure..ha

but you getz my vote, and dude omg....*walks ouT*

Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

yo man thats sum ill rhymen i m gonna giove you my vote its close but id have to givve it to ya show sum love bk to my battles

dam dis shit hella old uppin

Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

FG:
This Wack Mc Is About 2 Get Lyrically Devoured/
U Accepted Da Battle, Your Stupid But Not A Coward/
4/10 - meh opener.
This Hoe Iz 2 Slow It'll B Dayz Before He Realizes He Lost/
Jus A Pussy Without Heart Off Ta See Tha Wizard Of Oz/
3/10 - played.
Another Wack Rapper Puttin Real Thuggs Ta Shame/
Im Block-tested Fivestar General...battle Acclaimed/
2/10 - lame.
Now Pay Respects Cuz Lyrically Your My Son/
U Also A Turf-hopper Don Even Noe Were U From*/
3/10 - meh attempt at personal.
I Keep An Arsenal Of Words,nouns,adjectives And Verbs/
2 Verbally Assimilate Fake Ass "macs" And Herbs/
3/10 - meh.
So Texually U Becoming Equvilent 2 A Dead Man/
Nand No Visine Can Clear Up Tha Glocks Red Eye**/
2/10 - no.
So Don Don Try, Jus Eat Ya Wheaties And Re-up On Ya Minerals/
An Maybe Learn Dat Cadets Like U Should Challenge Da General/
2/10 - weak closer.
19/70




Mike:
You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account
And ya verses, like mc hammers dough, will never amount
3/10 meh opener.
Readin yo raps is sufferin, shits feels like chronic *indigestion*
N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics
0/10 - riiiight, try me.
Cypher you claimin to be a father, like you eva fucked a whore
N you provin 2 have skillz is like ya dick....nothin eva seen before
2/10 - gay.
It's like I'm the only real nigga here, put all ya bogus rumors to rest
Actin like you real but you as fake as pamela anderson breastz
1/10 - Your new homie, and still cant get any more fuckin played. and wow look he said the N word, to try and make his line seem so much coolier.
Ya punches like chris tucker stand up, annoyin, shit's just bad humor
Horrible, you rappin good is outta the ordinary, abornmal, just like a tumor
2/10 - explain?
Stick with the title you got, cus weight, you'll neva be carryin
False info you be givin is like two gay niggas, never be marryin
3/10 - wow your best line was about gay ppl!
11/70


weak battle, no word of a lie... I would merk either of you any day of the week.

Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

feedback on mac-
reading was smooth but punches weren't that strong ...some of them were played to......

feedback on general
didn't have as much punches as macs....but overall generals verse just came alot stronger.....

i vote general ~1~