Voted For: Big_O


You wanna battle me again kid, you should try stand up
Cause this right here is a joke, Now while your planned up
nah...
Lost to me once comin back for another
But I beat both you and the pussy of your mother
ok...
Your discrace to your nation I aint trying to hate
If there were all girls and you, we'd never Repopulate
lol funny...
You a homo thug and we all know this
Im just statin facts that wasnt even diss
ok..
Now I got 1 more line to ruin this chump
"YOUR FIRED" So says Donald Trump...
weak ending should of word it better...




This cat acting boss when the truth being 1-8 is your record,*
Take a look closer to home,its the voters who's getting bored.
nah...
What have you done to earn your place in the hall of fame?
oh i get it you admit your wack but trying to b funny is why ur tame.**
nah...
Fuck the excuses, your lame as fuck,
You could'nt pass my walls with an armoured truck.
^^ that shit sound so GAY.. i knew u was a female...

best defence is attack, so in your denial you call me gay ***
coz when you made your choise your gutted u chose the wrong way.
Your faggot partners gave you the code name BIG O,
Your secret is now out, so act like you m8's and lay LOW.
nah weak ending...

Voted For: dunmenuts

u beat him u beat him.. im just tryin to get my 50 character.. but yea, i vote for u.. fasho.. 1

This was feedback posted for dunmenuts
 

Ight i see ya but halla at ya boi staccz and vote on my battle

Voted For: dunmenuts

Duns got it.....
Decent flow but i followed....
Like the personals....

Up this shit peps.................. It needs to be closed+ forgotten.
Thanks for your time. PEACE

Voted For: dunmenuts

this was crap at best, uhm, voting for dunnenuts though because he didn't use fake personals, well, less of em anyways, he actually attempted real ones, but both need to elevate, pz

v/dun

Voted For: dunmenuts

v/ dun

check it...

big:
honestly, your verse and the bars within it were a bit played bro. your flow was choppy and your structure was off. do your work some justice...and try proof-reading your drop(s) before you drop them. trust me...it helps out tremendously. you were real close to using the lines that you did drop to their full potential, but i feel that you mis-worded them...so it hurt you. don't worry though. "hard work pays off...so i take no days off" (the alchemist). keep on keepin' on. it'll come to you. you got the potential. just show us that you have the lion heart needed to continue fighting. word. its all good my man. grind on.

dun:
at times your lines were a bit confusing, but you did what you needed to, which was out diss your opponent. fine tune your bars playboy. also, (i go through this too at times, but i find ways to work around 'em) if you have to explain your insults...it might be a good idea to look into other ways of droppin' them. beyond that, you earned the "w" in this match up. be careful though. you barely got this one. had the lil homie "big" come a bit sharper, who knows what the outcome could've been. just like i told lay...smash at all times fam. dont hold back.

as far as activity goes, keep up the good work folks. as far as the elevation goes, don't get down on yourselves. you both came to the right place to step your writing game up. stick to it. i want to see where you both can go, given a bit of inspiration and drive. take care battlecats. rock on...

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oner...


...the supe, crhyme sin '08