shit really wasn't broken down in bite size pieces for the idiots that call them selves hip~hop artists... Had a nice use of an extended vocab in this...

People tend to say shit as elementary as they possibly can so that everybody listening will get what ever it is they're trying to convey... so 9 times out of ten most of the mainstream shit you hear a kindergardener could interput ... I liked that fact that someone would actually have to think a lil to listen to this...

put a beat, it could be more fun, nice lines, flows not bad, sometimes you sound like your tryin to say big words
good track

edit: i fucked up on this psot my bad

thanx for the feed everyone


lol ok cool was just wondering what u meant

to be honest i'm not gonna put a beat to this ...i did but i wasnt feelin it so.... :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:

its str8 for accapella iono..i wasnt realli feeling maybe its not my type of stuff....to random for me to like....but funny none the less

thanks for the Feed on my track u gleave me feed and ill Return the Favor aight

yeah no prob man thanx for the feed