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50Cal. 04-21-09 01:11 PM

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Originally Posted by In-Vision
mardus was better better writing..period...get over yourself cali....people have improved...you havn't...you're not good enough to be respected by a lot of people who used to respect you

no its not............

.Diabolic. 04-21-09 01:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by NOS
no its not............



*cough**cough*You cant write for shit.*cough*cough*

50Cal. 04-21-09 06:59 PM

^you could talk without coughing if you took the dick outta your mouth

XM 04-21-09 07:00 PM


The Ultimate Weapon
An Element Of Defense

Written By: XM

Part I

If there is magic on this planet, it is contained in water.
LORAN EISELY, The Immense Journey, 1957


The Battlefield: Endless Distruction Flows

From the horizon laid bodily fluids of enemies
Scattered blantantly amougst eachother were memories
Side by side, rows of hundreds they seem to bleed
Endless dreams of blood which holds their tendencies
The ground rumbles, earth quakes, from foul numbers
While down under vibrates with loud thunder
Clouds cover, warmth breeze and mild summers
Sound tumbles, moist showers and round slumbers

Shining Death: A Plague of Bronze Soldiers

Light glistened off the armor of warriors hearted colder
Eluminating with darkness, but hardly parted as vulgar
Many minions as statues their stature was slightly older
Plain sight upward vision, eyes never reaching the shoulders
No faces frowning upon them nor do they hinder emotion
While marching over the casualties casually 'til it's over
Bashing their feet on soil the spoils regarding service
Should surface, be ignored, materials serve no purpose
For what they seek is no contest of objects but an objective
Knowledge stands in perspectives a message must be accepted
One hundred thousand in record the counter is sort of pending

Alizia: "I find it hard to believe...they'll challenge my water bending"

The Ultimate Weapon: Alizia of The Mist

Such beauty and nonchalant, skin tone resembled flakes
Black hair with murky eyes, frost nails in hollow shapes
She stood but five eleven, with heels to add the inches
Body state is perfection but nothing you'll live to mention
Fore when she raised her defenses she left massive prints
And every step she took the whole camp had to quit
While trying to match her wit, as she grazes pass...
...yours with the horror she creates through pan's labrinyth
With a wave of her arms and her keen concentration
She could dense the air matter, cause extreme condensation
Her essence of technique forming countless of fashion..
...able to mold liquids to any three forms with her passion

*Alizia stands firm against an army of bronze soldiers, an arrow
from the distance is fired. Still she stands firm until dead silences
take over the rugged ends of the battlefield.

Alizia: "Liuid Barrier" she whispers.

The arrow becomes intertwined in her words.

Alizia: "So let us begin" she says.

...To Be Continued...


Last piece i wrote and this is with rust on me since ABL season is coming to an end.

and this below if your feed...so don't say im wack when one it took you damn near a week to realise this is going to be a short story piece containing 5 parts...and what i did was just the opening...

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Originally Posted by BETTER THEN U;6997629
this was a nice little piece.your vocab and wordplay were good and you brought out nice images in the piece.it was a little long winded but you needed that to get the whole thing out.maybe you can make it a story?that would be dope.overall it was enjoyable and i liked it.feed on one of my pieces..

XM 04-21-09 07:03 PM

If you such a better writer how bout you set up a topical battle right now here on RV you have the home field advantage.....too bad you usually sleep on the couch

.Diabolic. 04-21-09 07:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by NOS
^you could talk without coughing if you took the dick outta your mouth


i'd say the same for you but only with your ego..

shits humongous..like your cholesterol count.

lmfao

50Cal. 04-23-09 04:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mardu Entite
If you such a better writer how bout you set up a topical battle right now here on RV you have the home field advantage.....too bad you usually sleep on the couch

your a homo.set the audio battle up big mouth.

In-Vision 04-24-09 04:23 PM

so cali, what has been accomplished within c.s. since your return?


seems to me like you've done nothing productive for r.v....or for c.s.


good job


does anyone still wonder why i refuse to share anything with this guy?

XM 04-24-09 05:54 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by NOS
your a homo.set the audio battle up big mouth.


Told you i only battle in leagues, the battle i set up with you...

...well you didn't even bother to check in and couldn't stay unbanned long enough to even battle oh yeah your on the BOS list lmao

50Cal. 04-24-09 07:42 PM

^actually you got your homo little mod friend to ban me and i dont need to check in till tommorow you homo......
as for that fag invision.i have kept c.s active as i have always done.im dropping audio etc etc.your just sucking dick like usual.

XM 04-24-09 10:45 PM

Well i think i specifically said check in date was the same day...hmmm...yep thats what it says....plus your still banned on site 30 days lmao

ABL starts around that time

In-Vision 04-24-09 11:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by NOS
^actually you got your homo little mod friend to ban me and i dont need to check in till tommorow you homo......
as for that fag invision.i have kept c.s active as i have always done.im dropping audio etc etc.your just sucking dick like usual.




haha...active? because you and mardu are beefing and s.v. posts once in a while? please...


c.s. was wayyyy more active, "coincidentally" right before you got here.

XM 04-25-09 09:46 AM

I wouldn't say beefin Revo that's kinda of a serious word and i don't take him serious

50Cal. 04-25-09 04:30 PM

your gay^^
Quote:
Originally Posted by In-Vision
haha...active? because you and mardu are beefing and s.v. posts once in a while? please...


c.s. was wayyyy more active, "coincidentally" right before you got here.

wrong.i just came back actively a few months ago while r.v as a whole has been dead for over a year......and your a homo also.....

.Diabolic. 04-25-09 08:55 PM

Cali.. are you mad cus Nos had the black guy in his avy first?

seeing you like blacks..


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