Voted For: Intangible

vote: intangible..
more direct and more creative punches and def harder hitting...
more well structure verse and more complex even thou that wasnt really complex at all...

and i felt hes verse as i spit rather then d523...

Voted For: D523

Both some what generic verses.. no hard hitting punches
d523 wins though.. his tang line was iiight.. I liked his a bit more.. keep improoving and learning guys

Voted For: Intangible

Basically, I'm giving this go Intang. because he came harder. Alot harder. That;'s basically all there is to it. More consistent, more punches. Maybe D would have put up a better fight if he had as many lines as Intang had. That's about it.

Voted For: Intangible

Honestly your verse was superior. It was easier to read, better puches, better flow, better everything.