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-   -   2. hotshh! Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193194)

headgames 06-04-05 05:11 PM

weerdness, upping them

sdizzle 06-04-05 11:43 PM

We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway
Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away

^ only good line

wow hot came ass X 200000000

v/ the guy who wasn't hot...

Master Minded 06-04-05 11:50 PM

3-1............ upping yo yo

High-Dro 06-05-05 12:00 AM

pretty sure it's 2-1

Master Minded 06-05-05 12:06 AM

King Solo - Me
Skriptz - Me
Sdizzle - Me
Eph - hotshh!

3-1 bro

E.C 06-05-05 10:56 AM

ight i aint gonna have time to vote properly so ill just break uit down as easy as i can..

hotshh!

i thought u had some real dope lines in there... good punches decent concepts and some good personals... other lines wernt as hard hitting or not as effective in other words as the other ones here is some lines i liked anyway:

He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough
By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck
^^ this line was dope... not played and very effective

Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters
O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER!
^^ good concept went off star wars and came off wit a dope personal

here are saome lines i didn't like:

"Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted
Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included
^^ this was ok but i wasn't really feeling it as much as the others...

overall im gonna gvie you 86/100

Jack the ripper:

ight i felt u had a real strong verse... good punches not played punches... good structure and flow i didn't think u had one shit punch they were all dope here is 1 bar i liked:


We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway
Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away
^^ this was real dope lol... good wordplay aswell

here is 1 bar i didn't like:

Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin
Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in
^^ kinda played but it was alright..

overall imma give you 88/100

this is hard to call becuz both of them had a real good verse but i think imma give it to Jack coz he stayed more concistant and had better wordplay in his verses... pzz

v/ jack

headgames 06-05-05 01:15 PM

word, I knew this one was gonna be close, good battle yo', 4-1 me..

I wish there was the 4-1 k.o. rule :thumbup:

High-Dro 06-05-05 04:11 PM

i sincerely hope that sdizzle's vote doesnt count

headgames 06-05-05 04:59 PM

.................. it was an honest vote

headgames 06-05-05 08:07 PM

.................. 3-1, or 4-1

wt/v

upping yoyo

N.Tavarez 06-05-05 09:11 PM

3-1

sdizzle asscheeks

good battle, if u beat me, better win it all Jack....

headgames 06-05-05 09:43 PM

weeeerd, but it aint over just yet

Oz™ 06-06-05 01:01 AM

hot-shh:

Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid
Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases
that was skraight...first line was weak...6/10
He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough
By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck
played...thats an old joke..and i said that to this boy when i was rankin on his momma...3/10
Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters
O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER!
nice...9/10
See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends
Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting
no...that was weak...4/10
Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast
So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash*
played after marvjay used a suns line in the last round...4/10
Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man
With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands!
lol...good...7.5/10
"Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted
Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included
that was alrite....6.5/10
Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down
So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned"
good...8/10

overall-48/80(60%)

jack the ripper:

We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway
Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away
lol....8/10
Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes
Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes
lmao...that was pretty good...8.5/10
He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon
Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron
not feelin that oxymoron shit anymore after mase used it...4/10
Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching
Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin)
concept was skr8...delivery wasnt as strong....str8 tho...7/10
Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass
Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass
weak...4/10
Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave
Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead
...is after he's dug up their grave
ehhh...5/10
C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue
Your like last place marathon finishers
...you've come so far just to lose
decent...5.5/10
Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin
Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in
straight....7/10

overall-49/80(61%)

vote-jack the ripper

Master Minded 06-06-05 01:01 PM

thats 4-1

5-1 if dizzles vote counts

headgames 06-06-05 02:41 PM

............. I guess both battles can be closed now yo!


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