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Voted For: Illmatic

Damn that was ill, i like when you spelled his name out, i heard that thong thing before to, Both were good verse for RV, TuNiT-7/10 Illmatic-9/10

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 

polllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllsssssss sssssss!

Voted For: TuNiT

liked tunits verse better. both had good structure. overall neither verse was too bad.

Voted For: Illmatic

ahm back now an am 'STILL-AT-IT' so lemme get started with 'ILLMATIC'
wack
u see i got an ILL-HABIT of MERKIN
so when u see diz verse ur shook an try sayin ''HEY MAN MY KEYBOARD AINT WORKIN''
decent
its cum you SLURPIN an takin dick in the 'BUM'
ima stick a knife ta da chest an engrave 'REDRUM'
played punch here
your stuck in a SLUM, cause ya verses dont HIT HARD
i'll leave ya LIPS SCARD like an operation gone WRONG
an nobody wants ta see your texts like oprah in a THONG
nope


Ain't a curse word could describe me i flow past damn,
and get it right i ain't a "young Buck" i'm a grown ass man
nah
you don't wanna battle you forced cause you due to rebuddle
i wonder "kweli's reaction" when he see's this "beautiful struggle"
decent
why even think about this verse, battles already been tooken
go ahead and post ya wack verse, i already stopped lookin
average
"get rich or die tryin" well i'm takin you wit me
you'll take nine to the spine remember nigga you ain't fifty
weak

overall both dorps were pretty weak here, but Illmatic
took this one, punches were just a little harder than Tunit’s
......tunit ur drop was weak, especially ur 1st line here,
overall u need to elevate more.. both

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 

Ayo hommi u still owe me a battle from way back when.......So nigga wat it is den

let uz vote vote vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: TuNiT

diz battle here was ok nothin real special stood out

Tunit- u need 2 work on ya structure, but a real good key right here

Illmatic - i like ya structure, but u need 2 work on it tha difference between a battle verse & an o.m. verse
it'll come in time keep workin on up

no hate

v// Tunit 4 better punches, & wordplay

This was feedback posted for Illmatic
 

why even think about this verse, battles already been tooken
go ahead and post ya wack verse, i already stopped lookin
DIS LINE WON IT...............
PUNCHES-ILLMATIC
CREATIVITY-ILLMATIC
ENDING LINE-ILLMATIC
COOL BATTLE................TUNIT YOUR BEST LINE WAS:
ahm back now an am 'STILL-AT-IT' so lemme get started with 'ILLMATIC'
u see i got an ILL-HABIT of MERKIN
so when u see diz verse ur shook an try sayin ''HEY MAN MY KEYBOARD AINT WORKIN''
THE REDRUM PART WAS WEAK...........JUS KEEP WORKIN WEAK ASS DUDE

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 

Bo-Bo-Bo....

Black Hand, Label We Are The Gang!....

MyNamezGrafhYa'll


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This was feedback posted for Illmatic
 

I don't really think naming yourself after a Nas CD is best path you could take.

I also don't really think naming yourself T Unit is that good of a path either.

Whatever, though.

This was feedback posted for TuNiT
 

ayy, oprah got that money tho, i'll see her in a thong anyday