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GKillaz05 04-25-07 07:38 PM

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GKillaz05 04-28-07 01:41 PM

lets get some more votes on this, come on peeps.

Oz™ 04-28-07 03:06 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

checkin pollss...

decent battle right now..sheist stop duckin me



Removed

Oz™ 04-28-07 03:07 PM

shit my bad..ima get that vote removed

GKillaz05 05-08-07 04:24 PM

lets get some more votes happenin' on this battle!!

GKillaz05 05-13-07 08:14 PM

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Lungz 05-14-07 07:37 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Haha, GSkillz...
Look homes...What do you know abouts 10 Lines
Besides sniffing it in rows up your nasal bout 10 times
good flow here, but nothing hard hitting
Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot
Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot
Meh, decent bar, still nothing special
GSkillaz '05'? its '07' Now, Your Expire Date's Prudent
Don't get me wrong...
...You have an open mind - so open ideas pass through it
I liked this bar, better then your previous and had a witty punch
Don't Fuck around, or the boys will have a nigga's G Killed
Avoid other all drugs the only dope worth shooting is GSkillz
Meh, decent again, still nothing above average
You Over Came your fears but in vain for I'm ending your sequels
You must have a low opinion of people
...if you think they're even close to your equals.
Again the flow is pretty dope just it is presenting a weak punch..
g'luck mayne


Summary: I don’t see this as a really good verse. It’s on the line of decent and under average. Your flow was the only thing that was above average really, structure was good as well. Still more then flow is needed to win a text battle.

HardHittingBars-1
DecentBars-2
BarsNeedingImprovement-2
Points-2






If looks could kill it would be the only way you'd destroy...
In Shiest'a pic, dude looks like a retarded cow boy...
I’ll give this a decent/meh as opener, nothing compelling
Shiest when you attempt to spit, its more like drool...
Couldnt impress the kids on ice teez rappin school....
Lol, humorous, but still only decent…
I'm still waitin', son must have lyrical constipation....
My punches hit so hard your about to be 8-1 (eaten one)
MEH! This wordplay I find having minor flaws. The sound doesn’t exactly match up, so it’s slightly forced, making this nothing more then a decent bar
So watch him twitch son, call it a knuckle sandwich...
Gettin beat by your pops...
Is the only time you ever have a buckle in ya hand bitch!...
Decent again…Still haven’t seen anything that overly impressed me
Your style is like a man-wich, the way its sloppy joe...
Couldnt "stick to da heat" like you were playin hockey bro...
Decent again. Atleast the metta was good, still it didn’t reach the next level, harder hitting setups may bring it there though…


Summary: Wasn’t really mind boggled. The verse was better in a sense, mainly because of the maintaining of consistency. Every bar was decent/average. Though he didn’t have the best bar of the battle, in return he didn’t have the worst as well. Again this seemed like a battle were you tried not to loose, instead of trying to win.

HardHittingBars-0
DecentBars-5
BarsNeedingImprovement-0
Points-5



Overall:

Best use of bars-G
Flow-Shiest
Punches-Tie
Opener-G
Closer-G

Vote-This was a decent battle, Shiest having the best bars and the worse, and Gk just staying in there landing constant blows. And for that consistency I have to give him the win.

GKillaz05 05-19-07 08:45 PM

uppin............................................. ....

Dickard. 05-20-07 12:43 PM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
ive seen stick to da heat line before
the only time u ever have a buckle in ya hand before...and that retarded line is played as fuck..i even used it? lol

well idk just puttin out some feedback.....gkillaaz set it up baby 12 lines maximum

GKillaz05 06-04-07 05:52 PM

uppin............................................. ......

Mav. 06-05-07 03:55 PM

Voted For: Shiest

Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot
Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot
GSkillaz '05'? its '07' Now, Your Expire Date's Prudent
Don't get me wrong...
...You have an open mind - so open ideas pass through it

vs

Your style is like a man-wich, the way its sloppy joe...
Couldnt "stick to da heat" like you were playin hockey bro...

v/ for Shiest he had more creativity and his punches hit wikid hard and they were funny but some were played...no hate

GKillaz05 06-12-07 05:41 PM

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Valiant 06-15-07 03:20 PM

Bumping I guess...........................

Valiant 07-11-07 02:27 PM

would it hurt to vote?????????????????????????????????

M&rk 07-18-07 01:57 AM

Voted For: Shiest

Your a faggit in the scene, position'd well for a backshot
Fact. This PussyCat fumbles more balls than a Detriot Mascot
Don't Fuck around, or the boys will have a nigga's G Killed
Avoid other all drugs the only dope worth shooting is GSkillz
You Over Came your fears but in vain for I'm ending your sequels
You must have a low opinion of people
...if you think they're even close to your equals.
vs.
nothin

gkill only had that sloppy joe line but it was still terrible wordplay and not even close to writen in a correct style.

vote- val
by a landslide, anyone who votes the other way is a fuckin douche sandwich


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